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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
this story is soo cute yaar!
love it very much
continue soon plzz
waiting to read more
Edited by Dark_Desire - 14 years ago
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RI:''ARMAAN YE MERAA SABSE ACHAA BIRTHDAY HAI MAI ISE KABHIE NAI BHULUNGI''
AR:''HAN JAAAN YE MERII ZINDAGI KA BHI KHASS DIN HAI''
RI:''ARMAAN AB KABHIE MUJHE AKELA MAT CHODNA VARNA MAI TUMHARE BINAA MAR JAONGI''
ARMAAN PLACES HIS HAND ON HER MOUTH
AR:''AISAA MAT BOLOO JAAAN MAI BHI TUMHARE BINAA NAI JEE PAONGA.PAR DR.SHASHANK ?''
RI:''ARMAAN HUM OONHE MILL KE MANAYGE''
ARMAAN NODDED
NEXT DAY SANJEEVANI
NURSE STATION
BOTH AR LA8
KE:''DR.ARMAAN AND DR.RIDDHIMA U R LA8''
AR:''SORRY MAM VO MERII VAJAH SE DR.RIDDHIMA LA8 HO GAYYI,VO ACTULLY MAI''
RI:''NAI MAM DR.ARMAAN MERII CAR PARK KARNE ME HLP KAR RAHEE THE IS LIYYE LA8 HO GAYYE''
(BOTH ARE TRYING TO PREVENT EACH-OTHER FROM DR.KEERTI'S PUNISHMENT)
AR:''RIDDHIMA PLEASE MERII GALTI HAI YAR''
RI:''NAI ARMAAN MERII''
AR:''RIDDHIMA JHOOTH MAT BOLOO MAINE KAHA NA KI MERII GALTI HAI TO MERII HAI''
RI:''ARMAAN JHOOTH TUM BOL RAHE HO''
AR:''TUM''
RI:''TUM''
AR:''MAINE KAHA NA TUM TO TUM''
RI:''NAI ARMAAN TUM''
KE:''DOCTORS,AP DONOO KO HI PUNISHMENT CHAHIYE NA TOO PATHLAB NOW BCK TO WRK''
AND SHE LEFTT
AN:''KYA RIDZI KAL TK TOO ISKII YAD ME RO RAI THI AUR AJ JHAGRA KAR RAI HAI,TU PAGAL HAI''
RI:''DI''
RA:''ANJII CHODO INKAA TO COLLEGE SE YEHII KAM HAI LADNA HAI EK-DOOSRE SE,AUR ''
NI:''PYAAR BHI EK-DOOSRE SE''
AR:''HAN TO TU TOO AISEE BOL RAHAA HAI JAISE MUSKAN SE KABHIE JHAGRA HI NAA KARTA HO,EK MINUTE RIDDHIMATUMNE ANJII KO DI KYONN KAHAA?''
AN:''HAN ARMAAN VO RIDZI MERII BEHEN HAI''
AR:''MATLAB SHASHANK SIR''
AN:''MY DAD''
AR:''OH MY GOD YAR PEHLE MERAA PYAAR AUR AB MERII SANJEEVANI KI PEHLI DOSTT''
AB:''ARMAAN TU CHINTA MAT KAR ABKII VAR TUJHE KISSI SE DUR NAI JAANA PADEGA HUM SIR KO MNA LENGE''
AT:''HAN ABHIE DUTIES PAR CHALTE HAI NAI TO GABBAR HUMEE MAR DALEGI YAR''
AND DEY LEFTT FOR DUTIES
EVENING LOCKER ROOOM
MU:''AJ KITNA KAM THA MAI TO THK GAYYI''
AT:''HAN SAHII ME YAR ITS LONG HECTIC DAY''
AR:''GUYSS AJ PARTY KARTE HAI MEREE GHR PAR''
MU:''OYE HERO MAJAK BND KAR TEREE GHR PARTY?''
AB:''HAN JAB HUM TUJHE ITNAA KEHTE THE TO KABHIE APNEE GHR NAI ANE DETAA THA''
RI:''KYOON ARMAAN AISAA KYA HAI TUMHARE GHR PAR?''
AR:''KCH NAI YAR''
AN:''HAN HUM SABKE GHR PARTY KI EXCEPT OUR AND ARMAAN'S.APNEE GHR TO DAD U KNW ''
AR:''AUR APNAA REASON MAI SHAMM KO BTATA HUN SO GUYSS SEE U AT 8 P.M MY HOUSE''
ALL:''DONEE''
EVENING
MALLIK MANSION
AR:''AAO YAR ANDAR AAO NA''
AB:''NICEE HOUSE ARMAAN''
AR:''THANKS ACHAA MET MY MOM AND DAD
ARMAAN'S PARENTS ANURAG AND PRERNA MALLIK

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MALLIK MANSION


ANU:''ARMAAN TUM SAB KO GHR DIKHAO''
AR:''JI DAD''
PR:''TUM RIDDHIMA HO NA BETAA''
RI:''JI AUNTY NAMASTEY'' AND SHE TOUCHED BTH OF DEM FEET
ANU:''AREYY BETAA LADKIYAN PAIR NAI CHUTI''
ARMAAN ADMIRED HER
AN:''PAR AUNTY APNEE ISE KAISE PECHANA?''
PR:''BETAA YE MERAA PAGAL BETAA HAI NA ISNEE AJ TAK EK HII ACHAA KAM KIYYA HAI RIDDHIMA KO PASAND KAR''
ANU:''HUM ISE KABHIE MILLE NAI THE PAR WE KNW KI YEHII ISE SEEDHA KAR SAKTI HAI,PAR RIDDHIMA TUMNE IS GADHE ME KYA DEKHA?''
RIDDHIMA BLUSHED AND
AR:''HAN HAN BAHUU AYI NAI KI BETAA TO PRAYA HO GAYYA''
ALL CHUCKLED
ANU:''CHL NAUTNKI MAT KAR SABKO GHR DIKHA''
ANURAG AND PRERNA'S ROOOM
GUEST ROOOM
AR:''AUR YE GUEST ROOM HAI''
RA:''SEEDHE BOL NA MERAA KAMRA HAI YA TERAA JAB MUSKI YA RIDZZ ME SE KOI BHI KAMRE SE BHR NIKALGA YEHII AAYENGE''
MU:''OYE KANKHUJRE TU NA CHUPP KAR''
AB:''HAN RAHUL NAI TO SHAADI SE PEHLE HI TUU GHR SE BHR HOGAA ''
RA:''HAN YAR''

RA:''YE HAI MERAA KAMRA GUYSS''(FRIENDS RAHUL AND ARMAAN ARE BROTHERS)
AN:''HAN MATLAB MUSKAAN KA KAMRA''
NI:''HAN MUSKI ABHIE SE DEKHH LE KOI CHANGE TO BOL DE RAHUL KO''
RA:''HUN''
ARMAAN'S BEDROOM
AN:''HUM NICHE CHALTE HAI TUM JAO''
Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
PLEASEEEEE ADD ME TO UR PM LIST! - UR FF IS SOOOO GOOD! I AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT AMMYS ROOM IS LIKE :D I BET ITS COVERED WITH RIDZ'S PICTURES HUH? :D

CONTINUE SUPER SOON PLEASEEEEEEEEEE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
cool parts hun!
waitinf to see wat happens next
and esp. armaans room
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
nice ff

update soon

add me to ur pm list n pm me next time
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#17

PART 8
ARMAAN'S ROOM

ARMAAN'S BEDROOM
AR:''CHALO JAAN ANDAR AAO NA''
AND RIDDHIMA IS SURPRISED TO SEE BEDROOM
IN MIDDLE THIS PICTURE PLACED











AND IN RIGHT THREE SPACES FIRSTLY THIS ONE
IN MIDDLE THIS
AND IN LAST
AND IN RIGHT SIDE FIRSTLY

IN MIDDLE
IN LAST
RI:''ARMAAN YE SAB''
ARMAAN TAKES HER HANDS IN HIS
AR:''MERII JAAAN KA KAMRA TO OOSKI PICTURES TO HONGI HI''
RI:''ARMAAN TUMHE TO PTA BHI NAI THA FIR BHI YE SAB''
AR:''TO RIDDHIMA IS KAMRE AUR IS DILL PAR SIRFF TUMHARA HAQ HAI TO MAI KISSI AUR KO YAHAN SOCH BHI NAI SAKTA''
RI:''ARMAAN''NOW SHE IS HAVING TEARS IN HER EYES
AR:''VAISE BHI NA IS ROOM PAR,NA IS BED PAR U KNW WHT I MEAN''
RIDDHIMA BLUSHED AND HIT ON HIS HEAD
RI:"ARMAAN KYA BAS YEHII SUJHTA HAI TUMHE''
AR:''HAN PAR SIRFF TUMHARE SAATH HI SUJHTA HAI JAAN AUR KYA MAI BTO MAINE KYA IMAGINE KIYYA HAI?''
RI:''NAI MUJHE NAI SUNNNA HAI,ACHAA ARMAAN YE VAALI PIC(POINTING WHERE HER MOUTH IS OPEN)''
AS SHE DOES NOT WANTS TO HEAR HER NAUGHTY REMARKS AS SHE FEELS SHY
AR:''HAN VO CANTEEN ME LII THI JAB MAINE TUMHE KAHAA THA U PUT ON WEIGHT ANDRAHUL CLICKED IT''
RI:"'AUR ARMAAN YE BROWN AUR GOLDEN KA CONTRAST,U KNOW ITS MY FAVOURITE''
AR:''OH REALLY MUJHE NAI PTA THA''
RI:''ARMAAN''
AR:''OK BABA''
HE SITS ON BED AND PULLS RIDDHIMA IN HIS LAP
RI:''ARMAAN KYA KAR RAHEE HO KOI AAA JAYEGA''
AR:''AGR SUNNA HAI TO YEHII BAITHNA HOGAA,VAISE BHI MAI TUMHE CHODNE NAI VAALA''
RI:''OK,MUJHE CHUTNA BHI NAI HAI''
AND HE PLACES HIS CHIN ON HER SHOULDER
AR:''YAD HAI COLLEGE ME EKK BAR TUM AUR NIKKI APNE DREAM HOUSE KE VAARE ME BAT KAR RAHEE THE''
RI:''HAN AND U COME AUR MERAA ATE HI MAJAK OODANA SHURU KAR DIYYA KI GOLDEN AND BROWN SO WEIRED COMBINATION''
AR:''HAN JAAAN BUT IT WAS A JOKE U KNOW''HE PLACES KISS ON HER CHEEK
RI:''HAN ARMAAN PAR TUMNE SAARA ROOM MERII PASAND KA BNAYA HAI KCH APNII PASAND KA TO I MEANS''
AR:''KISNE KAHAA MERII PASAND KA NAI HAI''
RI:''MATLAB''
AR:''ISMEE ROOOM ME JO SABSE IMP ANE VAALA HAI VO MERII PASAND KA HA HII TO HAI''
RIDDHIMA BLUSHED
AND
RI:''ARMAAN AB NICHE CHALE SAB WA8 KAR RAHEE HONGE,ACHAA NAI LAGTA''
AR:''NAI''
RI:''ARMAAN PLEASE NA''
AR:''OK EKK VAR SHAADI HONE DO FIR DEKHTA HUN KAISE BHAGTI HO,NO CHANCE JAAAN''
RI:''ARMAAN I LOVE U VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY MUCH'' AND SHE PLACES KISS ON HIS FORHEAD
AR:''OYE HOYYE AND LOVE U TOO''
DOWNSTAIRS
AN:''RIDZI TU APNII EK AUR FAVOURITE JAGAH TO DEKHNA BHULL HI GAYYI,HAI NA''
RI:"'KAUNSI DI''
AN:''AGR ARMAAN NE TUJHE ROOOMS E ANE DIYYA TO KITCHEN HI TERAA FAVOURITE PLACE HAI NA''
MU:''RIGHT ANJII YAR''
ALL CHUCKLED,RIDZI BLUSHED AND ARMAAN WINKED AT HER
KITCHEN
ALL SETTELED ON DINING TABLE AND PRERNA PLACED FOOD

RI:''AUNTY MAI KCH HLP KAROON''
RA:''KCH SEEKH MUSKAAN RIDDHIMA SE''
PR:''RAHUL CHUPP MUSKAAN ALREADY MERII BHT HLP KAR CHUKI HAI KHABRDAR JO MERII BAHU SE KCH KAHA TO AUR RIDDHIMA TUMHE GHR KAISE LGA ?''
RI:''BAHUT ACHAA AUNTY''
ANU:''AUR IS GADHE KA ROOOM(POINTING TO ARMAAN) PTA HAI BETAA JAB HUM INTERIORS KRA RAHEE THE HE SAY HE WANTS GOLDEN AND BROWN CONTRAST IN HIS ROOOM,OUR INTERIOR SAY THT HE HAS LOTS OF GUD CONTRASTS BUT HE IS SO ADAMNT''
AN:''UNCLE YE TOO RIDZI KA DREAM ROOOM KA CONTRAST HAI KYOON RIDZI''
PR:''OH I SEE THT'SS Y HAN ARMAAN''
AR:''AP SAB HUMEE AISEE KYOON DEKHH RAHEE HAI MAI APNII JAAAN KE LIYYE ITNA NAI KAR SAKTA,AUR ATUL TU POOCH RAHAA THA NA KII MAI APNEE GHR PARTY KYONN NAI DETAA KYONKI MAI NAI CHAHTA THA KI RIDDHIMA KE VAARE ME KISSI KO PTA CHALE AS WE ARE NOT IN RELATION SO''
RIDDHIMA JUSTT ADMIRED HER AND
PR:''RIDDHIMA BETAA SCH ME IS PAGAL KO TU HII SAMBHAL SAKTI HAI,HAI NA ANURAG''
ANU:''YES BOSS TUM KABHIE GALAT HO SAKTI HO.SO RIDDHIMA HUM APKE PAPAA SE KAB BAT KAREE''
HEARING IT BTH ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA'S FACE FELLS
AR:''VO DAD SIR MUJHE PASAND NAI KARTE'' AND HE EXPLAINS EVERYTHING
PR:''KOI BAT NAI HUM SAB MILL KE BAT KARENGEE''
ALL NODDED





Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
can't wait till the next part!
PLZ HURRY
i wanna kno wat happens next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
hey DARK_DESIRE
thanks for comments
😊
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#20
😊
Edited by niki.5 - 14 years ago

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