#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 20

haye main to mar jawaa is pyaar pe
itni baar padhu
i have butterflies in my stomach tickling me
update soon the next part

continue dnt leave it in middle
d update is just awesomeeeeeeeeeee loved ittttt

KYu yaar ye saab kar rahe ho

I read part 1...it was amazing..............will continue to read it further.

Though im not liking their behaviour lik hurting themselves or sumthg

Oh my god chikki..i can guess whats going in ur mind..dodo..you better study..betaji..update was gud..but please sweetheart study too ...tc..luv u

PART 14
geet was applying water..
her tears were dripping on his hands..
maan looked at her wet face..
wanted to clear the cloud of tears..
geet snapped..chup chap baith ja..
nai to itna maungi itna maungi...
and hugged him tight..
maan was getting shock after shock..
he wanted to be happy..
but his heart said no to happiness..
as situation made him depressed..
there was no one in the ward.
Geet cuddled in maan 's arms and slept....
jay adi and dev left..
they already requested the doctor..please let them be together..
you can keep a watch on them...
doctor said i will see to it ..
and went to maan and doubtingly asked..geet has been abused..
she is your gf right.. looking at geet..the way she slept in his arms..
maan said no doctor..
dont insult my love by calling her my gf..
she is my soulmate..
my life..and i cant hide from you..
as you know it..but please let it be a secret..
until i dont unmask them....
doctor said i hope your love reaches its destination......
maan said thanks and good night..
Next morning..
geet woke up..
looked arround...
maan had bandages on his hands..
he said tumhara break fast me 4 bar garam kara chuka hu ji
chalo chalo good gal
sit down..
took a spoon..[he was struggling to pick it up..his hands were tied.]
geet turned away..
maan composed himself..open your mouth dear..
geet said i dont wan2 eat..
maan replied..i never asked you your wish..
Its my order..
so open it..
or i will force..
geet said who are you..
i dont give a damn..
just go na..
dont talk to me..
you are just too much..
after my life..
i dunn care about you and so go..
maan kept looking at her eyes when she spoke ..
he said ho gaya tera..
de liya muft ka gyan..
aur kuch dena ho gyan me mata shree
...chal ok..
ab apna muh khol..
dekh tere petu ro raha hai..
ise bhukhi lagi hai..
chal say aaa..
geet opened her mouth..
maan made her eat..
chal ab meera ke naam pe ek bite kha..
Yes like this sweet heart
ab agli bite pinkey ke nam pe..
ek bite dev ke nam pe..
ek bite adi ..
now this one is for our lover boy jay..
now its for dadi..
now just this bas last...
ma ke naam pe..
this one is final..
bas only this much...
eat it ..
maan ke naam pe..
geet looked at his paining hands..
took the spoon from his hands..
and said ye bite maan ke naam pe nahi..
maan aur geet ke naam pe..
And by the way like this we can go on and on..
Ye bite doggie ke naam pe wo bite bat ke naam pe..
blah blah blah..and started giggling..
maan hugged her tight..
so did she..
he took out tablet from his pocket..geet eat it..
wats it..
its better if you dunn ask..
geet understood..
she hugged him..tears rolled down..
maan cleaned them..
geet took it inside..
and then maan made her gulp water..
He gave geet a kiss on her cheeks and left..
he got out of ward..
called some one..maan bol raha hu..
un dono ko fight club me le aa..
agar na mane to uthwa le..
within am hour..
geet self thought something is fishy..
but she was too weak..
maan went to geet..tu aram kar me abi aya...
geet catches his hand..i will be waiting for you..
maan leaves on his karizma with adi jay and dev who are on their respective bikes..
maan covers his head by his leather jacket's cap..
wears his imported glasses..
takes out his cigar and takes a gush..
they enter fight club...
well friends fight club is the world of spoilt brats of rich family..
where they contact with gangsters and smugglers and drug suppliers and all the night life..
the place is undergrount till two floors..
only licenced members can enter..
its kinda hidden spot..
so that police cant reach..
maan goes to the ring
his guards remove his shirt
his body is something which every girl of college crave for
his packs
his curves
they are unbeatable
maan sits on stool closing his eyes
he is about to take a shot of injection
but the injection reminds him of geet
what he promised for her happiness
destroys it and throws away
jay offers him again saying bro take it as your madness will be out of control on seeing that dog..
maan glares
this is what i want
he growled
where is he
bring him
every one knew
his anger was at its peak
he closed his eyes he got flash back of that raging night
where vickey forced her to smoke and dance
he got flash back of yesterday night
her wounds..her tears
her sobs
all ringing in his ears
when he opened his eyes
he found vickey smiling and standing
all roared for maan except adi jay and dev
they knew it was not jst a fight
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