#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

awesome part dear.... Hope their pains come to an end...

thanks... Yup ..hope for the best..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

maan loves geet a lot yaar..... so caring ...i wish the next day that vikey and vinay are no more ..he should also make sure that recording thing should be rid off

thanks..you are alwez there to support my writing........tc..
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Posted: 14 years ago
the story is becoming more interesting with every update! 😊
so...when is the nxt update coming?😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
wen is the next update yaar...wanna see vinay and vickeys pathetic condition😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 13 its continued..scroll down..
Geet woke up at 4 at same night..
and screamed..ma...and cried bitterly...
Pinkey and meera hugged her tight..
geet broke free..
went to bathroom...
took a bucket of cold water and threw it on her body..
She was shivering..
but her soul was shivering more..
her soul was hating her self..
her soul was begging her babaji..
babaji please meri atma pe lage is daag ko dho do..
please..
me kaise chupau ise..
duniya se chupa lungi to kya..
khud se nazre kaise milaungi...
mujhe tukado me kyu maar rahe ho..
ek baar hi maar do..

she had pain in her eyes..
she decided to end her self up..
Ran to her cupboard...
took out blade..
meera snatched it..what the hell you are up to..
how dare you do this to yourself..
have you thought about your family..

geet screamed..which family..
i dunn have any..

pinkey shook her..think about us..
think about maan..us pe kya beetegi..
pagal hai wo tere liye..
mar jayega..
tujhe fark pade na pade uske dard se..
par wo tujhe ye karte dekhega to khud ko khatam kar dga.

geet shooed her saying..how can he love me ..
he loves his dark world..
his drugs..
Use apne nashe se fusat ho to na..
Pyar kehna asan hota hai nibhana mushkil..

meera said enough..
Usne ye tujhse isliye chupaya taki uski princess ko uski is aadat se dard na ho..
usne to dinner time me hamare samne ye be keh diya..
geet drugs chor dene ki baat karti hai..
wo kahe to me sans lena be chor du.... Geet use waqt chaiye..
please thande dimag se soch..
Aur ha geet agar tujhe uska pyar itna hi sasta nazar ata hai..
To 2 ghante pehale jo hua uske bad tu hamare pas be a sakti thi..
Fir tu maan ke pas kyu chali gayi..
Wo be to ek ladka hai..
Rat ke 1 bje bad ek ladki jiski atma ghayal ho chuki ho..
jise apni halat ka hosh na ho..
wo paraye mard ke kamre me kyu jayegi
kya ye pyar nai hai..
Wo teri ek hasi ke liye
puri duniya luta deta hai..
Wo tujhe itni thand me sadte chhod dene ki jagah ..
tere sath thand me puri rat bina apni shir..

and suddenly realized..what she spoke in last line..
Geet dint listen last line and murmured..
ab kuch nahi ho sakta..
sab khatam ho gaya..
ab me kaha jaungi..
apne ghar walo se nazre kaise milaungi..
Aur maan..
Me uske layak hi nahi hu..

and she fainted.. maan could not sleep either...
.he had a storm in his eyes...
whenever he closed his eyes..
her pain
the way she broke down..
the way she cried bitterly..
the way her every part spoke that cruel story ...
he twisted and turned many times and sat up in disgust..

all other too sat near him..
He said me abhi un b*****ds ko mar ke aunga:..
Un ka khun peye bina muje neend nai aa sakti

jay shook him..tu pagal ho gaya hai kya..
hum use abhi marne jayenge...
wo shor machayega..
police me fir hogi...
and hum jail jayenge..

Maan pushed jay badly..and said sale wo teri bhabi hai..
tu uske liye jail jane se dar gaya..

jay hugged him tight and said..bhai meri wafadari pe shaq na karo:..
hum jail chale gaye to..
peche se wo wolf khula hoga..
and me nai chahta..
meri bhabi ke samne bhi aye wo..
wo tut jayegi..
upar se use tere support ki zarurat hai..
apne gusse ko paal na sikh..
hum tuje pehale bhi kehate aye hai..
and upar se kal hume sabse pehale medical store jana hai..
bhai geet hosh me nahi hai..
tu to reh..

maan cried...he could not stand that moment boy more..
he took am injection and shooted it in his arm..
before they could stop him..
the drug has already poisoned him..
he said...tomorrow if vickey comes in front of me..
then pray to god that i dont get a death sentence for murdering him..

his phone was on silent ..
meera was trying it.. Dev pointed at phone..
updte in progress
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 13 CONTINUED..
maan picked up..
maan wo geet
wo geet.

maan got nervous.kya hua use.
meera saidshe is in infirmary
[its a small hospital kinda place in hostels where students are hospitalized]
maan said why.
meera:she is not toking To any one of us.
murmuring all negative thoughts.
she threw bucket of cold water on her despite of the fact we tried to stop her.
she tried to commit suicide:..
we forcibly stopped her..
She is running very high temp..

maan said what the hell..
am coming..

meera replied..dont..warden is doubtful on looking her condition..
and she is shouting to open our mouth..
as her lips..
cheek and all say different story..
we have covered every thing with clothes..

maan yelled..meera tujhe hamari dosti ka vasta
muh mat kholna..
chahe warden kuch kahe..

meera said ofcourse yar..bas tu mat aa..
as she is thinking you have fought with her..
or done something..

maan said sarcastically..
gunahgar ko saza ye dunia deti hi kaha hai..
but ye koi dunia ki adalat nahi..
mere pyar ki adalat hai..
and faisla be me hi lunga..
and tell geet not to worry..
am coming to her..
in 10 min..

meera looked at her phone confused..
maan took out his leather belt..
and started hitting himself..
dev took the belt..what are u up to..
Socha hai geet pe kya beetegi..

Maan cried jo us pe beet rahi hai.
Use kam karne ki koshish kar raha hu..
i have to go to her..
i have 10 minutes..

he ran to the heater.. Put his hands on the warm rod..
they all tried to pull him back..
he pushed them away..
they switched heater off ..
but too late..
his hands were all brown..white purple..with blisters..
they pained..
he dint even utter a ah..in pain
..and rather smiled..i will go to her..
jay said dip them in water..
he refused..ab to infirmary me hi water naseb hoga inhe..
It was pointless to argue..
they rushed him to infirmary..
and there sat in front of doctor in ward.
doctor said..
maan tum itne zidi q ho..

geet looked at his wounds from distance..her own words were ringing in her ears pyar karna bohat asan hota hai,..par nibhana bohat mushkil
she was feeling guilty...s
he tried her best to run..
came to him ..ye kya kiya..
tujhe kuch ho jata to..
gande..
puchi kaun karta mujhe..

snatched the tube and cold water from doctor..
and started applying herself..
maan and doctor looked at her in shock..
doctor said excuse me..
smiled at maan and left..
maan dint smile..how could he..
friends i guess..you liked this update..please do comment..
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it yaar... the way maan cares for her ... its so dreamy 😍... but why cant he leave that drug habit alone ???? vinay and vickey definetly dead..😈
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar... OMG Maan is so adamant and he hurts himself for Geet...Poor Maaneet... i will kill tat vickey idiot bcoz of him Maaneet facing this much of torture...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww the whole atmosphere is sad and painful the way they're both punishing themselves and also their friends who are trying to console them. And maan who does love unconditionally hurt himself so he can meet her was just wow anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part.
Maan hurts himself for meeting her.Sooo sweettt!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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