SS Alone in Paradise(Maaneet)LAST CH pg128 14 feb - Page 77

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Posted: 14 years ago
hehehhehehe Arjun poor u aik song yaad araha hai mujhay TU SALA KAM SAI GAYA Maan will kill you for doing this 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 you are dead mr.Arjun 🤢

superb update 👏 loved the hug sooo much

do continue soon and plz update your other ff's also missing them
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautifully written
loved it..
bechari geet.. really feeling bad for her
cont soon
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww that was great part...loved it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW !!!!that was really nice
that jerk arjun.......atleast now geet will stay away from arjun
n the hug was lovely😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update..............

arjun is such a creep...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome superb lovely beautifull update👏👏👏loved it a lot😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww super msk to the rescue
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Posted: 14 years ago

Alone in Paradise 15



Maan didn't get how to stop her from crying.."please you first relax"
try to look at her but she was totally hiding her self in his arms...."if you will tell me then i will be able to find out what had happen?"
Geet: Take me home please...
Maan: i will take you home but first you calm down.. he drag her to car...
Geet: i donot want to stay here any more...
Maan: open car... "first you sit here & tell me what happen"
Geet: was all wet she was shivering with cold & fear.....wrap her arm around herself....
Maan: open car back door , taken out his coat..."wear it "he gave it to her...
Geet: looked at him & taken the coat.....
Maan: sit next to door near her...hold her hand "now tell me what happen, why you are so frighten?"
Geet: took a deep breath.... "i just don't want to marry him"
Maan: bus itni se baat ha.... looked at her hide his smiled.. slightly press her hand
Geet: he was rude with me...
Maan: what he did.... in an angry tone..
Geet: he was drunk , & was using filthy language .
Maan: did he touch you or hurt you....?he suddenly stand.
Geet: where are you going?
Maan: i told him not to hurt you or i will.... he closed her door....
Geet: where are you going? open door..
Maan: you sit in car i will teach him a lesson..
Geet: Maan see i am fine leave it ..
Maan: Geet i said you sit in car..
Geet: no i will come with you .. she hold his arm....
Maan: looked at her you sit i will be back in 5 mins..
Geet: please i don't want to sit in dark alone..
Maan: ok come..... they both walk to the hotel
Geet: if you listen me once i thing it is not needed.
Maan shhhhh..... he walk to the hall..he stopped
nt was shouting on top of her voice...."you idiot what have you done . you have ruin my plan"
Arjun: yar baat tou suno
nt: kya kuch suna ka leya baqi ha.
Arjun: oh yar i will say sorry.
nt: sorry... i asked you to carry on the drama for a month or so till i marry Maan.
Maan closed his fist
Arjun: when you cant make your place in 10 years time how would you make in 1 month.
nt: you fool jealousy would have made a relation...i know he love Geet but when he had seen you with her he would have.....Geet: looked at Maan...
Maan face was totally red with anger..he just removed Geet hand from his arm..... walk to the center of the room....."bravo Arjun & nt i treated you as my friend & you both had so much of venom for me in your hearts "
nt: looked at Maan: oh you are here....
Maan: shouted" what you think i would have left her alone & came here by her own ....
nt: murmur or was trying to gather words
Maan: nt if you liked me you should have come to me & told me directly , why you try to ruin an innocent life?"
nt: you care for that orphan more than yourself do you know that.. she grab Maan shirt..
Maan: let him self free... "If i care for her it is my problem not your's,& dare not think she is alone"
nt: why not mine? i loved you for last 10 years ...it was love at first sight.... but you never looked at me or cared for me...
Maan: nt pyar insan ka bas mein nahi hota yeh to hojata ha.....yeh nai dekhata ka kon kya ha ...nor religion nor status ..if it is done with status then it will be not love for the person it would be love for that's person's money... nt let me tell you, you loved my status my money, you never cared for me .... you always wanted i should give you expensive things....did you ever spend time with me other than that.... you always wanted a VIP treatment as my friend & spotlight on you..
nt: no i loved you..
Maan: if you loved me then you should have step down. you should be happy for me that i found my love .... but you continually try to create problem ... first was the drink do you think i don't know or i am a fool ... at new year eve i left Geet for 5 mins & you switched her drink.... then you mange to take those pictures ...
nt: that....
Maan:i am not finish yet .... you send those pics at home so that you can create problem between us...nt my love is pure i love her with core of my heart ....even she shout or fight with me i will not be angry with her.... for some time i was annoyed from her .& you grab the opportunity & send Arjun proposal.... ..he looked at Arjun....I knew Arjun for last 10 years, Geet is not 1 percent of his kind..but here i was defeated once again from a old friend..he betrayed me , broken my trust on him .. he did not thought of our friendship or time we had spend together he just became greedy for my money....
Arjun: Maan..
Maan: stopped him by his hand..."you both want my money take it he took out his wallet ...his credit cards ...& throw it on their faces.....take it but dare not hurt her .... "
nt: hold Maan hand ..Please Maan..i love you...
Maan: enough of it ... i don't know i will marry her or not , or where our life will take us but i don't want to meet you ever in my life again... i always treated you all as my sibling as my family but you had stab me in my back... i didn't felt that alone when i lost my parents as much i am feeling now...... All alone standing with people who are wearing masks .........who is mine?... you arjun or you nt.....he pointed at them.... he felt some one hold his hand..a cold shivering hand....
Maan: turn back ..
Geet: lets go from here ....
they both walk out of hotel... to parking lot.....
Maan: i am really feeling lonely today..
Geet: i am too as lonely as you are ..... tears were falling down her eyes .....
Maan: i don't know how to apologize from you for my so called friends deed...
Geet: ssshhhh placed her fingers at his lips.....no need to..... they both stared at each other........ "if you don't mind can i be your friend?"
Maan: do you really want to be?
Geet: yes i really want to be that person friend ,who daily send me flowers?who cover up my crazy acts when i am drunk...? who sit for hours & press my head when i have headache... who know me very well what kind of dresses i like to wear & he doesn't feel ashamed to show me off even in those old fashion dresses ..... who respect me with my past.... doesn't care & be come my driver just to protect me from this monster world ... her throat choke
Maan looked at her..... cup her face in his hand ....."don't cry please as i can't stand your tears."
both looked at each other ..their tears & rain flowed down on their faces ........they didn't knew either it was of happiness or of pain
Geet: placed her hand on his cheek ..."i am sorry"
Maan: smiled ... " swear to God i will next time be very care full if you are ....paused "
Geet: blushed..... next time you will not be needing any permission...paused
Maan: permission for ...
Geet: kuch nai.... it was raining heavily,, both ran to car...
Maan : oh so i can.. he try to come near to her....
Geet: raised her hand..
Maan: you just said next time i may not be needing permission...i though..
Geet: shyly hug him
Maan: hug her back.... he kissed her fore head...... wipe her tears from her face....."no more tears .."
Geet: kissed his cheek ...sorry....
Maan: smiled here too .... he bring his other cheek in front of her...
Geet: kissed it too..
Maan: smiled.... & &.... his cell started ringing.....Oh Dadi..
Maan: hi dadi ..
Dadi: where are you ? i am calling you for last 1 hour ... it is raining heavily
Maan: dadi dadi : cool down..he put call on speaker
Dadi: please go to hotel & pick up Geet..she is neither picking up her cell..
Maan: dadi aik bad news ha....
Geet: looked at him.. he placed his hand on Geet mouth
Dadi: kya........bolo Geet theek ha
Maan: dadi please listen with a strong heart.
Dadi: bolo ..shouted..
Maan: dadi Geet na mujhe se shadi ka leya ha kardi ha ..
Geet: oh when i said ....shouted she managed to remove her hand
Dadi: really...
Maan: you don't want to marry me ?
Geet: i didn't even said that...
Dadi: you both came home at once..
Maan: dadi jab tak yeh ha nai kara gi i will not ..
Dadi: Maan... tang na karo warna i will tell her that you send her flowers..
Geet: dadi you knew the secret admirer
Maan: smiled...dadi ......
Dadi: ok kiss her from my side....
Maan: sure dadi ..
Geet: dadi..
Maan cut call...now dadi had given me permission.....
Geet: just closed her eyes ..
Maan : kissed her ... I LOVE YOU..whisper in her ears....as the broke
Geet: I LOVE YOU TOO.. placed her arm around his neck Kissed him back......



They lived happily ever after.....in their paradise





The End


special thanks to you all for reading it & commenting on it... i hope this SS will stay in your heart & mind for quite sometime
special thanks to Hasan Shirazi for letting me use his track....

will be back with other SS or FF's... Love you all...
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Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice .. 👏

hey any chances of updating ur other FFs .. despair especially
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome story n awesome ending 🤗

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