#TeRI ZiNdAgI MeRi ZiNdAgI HaI#maaneet#thread 1 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 12 CONTInued
maan read her eyes..
he hugged her back and said..bolo geet..
kuch hai kya..

geet replied crying in his ears..he recorded me..
every one heard ..
dev looked at the wall in disgust..
he is such a scoundrel..
maan's eyes were red in anger..
his veins on his hands were visible he clenched his fist..
he roared like a lion..i dont care geet..
he will pay for it..
and i will make sure he does

next moment he found geet sitting on the floor...
holding his feet tight..
and screaming..i know you love me...
I know you can do any thing for me..
go to any extent to get me justice..
but maan please dont make it public..
now my ruined destiny is in knowledge of these 2 rums
but if you dont control your self..
me badnam ho jaungi..
wo ise pure market me release kar dega..
and if it happens i will suicide..

maan looked at her in anger. .
and said in disgust..ye aurat jaat bhi na khud ki dushman hoti hai..
kamjor..
nafrat hoti hai tumse
gussa ata hai...
tum un namardo se dar gaye..
jin logo ne ek helpless ladki ka fayda uthaya..
.ja yar..
bas ja..
geet tere sath koi mazak nahi hua hai...
you can carry them to death..

geet held his feet more tight..
and cried keeping her head on them...
maan got shocked..
he picked her up and said..what are you doing this..
me jitna tum se pyar karta hu..
utni hi tumhari izat karta hu..
geet tum maan ka maan ho..
gurur ho..
aur tum is tarah se bhek mat mango..
tum mujhe haq se kuch be karne ko kaho me kuch be kar lunga...
but ye mujhse nahi hoga..
Am sorry..
I will kill him...

geet fainted in his arms..
coming day was killing her...

Maan carried her in his arms to her room...
and put her on her blanket..
cried holding her hand...
said gud nyte to meera and pinkey..a
nd went away..
Friends.. I hope you liked this part..if you like it..do hit the like button..and do comment..whether you liked it or not...
Thank you
aparajita
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..love it.
cant wait for the nxt part.
plz..do continue thxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear.... Hope their pains come to an end...
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan loves geet a lot yaar..... so caring ...i wish the next day that vikey and vinay are no more ..he should also make sure that recording thing should be rid off
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan luvs geet soooooo selflessly &careingly just want them 2 alwaysssss stay like this alwayssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
Feeling bad for Geet
I wish Maan kil them
They really shuldnt c the next morning
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwesome prt
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was just a great update, really loved the way you showed msk and geet and all of them handling the situation. cant wait for the next update, you are just too good
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Posted: 14 years ago
Feeling really bad for geet.
Maan is sooo caring!!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
FEELING HORRIBLE for geet.....how cud they do this to her!
this is really bad
hope maan gets her justice...feeling really bad for her! 😭😭😭😭
they shudn't hav done sumthing like tat! hate em!

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