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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it to bits yaar!!!

Really cute!!!!

Finally Maaneet officially together!!!!!! Wooohooo...


Continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
keyama,
Good Morning! its a new day... hoping for loads of new updates for all ur FFs😉... i know i sound too greedy... but cant help it....u have me hooked on to this FF and Animosity😆.... plz update soon!..... waiting....
Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey finally loved it 2 gd finally the family are gone fix maans and geets new marriage hope they stay in contact and sam and dutta hope they are out now plz i hope maan and geet get engajend and not forgot each other as maan ids so exited but geets is upset
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Posted: 14 years ago
Keyama...when are you going to update dear?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Geet's dad has agreed.
I don't like dadi in ur ff.
Plzzz no misunderstanding between maneet.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago

***EXOTERIC LOVE***

part 21


Maan walks in his new room. The university was huge. He was already enjoying it. He dropped everything in his room. And walked out to have a look around.

He had a room of his own. Dad specially made sure he was alright. While geet extremely lucky maan just brought her a house. He just didn't like her being in a hostel. She won't be able to cope with glamours life she have been living in. She never really looked at prize when she brought stuff. Maan always used to buy her anything she wanted. Maan thought it must be tough for her to settle in.

Sam on the other hand was shocked by the news that he broke there engagement. She hated Geet to the core. She just hated her even more....

Maan met Nakusha. She was one year older then him but in same class. She is also very rich. Her dad is a business tycoon and one of khuana industries clint. Maan became more close friend with her as time went by…


Nakusha A rich business mans daughter… a Fashion designer and model her self.



Nakusha: I still remember the day you asked me... how to kiss.
Maan choked on his drink.
Naku: are you two still together?
Maan nodes.
Naku: she is so lucky.
Maan: thanks. I am trying to move her uni here! Hopefully by next year.
Naku: why she chose to go to Australia?
Maan: dad decided for her.
Naku: dad?
Maan: Geets mum and dad look after me and khurana industry for me.
Naku: is it that's why you with her?
Maan: no! We always have been together.
Naku: have you ever tried with other girl?
Maan: no! She will kill me. She probably have spy behind my back now. He looks round the field...
Naku giggles: what about you?
Maan: I have security camera in her house and car. Detector in her car as well. And emergency tele to police. And...
Naku just looked at him in shock...
Naku: bas bas bas...
Maan: and I think datta already put 100s of guards round her house. He smiled.
Naku: datta?
Maan: he loves her. There engagement were about to be fixed but we were too close. So eventually we have decided to get together.
Naku: lucky girl.
Maan smiles: she is too naive. We all worry about her. Dad transfer her uni to Australia by accident... Other wise she was about to come with me.
Naku: I am jealous of her.
Maan: so am I. Mum dad and dad probably called her millions of time now. Then he shows his phone... 0 miscall.
Naku bursts out in laugh.
Naku: have she call?
Maan shows her the Tex and how much they have been talking...
Naku: I doubt she have been talking to them as much... It clearly shows out of 24 hours she have been talking to for 18 hours and rest 6 hours on tex.
Maan smiles...
Maan: I should leave. I need to attend my lecture.
Naku: we are having a small party... Do you want to join?
Maan: let me ask g.... He stopped. There was no Geet here.... He is so used to asking geet everything... She even chose what he would have wearer each day...
Maan: yea sure.
Naku smiles....

Dutta sat in his rocking chair. A gun in his hand. He observed the gun very well. Geet have rejected him. He knew well why! But he hated maan. He hated how lucky he was. He had a perfect life. Perfect everything. He was the good boy of the family... Where his whole family is planning... Or more like expecting him to take over everything but... But he didn't care about that. All he cared about was that he have taken way his love. He have taken way his most expensive most loved Geet. Geet wasn't his. He couldn't say much as geets happiness matters to him the most. And if she wanted to be with him... So be it.
Dutta looks at the window that lead to the big garden... He was heart broken. He couldn't think very well. Life out in this world is not fair.... Not fair at all. You have to be extremely lucky to get whatever you want... Life is not a fair game...

Dutta walks out...
Mum: what happen?
Dutta: I have told you tai, don't stop me when I am going out.
Mum: Dutta... Please. At least think about your sisters and brother. I know Geet have broken your heart big time. But... If you break down like this what will happen to your family?

Dutta leaves straight way...

He drove fast ad he could... He went out of deli. He couldn't stand staying way from geet. It was best for her safety... But he couldn't console his heart. He loved her too much.

Geet settled in her house really well... It was two bedroom banglow.... With swimming pool...she looked at the camera.
Geet: are had ho giy. What does Dutta and maan think of them self. She looked outside. Security guards.

She called maan...

Geet: why there are so many security camera?
Maan: for your safety of course.
Geett: are you mad? All my friends were like really scared of my house now.
Maan: friend? Who friend? What friend? He turns on the live telecast of her house. (LOL) I don't see anyone.
Geet: you watching me from there?



Next: MAAN talking to his HOT SEXY GF…


hay you all… sox for lateness… well here comes some more parts… LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS LOVE YOU ALL

xxxx maybe 3 more… coming up

:Dxxxx


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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha maan camera all round her house and guards. Lol. And he was watching her all the way from USA. Lol.
That's amazing.
Haha
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha..he's crazy...so much of security...lol
woah..who's the hot sexy gf?Geet or some idiot??I hope not!
Thanks for the cuteupdate
Love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the update./. please update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!!! please continue soon!!
very cute!!
I hope that maan/geet don't change too much!!
poor dutta!!
please continue soon!!!!!!!
thanks,
Sanju

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