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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
nice story
continue soon
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hey aswini
thanks for comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
HEY FRIENDS THANKS TO ALL THT ALL OF U ARE LIKING
INTEJAR AR SHORT STORY

AND MY ANOTHER FFS ON AR,IF U WANNA READ HERE IS LINK
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

hey dear...jst read ur ff..😊

its fantastic niki 👍🏼.... liked da concept n emotions of AR r presented nicely...⭐️

keep writng n plz add me in ur pm list...

nw em goin t read ur anothr ff...n comment on it soon...😉

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sania

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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

hey dear...jst read ur ff..😊

its fantastic niki 👍🏼.... liked da concept n emotions of AR r presented nicely...⭐️

keep writng n plz add me in ur pm list...

nw em goin t read ur anothr ff...n comment on it soon...😉

update soon

love

sania




HEY SANIA

THANKS FOR UR SWEET COMMENTS


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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey nik di,
nice part.👏
love the way malliks were treating ridhimaa.😊
hope rahool ko jyada gahra sadma na laga ho.😆
the highlight part for me was the way ridzi stand for her love her armaan against her father.⭐️⭐️⭐️
intern gang teasing ar that's nice.😉
finally ridhimaa realises her responsiblities towards armaan.😳
continue soon.
love
sonu😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 12

ar:''kya hai dhayan kahan hai tumhara koi kam dhayan se nai kar sakti tum,dekho kitnaa khoon beh rahaa hai''
and he start sucking her finger
ri:''armaan mai theek hun dekho''
ar:''tum to chupp hi rahoo aisee hi sanjeevani se vaapis aaa gayyi,vo bhi akele meraa intejar nai kar sakthi thi.bas reception par message chodd diyya mai jaa rai hun ye bhi koi bat hui?'
ri:''armaan sorry vo mai bas aisee hi aaa gayyi''
ar:''ok first and lastt timee''
ri:''yes boss armaan tum fresh hokar aao mai khana lagati hun''
ar:''nai mujhe bhookh nai hai''
thn there is knock on the door
pr:''armaan ye lee teraa aur riddhima ka khana''
ar:''kya riddhima tumne abhie khana nai khaya?''
ri:''par maa ap oopar kyoon aai khana lekar hum neeche aaa jaate''(ignoring armaan's quetion)
pr:''koi bat nai betaa ap khana khaoo mai chalti hun''
and armaan glares at her
ar:''ab app mujhe btane ka kashat karengi apne khana kyoon nai khaya abhie tak''
ri:''armaan''seeing his frowned face she hug him
ri:''ok naa i am sorry''
after eating dinner
armaan caught riddhima's wrist and
ar:''ab mujhe btaogi bat kya hai?''
ri:''kaunsi bat armaan''
ar:''tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum mujhse chupa sakti ho''
and he cupped her face in his both palms, saw tears in her eyes
and riddhima hug him tightly and start crying
ar:''riddhima kya hua?''
and her sobs increased and armaan caresses her bck in order to calm her and after sometime
ar:''riddhima jaaan mujhe please bto tum kyonn ro rai ho?kissi ne kch kahaa kya?please bto jaaan''
ri:''armaan i am sorry please mujhe maf kar do''
ar:''sorry par kis liyye jaaan''
ri:''armaan maine kal hamari zindagi ki pehli rat aisee hi jaane di,mujhe maf kar do,tumhari saari hopes tod di maine,mai bht boori biwi hun''
ar:''shh jaaan pehle tum ronaa bnd karoo aur mujhe physical relation se koi farak nai padta.jaaan hum to apnii aatma se ekk hai to bas vaise bhi humee kam se kam ek doosre ke liyye to samjhota nai karna chahiye aur rai bat physical relation ki ooske liyye saari zindagi padii hai.aur merii jaaan to duniya ki bestt biwi hai khabrdar jo ose kch kahaa kyonki mrs. mallik is bestt wifey.
he gently kiss her hands
ar:''aur vaise jab tak tum meree saath ho merii zindagi ki har rat aur din khoobsurat hai na?''
she nodded and
ar:''vaise agr mrs. mallik apkoo apkee naughty husband chahiye to vo bhi abhie mill jayenge'' she hits him on his chest
ar:''areyy abhie to badii jaldi ho rai thi aur ab''
and he picks her and places on bed and he laiddown over her and slightly pushed her long jet hair aside and start kissing her and riddhima's hands in armaan's hairs
suddenly armaan's phone rang and
ar:''good job bro''he ended the call and
after hung up the phone
ar:''riddhima jaaan ab tum so jao''
ridzi did not understand his sudden change but she did not ask anything and places her head on armaan's chest and armaan kissed her on her forhead and they sleep.
next morning riddhima woke up and saw armaan is not there,
she is confused when she heared knock on the door,she opens the door,its prerna
pr:''riddhima betaa aj apkii muh dikhai hai ap jaldi se tayar ho jayiye, tab tak ap niche mat aayeiga aur betaa abhie anjli aur muskan aaa jayengi apkii hlp karne''
ri:''ji maa maa vo ar''
she wanna ask but cnt and prerna leftt from there
thn her gazee fell in dressing table there was beautiful dress and letter
hey jaaan
sorry apkoo binaa mille jaa rahaa hun, vo kya hai na ajj merii pyaari , sundar aur darling biwii ki muh dikhai hai to mai thoda bsy hun.par please ap yehii dress pehniyga''
love
armaan
riddhima is touched tht armaan is doing all this only for her
she quickly rushed to washroom,and in between muski and anjii comes
but whn ridzi comes she is struggling wid dori of her choli and whn she heared footsteps she thought anjii was there
ri:''achaa hua di ap aaa gayyi ye dorii nai bandh rai please bandhiye na,mujhse nai ho rahaa''
and person touches her bare back
ri(whispers):''armaan''
armaan start tieng her dorii,when his fingers touched her bck riddhima's heartbeat increased
ar:''vaise meraa man nai kar rahaa ise bandhne ka''he whispers in her ear
and bit her ear and his hands are touching her waist and riddhima puts her hands on his hands. and armaan start kissing her ears her back and he twirled her so tht she is now face to face, she closed her eyes and armaan kissed her eyes,cheeks and he proceed to her lips whn he heared knock
and he moved aside and
mu:''oye hero tu yahan kya kar rahaa hai bol?''
ar:''yar ye meraa kamra hai''
an:''oh par abhie ap allowed nai hai yahan jeeju''
ar:''anjii yar mai to apnee kapde lenee aayaa tha''
an:''han to lo aur jao''
armaan pouted and leftt from there
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P1:''SIRFF EK HI HAI JO OSS TAK YE SHAGUN PAHUNCHA SAKTA HAI AUR KOI NAI''
P2:"TO APP OONKI BAT KAR RAHEE HAI SAHII KAHAA''
P1:''HAN MAI OONHE KEHTA HUN''
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DOWNSTAIRS
RIDDHIMA COMES AND SETTELED AND ARMAAN IS JUSTT MESMERIJING WID HER BEAUTY
PR:''ARMAAN TUM PAGAL HO GAYYE HO,MUH DIKHAI LADKIYON KI HOTII HAI LADKOO KI NAI''
AR:''TO MAA ITNEE LOG AGR INHONE MERII JAAAN KO NAJAR LGA DI TOO,DAD BOLOO NA MOM KO MUJHE RIDDHIMA KE SAATH BAITHNA HAI''
ANU:''OYE MUJHE GHR SE NIKLWANA HAI KYA?''
AR:''MOM PLEASE NA'
PR:''ARMAAN JAO YAHAN SE TANG MAT KAROO HUMEE FUNCTION SHURU KARNA HAI''
AR:''NAI MOM MAI NAI JAAONGA''
MU:''YAR HERO KYOON BAHAS KAR RAHAA HAI MOM NE KAHAA NA TU NAI AAA SAKTA TO NAI''
AR:''YAR MUSKI ANJII TUM LOG TO MERAA SAATH DO DEKHO MERII RIDDHIMA MEREE VINAA BOR HO JAYEGI''
PR:''ARMAAN OUT NOW''
SEEING HIS CHILDISH FACEE ONLY ONE PERSON MELTED THT IS OUR RIDDHIMA AND SHE
RI:''MAA''
PR:''HAN BETAA BOLOO''
RI:''PLEASE RUKNE DIJIYE NA INHEE''
MU:''OYE RIDZI TU ISKII BHOLI SI SHAKAL PAR MAT JA'
RI:''NAI MUSKI MAI''
PR:''PAR RIDDHIMA YE RASAM LADKIYON KI HOTII HAI,SAB TUMHE AASHIRWAD DENGE BACHE,TO''
RI:''PAR MAA MAI AISEE AASHIRWAD KA KYA KARONGI JISME ARMAAN HI MEREE SAATH NA HOO''
RA:''RIDZI YE TOO PAGAL HAI''
AR:''OYE RAOOOL TERII SHAADI HONEE DE BTATA HUN''
RA:''NAI NAI SORRY YAR MOM MAN JAYIYE NA PLEASE''
ANU:''HAN PRERNA PLEASE''
SEEING RIDDHIMA'S FACE AND HER LVE FOR ARMAAN
PR:''THEEK HAI, TU ISS SE ITNAA PYAAR KARTI HAI''
SHE SMILES AND
PR:''JAA KHADA KYOON HAI BAITH''
AR:''U R BESTT MOM IN THIS WHOLE WORLD LVE U''


Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cute update i like it :) and i am the first to commebt :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
cute update i like it :) and i am the first to commebt :D


hey shivi
thanks for comments
and yes u r the first one who commented

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