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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13

lovely part... catn wait to see what happens...

please dont have any evil people in the FF.... its perfect this way with just nok jnok... and their talks and all...
your precap is scaring me.... i hope you dont separate Maaneet.... we had enough of that in the show already now that their together dont want them to be separated...
hope you post few more parts today.... like maybe 5 more 😉 😆


there are NO evil people. :D which is a good sign. everyone is nice…. EVIL FREE FF😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww nice update
reallllllyyyyyyy waiting for d next update d precap is invitingggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
thanks for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
eagar to know what happened after 2 years ????
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Posted: 14 years ago
gee im up for a shock, it makes the story more interesting !

Nice updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz till me what u mean by SHOCK OF our LIFE
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope its not a shock that give us heartache us Maaneet together great update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing parts... wowww..... camera hahahahahaa,...
are you uploading next part right now????
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Posted: 14 years ago
noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!
plz dont sep them plz plz plz plz😭
pleeeeeeeeeeease
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 24


2 years have passed...........

Geet decided to stay in Australia and maan was back in India.... His lifestyle have changed. He finished his degree... He decided to take over khurana industry.... He just started... 5 month in and he already was one of the hottest business man in India.... And spreading all over the world.
He had a millions of girls flowing after him. He was bright. Smart. Young and most importantly a richest famous business man. He became extremely busy in his life. He hardly gets time to talk to anyone. He completely changed... He was mature.

Mum dad and Dadi hardly gets enough time to spend with him. He is out for business party... Meeting.... Disco night after night. There was a huge change in him. His life doesn't revolt round geets happiness anymore. To be precise he hardly gets enough time to even talk to her. He is just too busy.

Geet calls and texs him now and then but he never replies as much. She wasn't sure what really happened to him. She was scared. She loved him. She always wonder what's really going on within him. But he never replies.

Sammera on the other hand can't stand maan anymore. She hates him to the core. She just hates him. Her love is still there for him but he changed. She always wonder how will Geet react when she sees this new maan. Only three years back she used to be so jealous of her but now not any more. She wonders... Only wonders. Knowing how different and naive geet is.

Maan and Dutta still kept an eye on her. She was protected in every way. Dutta haven't found anyone new in his life. He was still madly in love with Geet.


It's 11:00pm.
Maan quickly gets change and makes his way downstair.
Dadi: maan? Where are you going?
Maan: business party Dadi!
Dadi: at 11?
Maan: I will be late Dadi. Good night.

Dadi was extremely worried. Have they done mistake by sending him abroad. But he was fine with his business. In fact he was doing extremely well. He is at the top. Wining awards after awards.


Dad: There is a huge change in him...

dadi: you are right... is everything alright between him and geet?

dad: i don't know!

dadi: i spoke to her other day... she hardly talks to him...

dad: thats not like them!!

dadi: i know... but....



Maan walks in to the party. It's crowded. It's disco. He laid. Naku hugs him tight. You have made it.
Maan: yea.
Naku: how do I look?
Maan: amazing. He kisses her cheek.
Naku holds his hand and pulls him in to the dance floor.
Both starts to dance passionately...
Maan holds her tight by her waist. Kisses her cheek.
Naku: I am opening my own agency soon. You have to help me. She shouts on the top of the music.
Maan smiles: of course I will.
Naku: I love you so much. She kisses his lips...
Maan: I love you 2.
He holds her by waist tightly and picks her up. She couldn't feel the floor. She screams. Both laughs.

Nakus few other friends joins... And maans friends from USA.
Everyone was absence about maan and geets relationship. Except nakusha. But maan is the one who confessed his love to Naku. Maan being so handsome and a gentleman... She accepted. She only takes his and geets relationship as a friendship. He demands he is not in love with her... Not anymore.


Naku: i have spoken to dad...

maan: what did he say?
Naku: well its a surprise...

maan: hmm...

naku: you will see... she giggles...


linda: gys... we need a big party soon

dipika: defo... for your 1 year anniversary

naku: defo... of course....

maan smiles


Mum Dad and Dadi was in shock of there life.
Dadi: what are you talking about maan?
Nakusha stood at the background.
Maan: that's true Dadi.
Dadi completely disagree with him. She didn't like Naku at all. She was a model. nakushas khandan was alright but she already have chosen Geet. It was both of there decision.
Dadi: and Geet?
Maan: I will speak to her.
Dad: long as geet is alright... We are fine with this. He smiled.
Dadi: how could you 2 be ok with this?
Dad: they both are child. And are happiness is in there happiness.
Dadi just didn't understand them all. First Sammera... Then geet and now nakusha.

Dadi leaves the hall in anger.



next: geet heartbroken'..


ok'. there childish love is over'. atlast i am in to my main story lol'. ok'. here Maan and Geets real test will began'.. we will met many new chracter including Maans dad' we all will see our old miserable MSK back'. he have completly changed'. i amm sorrry'.


now Q is would geet understand??? how could maan do this to her??? xxxx


🤗 BIG HUG TO U… :D LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS,,, AND do press the LIKE BUTTON

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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