The World's Oldest Story!!#5AR I'm No Superman!!

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

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Family Matters!

First thing, I'm so jealous!!!!!!!!!!

I want the Beetle too!

It's like my dream car too and I have no Armaan to gift it to me!😭😆

Anyway, I simply loved the update...

LOVED the way Armaan spoke to Shashank with full attitude and confidence for Ridhima and their love...

I'm in complete awe for that part of it...

Perfect flow of emotions for Ridhima's realisation. Thank God that she's not eating too much bhav now...😆

But why did he have to decide to go...

So not fair...

I really liked the AR conversation in her room. I just realise how Armaan had been so right on his part too...

I curse myself for not seeing things from his POV. And I like the protective Ridhima too who wanted to save Armaan from her dad once more....

God, can this story really get any better...

That's what I thought at the end of this update...

But W*F just bowled me....

Wait for that comment...

I'll write it in a while!!!!!!!

Muaaaaah to you for setting things back again....

😃

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simran45

@simran45

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

nice part still incomplete

i like shashank n padma decussion about AR

WILL u update today

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simran gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#513

the part was really ver gud
i think it is quit imp for the story
bt ab to AR ko utha de yaar😆

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Riddhi

@Riddss

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Posted: 14 years ago

#514

heyyy rachana,
r u updating today or what???

hope to see ur replay

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#515

Nice part...do complet it soon

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Anokhee

@Anokhee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#516

The only thing on my mind after I finished the update was

W*F!!!

I mean...

W*F!

So much happened in this one update!

W*F!

Ridhima actually ran to him in all the filmy style like a perfect bollywood climax....

W*F!

SHASHANK played a prank on Armaan

W*F!!

Armaan fell for it!

W*F!!

They're getting engaged!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲

I hope IF doesn't ban me for this....😆

But seriously,

Hats off for this update....

A brilliant piece of writing....

Your confessions just keep getting better.............

You have no clue how much I love you!!!!!!!!!!

Anokhee!😃

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sjain

@sjain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#517

helloooooooo zeffffff...

will u complete it todayyy?????

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 14 years ago

#518

I'm sure everyone must have complimented you on writing such a lovely part about our favourite couple. I too loved it to bits. But I also liked the second half, about Shashank and Padma. Sweet of you to give footage to their characters too. Good job.