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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
good sensible ridz

idot shanky

lovely part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
awesome!!!
ridz u tell shanky
why is he such a kamina man
like everywhere
anyways armaan's family is so so so cute, sweet and understanding
i love those ppl
and wow AR so cute together in the last part
always waiting for more... so contniue soon


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hey nikki
thanks for comments😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
good sensible ridz

idot shanky

lovely part


hey jiyaa
yes sometimes ridzi alsoo act sensible
and thanks for comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
update pls pls pls pls pls i am loving this fanfiction :D its amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
this is serously like the best ff :)
Edited by shivi17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
HEY SHIVI
THANKS FOR COMMENTS
AND YES I WILL UD TODAY AROUND TILL 12.30
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
PART 11
FINALLY ARMAAN LEFT RIDDHIMA AND SHE GOES TO DOWNSTAIRS WHERE SHE GOES TO PRERNA
AFTER TAKING BLESSINGS FROM HER
RI:''LAYIYE AUNTY MAI HELP KAR DUN''
PR:''RIDDHIMA BACHE AB MAI APKII MAA HUN''
RI:''JI MAA''
PR:''AUR RAHII BAT KAM KI TO VO APKOO HI SAB SAMBHALNA PAR ABHIE NAI,KCH DIN BAD''
RI:''PAR MAA''
ANU:''REHNE DO RIDDHIMA AJ TAK HUM ISE NAI JEET PAAYE AUR MOREOVER BETAA APKOO KAM KARNE KI JARRORAT NAI HAI,VAISE VO NALAYAK OOTHA KI NAI?''
RI:''JI PAPA ARMAAN OOTHH GAYYE HAI ABHIE ATE HONGE''
HEARING THISS RAHUL WHO IS DRINKING JUICE JUSTT SPLIT IT OUT
ANU:''RAHUL YE KYA PAAGLAPAN HAI?''
RA:''SORRY DAD PAR YE RIDZI ARMAAN KO JAISE IZZAT DE RAI HAI,MUJHE TO GEHRA SADMA LAGAA''
AR:''OYE RAOOOOOL CHUPP KAR AGR TU IJJAT KE KAABIL NAI HAI TO ISKAA MATLAB KYA KOI BHI IJJAT KE LAYAK NAI HAI.AUR YE RIDZI KYA HAI AB VOO TERII BHABHI HAI OSE VOHII BULAA,KYOON MOM?''
PR:''HAN RAHUL BEHAVE''
RAHUL POUTED AND
RI:''NAI MAA RAHUL PEHLE MERAA DOSTT HAI,AUR VOHII RAHEGA AUR HUMEE FORMALITY NAI CHAHIYE HAI NA RAHUL,PAPA MAI THEEK KEH RAI HUN NA''
RA:''DEKHA RIDZI HI MERII SACHI DOST HAI''AND HE PLACES HIS ONE HAND AROUND RIDZI'S SHOULDER AND ARMAAN CAUGHT HER FROM ANOTHER SHOULDER
AR:''OYE VO MERII BIWII BHI HAI''
ANU:''MERII PYAARI BAHUU''
AND HE PLACED HIS HAND ON HER HEAD
AND RIDDHIMA IS DELIGHTED SEEING SHE GETS SCH A WONDERFUL FAMILY AND
PR:''MALLIK FAMILY KA REUNION HO GAYYA HOO TO NASHTA KAR LE PLEASE''
ALL:''YES BIG BOSS''
RI:''MAA''
PR:''HAN BETAA BOLOO''
RI:''MAA VO MEREE PAS SINDOOR NAI HAI TO,KYA AP MUJHE''
PR:''AREYY HAN BETAA ISMEE POOCHNE KI KYA BAT HAI,HAN ARMAAN JAO''
ARMAAN BCK WID SINDOOR AND
PR:''ARMAAN TUM HI BHARO RIDDHIMA KI MAANG HUM YEH TO DEKHH LE KAM SE KAM''
RA:''PAR DHAYAN SE KAL KI TARAH RIDZI KO SINDOOR SE NAHLA MAT DENAA,OK''ALL CHUCKLED
AR:''RAOOOL'' AND HE FILLED HER MAANG AND
AR:"'RIDDHIMA TUM APNAA BAG VAGARAH LE AAO NAI TO SANJEEVANI JAANE ME DER HOGII
RIDDHIMA LEFTT AND
AR:''MOM APKOO TO PTA HI HAI HAR LADKII KE SHAADI KO LEKAR KCH ARMAAN HOTE HAI PAR RIDDHIMA KE SAARE ARMAAN FEEKE PAD GAYYE,KYA HUM KCH RASMEIN KAR OSE KHUSHI NAI DE SAKTE?''
PR:''HAN ARMAAN MAI BHI TUMSE YEHII KEHNE VAALI THI KAL SATURDAY HAI TO HUM RIDDHIMA KI MUH DIKHAI KI RASAM RAKHTE HAI''
ANU:''AUR OOSKE BAD EK PARTY''
ALL AGREED AND
RI:''ARMAAN CHALO I AM READY''
AR:''HAN CHALOO''
RI:''BYE MAA BYE PAPA HUM CHALTE HAI''
ANU&PR:''BYE BETAA BYE''
SANJEEVANI
THEY WERE AT NURSE STATION AND SHE NOTICED HER CHUDDA AND FEELS LITTLE BAD,BUT SHE HUGGED HER
AFTER THT ALL WERE CONGRATULATING BTH THE COUPLES
SH:''SO DR.MALLIK APKII ITNII HIMMAT KI AP HOSPITAL BHI AAA GAYYE,HATS OFF TO U''
HEARING IT RIDZI IS IN FULL ANGER AS SH IS INSULTING AR IN FRONT OF WHOLE THE HOSPITAL AND ARMAAN IS SILENT BECAUSE OF HER BUT SHE
RI:''DR.GUPTA ARMAAN NE AISII KOI GALTI NAI KI HAI JISKE LIYYE OSE MUH CHUPANA PADEE''
SH:"TO EKK HI DIN ME MAI PAPA SE DR.GUPTA HO GAYYA
RI:''RISHTE APNEE KHUDD TODEE HAI''
SH:''RIDDHIMA TUM IS GALTI KE LIYYE PACHTAOGI''
RI:''SORRY DR.GUPTA ITS DR.RIDDHIMA MALLIK AND AGR AISII GALTI KE LIYYE MUJHE PACHTANA PADEE TO MAI AISII GALTI ROJ KARNE KO TAYAR HUN''
AFTER THT SANJEEVANI LOCKER ROOOM
AR:''RIDDHIMA TUMHE SIR SE AISEE NAI BAT KARNI CHAHIYE THI OONHE BOORA LGA HOGAA''
RI:''ARMAAN TO VOO TUMSE AISEE KAISE BAT KAR SAKTE HAI.TUM CHUPP THE ISKAA YE MATLAB NAI KI VO KCH BHI BOLENGE AUR VAISE BHI ARMAAN KAL TAK MAI BHI YEHII CHAHTI THI KI VOO MEREE PYAAR KO SAMJHE PAR AB NAI OONKE KAARAN TUMNE MUJHE CHODD DIYYA TAKII MAI OONSE DUR NA HO JAONN,AUR VO HAI KI TUMHE SAMJHNA NAI CHAHTE''
AR:''PAR RIDDHIMA MERII''
RI:''NAI ARMAAN PLS MUJHE DUTY PAR JAANA HAI BYE''
AR:''AREYY YAR RIDDHIMA''
BUT SHE DID NOT LISTEN
IN LUNCH TIMEE
MU:''TOAPKII RAT KAISE BEETI''
AN:''YAR MUSKI TU''
MU:''MUJHE PTA HAI ATUL NE JYADA TANGG NAI KIYYA HOGAA HE IS SO SWEET,PAR ARMAAN'
ANJII BLUSHED AND RIDZI IS SHOCKED THT THEIR FIRST NIGHT JUSTT GOES


TILL THN ALL BOYS COMING AND ARMAAN IS YAWNING SO
MU:''RAAT KA NASHA ABHIE AANKH SE GAYYA NAI''
AR:''OYE CHUPP KAR BOL RAHUL ISE''
RA:''HAN MUSKAAN,
KYOON TAANG KAR RAI HAI
TERA NASHELA BADAN BAAHON NE CHODA NAI''
AR:''OYE SHARM KAR YE HOSPITAL HAI''
RI:''MAI CHALTI HUN MUJHE KCH JAROORI KAM HAI BYE''
AR:"JAAAN''
RI:''BYE''
AR:''DEKHA CHALI GAYYI NAA VO''
AT NIGHT RIDDHIMA RETURNED HOME BY HERSELF
AND
RI(TO HERSELF): ''ARMAAN NE KYA KYA SOCHA HOGAA AUR MAI BAS APNEE HI GUM ME OOSKI CHAHAT KO DEKHH HI NAI PAI.OOSNE JI KIYYA SIRFF MEREE LIYYE KIYYA AUR MAI PAGAL PTA NAI APNEE GAM ME APNEE JEEVAN SAATHI KO HII BHULL GAYYI.HAMARI NAI ZINDAGI KI PEHLII RAT MAINE AISEE HI JAANE DI''
AND DUE TO HER THOUGHTS SHE HIT WID SIDE TABLE AND DUE TO THT GLASS FELLS AND BREAKS AND SHE START PICKING IT UP AND DUE TO SUDDEN DOOR KNOB,SHE HURTS HER HANDS
AR:''KYA HAI KOI KAM DHAYAN SE KAR BHI SAKTI HO TUM DEKHO KITNA KHOON NIKAL RAHAA HAI''

Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thanks for he pm! i loved it! ooh does this mean we get the suhaag raat mazaa in the next part :D hehe lol

ah update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice story
continue soon
pls add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
hey thanks for he pm! i loved it! ooh does this mean we get the suhaag raat mazaa in the next part :D hehe lol

ah update soon!!

hey ashu
thanks for comments
and next part may be today

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