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The Wedding Deal - FF

Hey guys. I'm back with a new chapter. Hope you like this one. I've tried to make it as long as possible! Eid Mubarak! Have a happy Eid!

Chapter 2

Geet personally thought Maan was taking this 'Wedding Deal' too seriously. If this is a Contract, why should he spend his money and buy a RING for her? But Geet really liked it that Maan was caring for her and giving him some attention. At least he wasn't being a Dusht - Danav or a Khadoos right now. She decided to let it go, as she didn't want to ruin Maan's mood. His mood like this (happy) is very rare.

Maan was taking Geet to one of the best and finest Jewellery Shop in Delhi. So it was a pretty long drive. Geet was feeling bored so she decided to put some music on.


Du Du Du Du, Pa Pa Pa Ra ] -2
Yeh Kaisa Ladka Hai [ Du Du Du Du, Pa Pa Pa Ra ]
Yeh Kaisi Ladki Hai [ Du Du Du Du, Pa Pa Pa Ra ]
Iska Main Kya Karoon [ Du Du Du Du, Pa Pa Pa Pa ]
Isse Main Kya Kahoon
Yeh Ladta Hai [ Aa Ha ]
Akadti Hai [ He He ]
Jhagadta Hai Bigadti Hai
Deewana Hai Deewani Hai
But He's Your Best Friend Yaar
But She's Your Best Friend Yaar
[ Du Du Du Du, Du Du Du, La La La La
Du Du Du Du, Du Du Du, La La La La La La ]
Hay Hay Re Hay Hay Yeh Ladka Hay Hay Re Hay [Hay]
Karta Nadaaniyaan Kyon Poochho To Hay [ Yo ]
Hay Hay Re Hay Hay Yeh Ladka Hay Hay Re [ Hay ]
Karta Nadaaniyaan Kyon Poochho To Hay [ Yeach ]
Kabhi Yeh Humse Ladta Hai Kabhi Jhagadta Hai
Koi Paas Is Ke Na Aana
( Yeh Ladka Hai Deewana Hai Deewana
[ Deewana Deewana Deewana] ) -2
Hay Hay Re H... (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vas65fhlJhE - Credits to Video Owner. No copyright intended. The person who created this video is NOT me.)

Geet was smiling and she kept looking at Maan.

Maan was getting really pissed off as he knew the song matched his personality really well and he knew what Geet was thinking. So he switched off the music.

Geet: "Why did you switch it off? I was enjoying that"

Maan: "But I wasn't"

Geet: "Never mind. I'll sing then..."
Geet: "Kabhi Yeah Humse Ladta Hai Kabhi Jhagadta Hai
Koi pass Is Ke Na Aana
Hay Hay Re Hay!"

Maan: "Stop it Geet, please. Before I lose my temper" he said through gritted teeth.

Geet: "Sorry, but this song really matches your personality" she said giggling.

Maan smiled a bit at what she said. Geet noticed it but decided to keep quiet as she loved seeing Maan smile like that.

Finally, they reached the Jewellery Shop after what seemed like hours.

Geet and Maan entered the Jewellery Shop. The whole shop was shimmering with all sorts of diamonds.

Geet: "Wow" she thought

Maan: "Geet, have a look at some rings and tell me which one you like best" he said

Geet: "Okay"

Geet didn't like any of the rings. The diamonds were either too big, or the ring was just too fancy. Maan didn't like any of them either. Maan wanted something simple for Geet, to match her simplicity.
Finally, Maan came across the most stunning ring he has ever seen. It was a silver ring with a small diamond.

Maan: "Perfect! Just PERFECT!" Maan thought. (http://www.diamondengagementringbuyingguide.com/images/diamond-ring.jpg)

Just then, Maan had a good idea. He looked at Geet. She was busy looking at necklace sets. Maan whispered to the owner of the jewellery shop.

Maan: "Pack this ring quietly. Don't let Geet know or find out. How much is it?" he whispered

Owner: "1 lakh" he whispered back

Maan handed the money in cash and told the owner to put the ring in the bestest ring box he could find.
The owner came back and handed the box to Maan and Maan hid the box behind his back and knelt down on his knees.

Maan: "Will you marry me?" he asked with a 100 wat smile and a shine in his eyes.

Geet was shocked to see such a huge grin on his face. She has never seen such a wide smile on his face before. Geet then looked around her.

The owner of the shop, the staff, and the customers were all staring at them. Eager for the reply. They were all nodding. As if saying "Go on woman! Say yes! Say yes!"

Silence...

Maan waited, still on his knees, hoping she would say yes.

Geet: "Yes Maan!" and a tear escaped her eye.

Geet had never seen such a romantic side of Maan before. She was pleased. At least his Contract Husband was romantic!

Maan slipped on the simple diamond ring on her ring finger and in the end, everyone clapped and cheered and had happy glow on their faces.

Geet: "It's my turn to make a move now" Geet thought

And Geet went and wrapped her hands around Maan's neck and gave a quick peck on his cheek.

Maan was surprised at this sudden action by Geet. He never thought Geet could be this bold. But who cares. Maan wanted to make this 'Wedding Deal' the best 'Wedding Deal' Geet could ever dream of.

Maan: "Shall we head home Geet? It's getting late. You also need to meet Daadima. Daadima said that whenever I've chosen my lady love I need to bring my lady love to Daadima" he smirked.

Geet was shocked by the word 'lady love'.

Geet: "I'm his lady love? No, he's probably joking" thought Geet.

Maan wondered how the word 'lady love' escaped from his mouth.

Maan: "What the hell? Why did I say 'lady love'? She's just a Contract Wife. I don't love her do I? No Maan. You don't. No Maan. Stop thinking about Geet. This is just for Daadima. This isn't real is it? No. No. No. No. No. No."

Geet and Maan sat in the car and Geet noticed Maan was slightly uncomfortable.

Geet: "Maan, why are you sweating?"

Maan: "Wait, I'm sweating?" he thought to himself and touched his forhead.
Maan tried to think of something to say.
Maan: "Yeah well... Well... Obviously I'm used to the AC and it is damn hot in here. Let's get this AC on" he said

Geet: "Okay" she shrugged

Geet and Maan reached the Khurana Mansion. Maan got out and opened Geet's door. Geet got our but while doing so she by mistakingly twisted her ankle and was about to fall when Maan caught her. (Mahi Moment)

Geet: "Thanks" she said shyly

Maan: "It's okay. Be careful next time" he said reassuringly

Maan & Geet enter the Khurana Mansion. Daadima was sitting on the sofa reading a magazine and saw Maan and Geet. (Daadima doesn't know who Geet is)

Daadima: "Maan Beta, you've come. About time. I was wondering where you were. Who is this beautiful girl?"

Maan: "Namaste Daadima. Sorry we were late. Daadima, this is Geet Handa, my future wife. Geet, this is Savitri Devi. My and your Daadima"

Geet: "Namaste Daadima. How are you?" said Geet while seeking her blessings

Daadima: "God Bless you beta. I'm good. I like my son's choice. You are very beautiful! God bless you beta. Maan, give Geet a tour of the Khurana Mansion. Geet beta, I shall be right back. I have some work to do." and Daadima left leaving the two alone.

There was an awkward silence between them.

Maan: "Uh, so, follow me I'll give you a tour of the house"

Geet: "Sure" and smiled.

Maan gave Geet a tour of the whole Khurana Mansion. Just Maan's bedroom was left. Maan took Geet to the bedroom. Geet was amazed. She had to admit, Geet liked this room the best.

Maan's room was colour co-ordinated. Black and white. Everything was Modern and well decorated, and simple ().

Geet: "Thank you very much for the tour Maan. I enjoyed it. I should get going now. It's getting late" she smiled and turned to leave.

Maan: "Wait, you won't really find any auto or cab at this time. I'll drop you" he said

Maan and Geet got in to the car.

Maan: "So where do you live?"

Geet: "I live with my cousin Pinky and her dad. My parent's died about 5 years ago when I was a teenanger. I was only 14 when they died. They didn't die a normal death. They got murdered. My parent's got kidnapped for money. I was rich back then. My parent's didn't give them money so the kidnappers hit them badly with a stick" she explained sadly.

Maan was horrified.

Maan: "Damn, Geet" his voice cracked. He couldn't help but feel sorry for this innocent girl. She must have gone through alot.

Geet: "I feel better now that I've told someone. You promise you won't tell this to anyone?"

Maan: "I promise Geet" he said and squeezed her hand.

Maan: "Geet, we are here. Good night!" he said

Geet: "Thanks Maan. See you soon" she replied.

Precap: The Wedding Shopping

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Edited by Sameeha786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Nice Update..I liked it..
Aww..Maan proposed geet..so cute...
And poor geet her parents got murdered..poor her..
Aww...maan is falling for her kind of..
So sweet//loved the update
continue soon and Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That's amazing ... can't wait for you to update the story :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you
it was different and interesting 👏👏
waiting for the rest of story😉
good luck⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it!! and the way maan proposed to geet and the pic of the ring was beautiful!!!!!!!!!! thanks for the pm!!!
hope u update soon and waiting for your update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update
loved the ring and the pic of Maan's bedroom;)
i see them falling in love already!! ;)
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update pls cont soonnnnnnnn i love it each part

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