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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: niki.5

hey DARK_DESIRE

thanks for comments
😊

ur welcome niki
and guess wat my name is nikki aswell😉😆😆
i hope u r updating soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
part 9
somedays passed and now its time for atul and anjii'smarriage,everybody is bsy in prepration. armaan and riddhima is more thn happy,now thy are together,doing work and offcourse doing romance.and thy decide to talk shashank about their relation after anjii's marriage.
an:''ridzi armaan ko dekhti rahegi ya jaimala bhi pehnaygi''
riddhima cme out frm her dream and she justt embrassed as she caught red-handed looking at love of her life who is now going to be her husband in few seconds.
''taare hai barati, chandni hai barat, saaton phere honge,
ab hongee hathon me lekar haath
jeevan-saathi hum, deeya aur baati hum,
jeevan-saathi hum, deeya aur baati hum,''
and they complete their phere and armaan ties manglsutra around her neck and put sindoor in by asiding her maangtika,as when he places sindoor some fells on riddhima's nose
an:''matlab ridzi armaan tujhe bht pyaar karega''
ar:''kyoon anjii tumhe koi doubt hai?''
and after tht
an:''ridzi please uth na aj merii mehndi hai aur tu abhie tak so rai hai''
ridzi wakes after anjii shakes her and thn she realize she is seeing dream of her wedding with armaan.
and she smiles
anjii's mehndi go well and ridzi also places mehndi in her hands
and when she looked at her hands, the colour of mehndi is totally black and she hide her face in her hands remembring armaan
ar:''jaaan let me see ur hands na''
ri:''armaan tum yahan''
ar:''ab please faaltu bat nai mujhe dekhna aur apnaa nam bhi''
riddhima nodded in disagreement and atul comes
at:''armaan mere bhai mujhe bht dar lag rahaa hai kal merii shaadi hai''
ar:"'yar terii timing''
ri:''mujhe kch kam hai mai chalti hun''
marriage day shashank calls riddhima
sh:''riddhima maine tumhe kahaa tha ki tumhari shaadi tumhari marji se hi hogii,bt now u hve to marry and the boy is dr.siddhant modi after anjii's marriage u have to marry,no arguments''
hearing tht riddhima shattered and she ran to her rooom and cried bitterly
in evening she calls armaan
ar:''oho itnii jaldi mujhse milne ki''




and she justt hug him and cried her heart out
ar:"
shhhh jaaan kya hua
hai,mujhe bto''
and riddhima tells him everything
hearing it armaan tensed and he helds her wrist and start leaving
ri:''armaan mujhe kahan le jaa rahee ho mujhe?''
but armaan keeps on going
and when he reached at mandap,everone saw dem but before tht
armaan fill her maang wid sindoor,her hair is all covered wid sindoor and he took mangalsutra from the thall which is placed beside pandit and places around her neck




''lagan beetne se pehle reet karle poori,
maang se sindoor ki rahee na koi doori,
vedi yehii mandap yehii
yehii ghr aangan
yehii sindoor laga dun mujhe haq hai
mai dulhan tujhko bna lun mujhe haq hai

everybody is shocked and riddhima justt touch her head and her neck
si:''dr,shashank ye sab kya hai?''
sh:''sid merii bat sonoo, riddhima ki shaadi tumse hi hogii''
ar:''sir app bhul rahee hai riddhima ab shadi-shuda hai''
sh:''armaan ye shaadi ko hum nai maante,vaise bhi tumne merii betii se jabrdasti shaadi ki hai,tumhe to mai ''
an:''ridzi tu kahan khoii hai dekhh sab armaan ko doshi man rahee hai''
and dr.shashank comes and caught armaan's wrist in order to get him out from house
Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
...........
OMG 😲
wat happens next
m outta breath m holding it in
shit this is so unexpected
wats gunna happen next...
omg omg omg
plzzzzzzzzz update
break the suspense
ShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShockedShocked
m so speechless at this point and sooooooooooo shocked
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
...........
OMG 😲
wat happens next
m outta breath m holding it in
shit this is so unexpected
wats gunna happen next...
omg omg omg
plzzzzzzzzz update
break the suspense
😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
m so speechless at this point and sooooooooooo shocked





hey niki
thanks for comments
and i give u another part around 12.30
till thn keep reading
nikita(nikki)😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome ud
cont soon


thanks for comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
idot ridz

kaminaa shanky

stupid sid again

rest of the part os gr8
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
idot ridz

kaminaa shanky

stupid sid again

rest of the part os gr8


hey jiyaa
thanks for comments
agreed stupid sid
but for ridzi u r gonna love her in next part
nikita
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
2nik plz agree with me kamina shanky lolz

k wait for ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
hey di,
just love your ff.👏⭐️👏 intazaar ke baad pyar ka maaza hi kuch aur hota hai.😉
i just love the way armaan claim ridzi his forever by filling her maang with sindoor and putting mangalsutra around her neck. 😳now no one can apart them from eachother.
continue soon and i don't think i have to tell u that but still don't forget to pm me.
love
sonu😊
Edited by soul_desire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
i hate shankyyyyy..... aagh he's such a kamina.....
waiting eagerly 4 d nxt part...

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