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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
finally maan is starting to love her
loved the jealous side of him
precap looks interesting
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey dear..when r u updating..!?>>>😉😉😉😉

v ol waiting..!!!!!😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!!!Finally he's gonna realise his love for her! Awesome yaar!
Please update soon
Thanks a heap
Love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update as always....loved it to core
waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz update asap as d story is gettin intresting at this point of maaneet life , finally maan realises his love 4 her ,,, so happy 4 geet as she is sooooo strong n not givin in easily.
Edited by chubzy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read ur ff...............
its owsumm......
continue soon.. and do PM me.. please.............


love,,
Adeena..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Great update!!!!!!!!
geet is really strong and happy that she could fight properly........
she is even very strong to tell teh truth............
wonderful update............
hmmm Rahul also too good............
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
precap is nice and interesting.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Geet was having lunch with Rahul Meera and Yash at the college canteen. Maan and the others were sitting at another table. Maan's eyes kept watching Geet, feeling jealous every moment. He remembered what he did two nights ago and wanted to apologise but Geet didn't even talk nor look his way. It was like he was invisible. He saw her laughing at Yash's jokes. Giving side hugs to Rahul everytime he said something sweet to her. But something happened that lunch time to make Maan angry and full of envy.

Rahul got up from the table and stood on another right next to the table where Geet, Yash and Meera were sitting. Everyone looked at him and became quiet. They wondered what he was doing. Geet looked at him confused.

'Kya Rahul, tum upar kya karahe ho tum kya koi dance wance karne waley ho' (wt u duin up there r u gna dance?' Meera asked laughing. Geet hi fived her and Yash.

'Ladies and Gentleman can I have your attention please?' Rahul said jumping of the table and walking towards Geet. Maan looked at them attentively, keeping his eyes and ears open.

'I just want to ask you to help me in this please' He said turning towards Geet.

'Geet,' He said down on one knee. 'You are the most beautiful girl I know. I've known you nearly all my life.your my best friend and confidante. Basically what i'm asking is will you marry me?' He said pulling out a ring. Geet looked at him shocked and smiled at him. She knew he knew everything about her but still she needed to ask if this was right, Rahul knew what she was going to ask and said

'I accept you with everything. Your past present and future. I don't care about your past. I love you and wish to marry you' Geet smiled knowing how much he understood her. She could not be happier.

'YES' She said. Rahul slid the ring on her finger got up and held her and spun her around in a circle. Geet laughed. The canteen residents and spectators cheered. But one man was not happy. Not happy at all. He walked out and went straight home.

The next day, Maan was in the bathroom looking in the mirror when doing his shaving when a hand touched his and took the razor out of his hand. He turned and saw Geet. (his imagination)

'What happened Maan? Why are you upset' She asked.

'No I'm not upset. What are you doing here? What if Rahul finds out. He is now your fiance' He said in a hurt tone. Geet took the razor near his chin touching him gently sending 1000 currents through his vein.

'really then why do you look hurt. Are you jealous?'

'No I'm not jealous understood' He yelled. 'I don't care. Your nobody to me' A knock brought him back to conciousnes. He looked around and saw there was no one in the room.

'what is happening to me? Geet isn't here. Why did I feel like she was?' He asked himself.

He sat down for breakfast and was eating his toast when a hand took it out of his and was feeding him. He saw Geet again.

'Why don't you admit it Maan? That your jealous. That your in love'

'No I won't. I don't love anyone. I am Maan Singh Khurana. I write my own destiny. And in my destiny there is no love'

'But Maan your not god. God writes your destiny. Admit it to yourself your in love with me' His toast fell. He realised Geet wasn't there he was imagining her again. He growled to himself annoyed.

'Do I really love Geet?'

He walked to his car and sat in the driving seat about to buckle his seat belt when he saw Geet sitting in the passenger side seat.

'So you don't love me'

'no'

'really so if I go with Rahul far away you won't feel restless'

'No why should I'

'so what I go really far away. A place where there is no return from'

'meaning'

'what if I die'

'NO don't you dare say those words. You cant die. If anything happens to you then how do you expect me to live without you.' Maan screamed. He then realised what he said. His words registered in his mind.

'OMG I Love Geet. Feeling restless jealous, wanting to be with her. Scared if something happens to her. But now what do I do?' He thought driving to college.

'Maan Maan' Pinky screamed as he walked through the corrirodr thinking about the new predicament in his life.

'hey Pinks whats up'

'Mr Sinha is calling you and Geet to his office' Pinky said running off.

'Me and Geet but why' he thought walking to Mr Sinha's office. He saw Geet there. He remembered her saying once that she loved him a few months ago.

'Geet Maan I called you here today to tell you both that you both are going to Panchgini for the intercollege state quiz. Leave tonight. Maan since you have a car, you both will be going in your car. The college will pay for your petrol expenses and otherwise. Any problem'

'But Sir why us' Geet said rolling her eyes at Maan

'Because you two are the best and brightest students in the whole college from everyone'

'Okay Sir, I'm ready' Maan smiled. He then turned and smiled at Geet. Geet looked at him confused why is he smiling at me.

'Right leave at 2pm, you should reach Panchgini by midnight. Make sure you keep us informed. Now both of you go home and pack. It is a two week thing'

'Yes Sir' Geet and Maan said.

'Gadde Kuttey ullu ke patte' Geet thought to herself 'I have to go with this gadda' as she packed her clothes.

Maan smirked as he pakced his clothes. 'someone once said that you can never truly forget your first love. Geet no matter how much you hide it. You still love me and I will make you admit it.'

Geet waited outside the college at 2 with her luggage. She had to see a few teachers about her last assingnments before leaving as after the instate quiz she will be leaving for medical school. Maan came and saw her.

'Shall we' He said

'lets go' Geet said annoyed.

'Wow Miss Handa you speak I didn't know that'

'Shut up and lets go.' Geet said clearly annoyed sitting in the car. Maan smirked.

'You still love me that's why you avoid me' Maan thought as he loaded the luggage and sat in the car.

PRECAP: 'Look its my baby' Maan said The car stopped.

'Kya hua tumhari khatara I mean baby ko' Geet said stepping outside the car

'baby garam hogayi '

'Lagda hai tum dono ko coolant ki zarorat hai'

'How funny, Miss Billi ko jokes marna atta hai'

'hasna band karo. Agar tum gari main nahi betey na to kabhi karab nahi hotey'

====Song------ Khud ko kya samaj ti hai

Please commentttt!

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Posted: 14 years ago
So Geet accepted? OH no! But hey the mystery remains how and when Maaneet will marry, Geet will leave and Maan will come back for her! Can't wait to know and awwwww I hope Maan repents and makes it up to Geet! 😛
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago

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