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Posted: 14 years ago
Aggghhhhhhhh....HATE Maan now..
Poor geet...:(
How can he love Nakusha?? Omg thats too much now..lol
Loved the update though
Thanks continue soon!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 26


Geet: just wait till you come. We will find you a perfect guy.
Geet laughs... Maan could here her loud laughter. He felt good. At least she was moving on.
Dadi: and we have extended your bedroom. And redecorating everything.
Geet: thank you so much Dadi. Only few more months then we will be together again. She said.
Maan stood outside. Really happy now. That she is at last moving on.

Maan looks downstair... Nakusha was decorating mums hand.
Maan looks at her lovingly...

2days before engagement... Maan walks in to the disco with Naku... Even in his busy sedual he took some time out...

Few more months have passed... It was geets day... She was returning home atlas....

Mum: aren't you GN come to pick her up?
Maan: I have a really important meeting mum.
Mum: at least today beta.
Maan: I know mum. But it's really important.
Mum smiles as you wish.

Maans and geets family was ok with there relationship long as they are happy.

Mum dad Dadi, Dutta, Sammera, Armaan, atual, Ridzy.... Everyone was there... Geet hugged them all tight. She was more then happy to be with them all. But there was no maan. She is fine. But she still loved him. She have no clue how will she face maan and nakusha in the same house.
Dadi read her face decided to do something to cheer her up. She didn't want her grand daughter to be upset because of the nalik grandson.

Everyone arrives home with ballon and gifts. Screaming there head off. They tried to make the situation happy as possible. As everything won't be like it was before. Geet will be seeing maan after 2 long years and maybe talk after 1 year!
Ridzy drags her in to her bran new extended room. Geet screams it was all her fab.
Geet knew well Dutta and Armaan have done this.
Geet hugs Dutta tight saying thank you. For the first time there was no maan. He liked that.

Datta smiles... He had all his worker waiting outside...
Dutta: I have to leave but you enjoy your self.
Geet smiles...

Dutta spoke to some guards outside to keep an strong eyes on her. Nakusha and maan walks in...

Dutta: I want strong security guards. No hassle.
Guards: yes sir.
Dutta: bijji... Tu dekhna Geet ko koi problem na ho. I won't tolerate.
Biji: ha bhao. Don't worry.
Dutta was about to leave bumps in to maan.
Maan: is everything alright? Is geet ok?
Dutta: she is fine. I am here to look-after her. So you don't worry.
Maan: ok.

Geet was screaming with all the gifts. She was on the top of the world today. She wore her usual short and a vest.
Armaan: do you have any friends that are HOT?
Geet: seriously! When you will change.
Ridzy gives him an angry glare.
Geet: Ridzy was there she is hot.
Armaan: I am getting bored of her.
Atul: shut up yar.
Sam: can you please open my gift...
Geet bursts out in laugh... She opens it... It was a sword and a beard.
Geet looks at her fuming.
Sam: I dare you to wear it.
everyone started to shout her name out loud.
Geet: fine! Fine!

Maan and naku walks in...
Naku: I should leave...
Maan: why?
Naku: I will be back 2 Moro. You enjoy your self.
Maan kisses her forehead and leaves.

Maan have no clue how to face Geet. Not after what he have done. He surly couldn't face her.
He could here everyone screaming. Shouting from her room.
He leans on the side of her door... She is 22 still acts like a child.... Still sweet and innocent.
Maan smiles. Geet didn't even notice him...

Armaan notices maan.... He pushes him way...
Armaan: please leave her alone for few days... Only Ridgy knows what she went through. Don't make it any difficult for her. She won't be able to stand the pain.
Maan looks at him in shock...
Armaan: just move ... I mean just stay way from her sight. You know how naive she is.
Maan looks at her laughing giggling. Enjoying her friends and family... He didn't want to hurt her further. He walks to his room and locks the door.

For the first time in 2 years he was feeling guilty. He wasn't sure why. But he felt guilty. They were so close... That is getting hard to even face her.


NeXT: a silent cry...

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update!
plz con't tonight... can't wait till geet comes back
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Posted: 14 years ago
CONGRATULATIONS on the 100th page babe!
Update the next parts soon. I'm trying to stay awake and read your updates without getting into trouble.
Isliye update now na!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finallyy !! but def worth the wait...i want Geet to become even bigger model than the stupid nakusha..atleast now i can sleep peacefully after reading the update hahhaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont tell me he is in love with nakusha......no ways once he sees his geet he will know what true love is....i cant believe he doesnt deserve geet.......geet should not give so easily to him.....anyways plzzzzz update soon.....want nakusha out of his life very soon.......plzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on 100th page!
loving this FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay I dont know why but I'm feeling bad for Maan. But I shouldnt be! Uff just post the next part up so I can decide
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg..I feel so bad in this situation
He hurt her so much..love Armaan and Dutta
Am so happy that she's got them to live for,to live with!
I felt so bad at all the parts where you wrote 'But no maan.'
Felt like crying...idiot!
He should die of guilt!
From what I'm saying,it so figures that I'm Geet ki jai ho..haha!
Thanks a lot yaar
Love you!

PS:Tu bhi na!Birthday ke din rulati hai...haha..lolz..just kidding,huh?
I'm so happy that u update so many times!
Love you!
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hate Maan,how could he do this to Geet😭.Geet should make him realise his mistake,how could he after being so close.He has not yet realise the true love.Hope doesn't break down infront of him.
Continue.............

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