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Posted: 14 years ago
good now let the silent guilty kill him he deserve it i hope Geet have wonderful career move on what comes a round goes a round let her enjoy now great update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am lovin it now be a good girl and update more parts
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa


baby u r so in love with maan i think.....that is why u r feeling bad for him even in this situation😊

So to hai....lol dunno why yaar but I still feel bad for the guy even though I shouldn't because he's being a jerk :-{ Chaddo!
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all I m very sorry! I have been super inactive.
I m loving your new FF ;D
I hate Maan now! ;/ seriously! I don't he loves that girl..
I really want a HOT guy for Geet...seriously! I want Maan to realize that he loves Geet...that girl is just her infatuation..
I hate that girl who is getting engaged to Maan..
I want to see a new Geet now..Strong, Independent & beautiful..
I want guys to see her beauty.. ;) I hate when she thought that maan left her because she isn't pretty..I HATE tHIS! :)
She should stay confident & continue with her studies ;D
& prove maan & Need a HOT for geet like maan..
SERIOUSLYYYY!!
Lovee how Geet is starting freshhh... ;) yayyy.
UPDTSOON pleasee..
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 27


It's dinner time... Everyone was on the dinner table all geets fab. Dadi cooked it with her own hand, specially for geet.

Dadi walks in to Maans room and asks him to come after Geet finishes her dinner. Everyone was asking him to stay way from her. Specially after everything. Everyone knew how close they were. So it for boths happiness....

Maan didn't come down for dinner at all and left early in the morning without breakfast...

Geet sat with Dadi and mum... Along with Ridzy and Sammera... Gossiping about her uni... How she met so many flittering boy....

Geet realized Maans absence and she decides to ask...
Geet: where is maan? .... Even his name seems to give her the creep nowadays...
Dadi: he is just too busy at his work. Don't worry you will see him sometime...
Geet smiles... Only she knew her pain. Pain of loosing her love. She loved him and still does...

Geet laid on her bed... She remembers when she first started her uni... It was impossible for her to fall sleep without his arm.... Tears started to roll down her eyes. Mum and dad changed everything in her room. Nothing is same. So she doesn't have any memory of maan....
She cried... A silent cry.
Geet: why can't I forget him? Why can't I just hate him?
She bites the pillow and hides her face.... Then she remembers the night before they left... There was no place in her body that wasn't touched by maan... She hated it. No place that he haven't kissed.... She regretted it. No place that he haven't loved... But it was never love. She was under falls illusion. It wasn't Sammera who was under falls illusion it was her. She felt cheated. Betrayed. She cried louder... She have been doing this mostly every night. But it was making wars as she knew maan is only few bricks way. There room was still next door to another...

It's 4 am... Geet makes her way to the kitchen. She couldn't sleep. She ran out of her sleeping pill...

She drunk some water from the fridge and then took an apple and made her way to the living room. Watching telly...

Suddenly her eyes fell on maan... He wasn't planning to come in front of her... But he also wanted something from the kitchen....

Geet looked at the telly back...
Maan: are you that mad? It's almost a month and you haven't said a word.
Geet: I am not mad at you. Why would I be? So don't think like that.
Maan: I know I h....
Geet: please maan. I have moved on. If you just don't talk about it I will be more then happy.
Maan: you sound really mature.
Geet: thanks.
She gets up and was about to walk way. Maan holds her by hand... She snaps...
Geet: don't touch me. If you want to say anything please do say. Buy don't touch me. I feel disgust with your touch.
Maan was really hurt with that. But probably that was nothing compare to what he have done to her.
Geet calms her self down: "anything you want to say."
Maan nodes negatively....
Geet walks off.

Next morning geet gets up early Dutta and Armaan picks her up... They were planning to go for a picnic.... As usual Dutta won't be able to make it. He just wanted to make sure geet was alright.

Geet: Dutta seriously... What kind of job do you do? I mean you always busy.
Dutta: nothing much. Just.... He couldn't speak as few cars stopped them... Birji runs up to him...
Dutta: what happen?
Birji: we have to leave now.
Dutta gives the key to Armaan and leaves. Picking Ridzy up.
Geet: what's with your brother? He dresses like a gangster. Acts like one. He have more guards then anyone I ever known.

Armaan: yea....


Geet: what type of job he have?

armaan: umm...

Geet: Don't tell me you don't know your own brother job.

armaan: i never asked!

geet: what type of brother are you??

armaan: a HOT sexy one.

geet slaps his head.

geet: you two are a weirdo. one bro i see 24 hours round ridzy and another maybe 1 hour with his family.

armaan: why you hitting me.

geet: do u have a job or live with your brothers money?

armaan: are you crazy? how much money does my mum wants?

geet: hmmm

armaan: i mean bro already gets billions... i dont need to work.


they picks ridzy up....


Geet: you like him? he is not determent at all.

Ridzy: thank you... do you think i could get beter?

geet: hell yea. better then this idiot.

armaan: oy hello.... i gave you permission to talk not insult me...



Next: geet maan and nakusha……... same dinner table'.
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats for 100th page yaar........
hey very sad update for me............
maan was really heartless ,how he😡 forget geet n love naku,it was disgusting abt maan
,i hate him.....i hate him..............i hate him...........................

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Posted: 14 years ago
ur stories are so addictin and i cant wait to read
ur updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ab mujhe aur bhi bura lag raha hai?! Oyi Oyi oyi
Feel awful for Geet and really bad for Maan....
Aur update kar rahi ho na? im awake just for ya!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
will maan and geet always be that cold towards each other now
hope not
con't soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yea....Happy now..
Awesome update..
Loved it...
Pls continue soom
Is there any others part coming up?

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