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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
wat an update!!n i loved ur geet!!girls shud b like tat!!firm n bubbly!!n i loved how she faces him!!maan z getting jealoused of adi!!wao!!!plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update the next part soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

hi all.

thanks alot for the appreciation.

i loved it.

and here is the next part.

enjoy.






PART FOUR

"dad I am sleepy! We will talk later!" saying this maan got his speedy walk and went to his room and closed the door.

"what am I going to do with him??? Ye kyu nahi bhul jata un yaadon ko! Kyu reh reh kar unhe kuredta rehta hai. Jab mai bhul chukka hu to maan kyun nahi!!" vanraj said as he looked up.

Next day maan was asleep till late. He saw his clock and wake up with a startle! It showed 10 AM. He woke up and got ready for the office.

As usual everyone started to move here and there when it was 9 but maan didn't come. They thought he is not coming, and relaxed. They were talking with each other in groups. One was geet, pinky and adi's group and the other biiig one was of SASHA, yes, sasha, the one who maan trusted a lot and she was the most loyal one to him, but as we all know 'no one is perfect!' she has a deadly attitude! She is the only girl maan trusts (yes yes, he trusts dadima too but guys she is not a 'girl' now!).

They were talking happily when maan entered! He saw everyone scattered and talking! He got super angry. He said "WHATS GOING ON!!!! This is my office!!! Get to work!!! And you! (pointing at geet) come to my cabin!"

Geet also got angry as he pointed at her in front of everyone. But Sasha was shocked that first time in many months, he didn't notice her!

"may I come in SIR" said geet, same as yesterday.

"come in GEET!" geet came in and maan continued "how are the preparations?"

"huh?" geet said making a expression.

"how.are.the.pre-para-tions!" maan said, full annoyed at her expression, but in his heart he loved it!

"which pre-para-tions?" geet mimicked.

"THE PREPARATIONS OF THE PARTY GOD DAMMIT!!!" maan said in anger tone and loud voice. Geet frightened at his sudden anger and her eyes started to be welled up. Thank god for the air tight glass door, as no one outside can hear it.

Maan saw her face in a frightened mode, and his heart ached for her. He cursed himself and continued "tell me!"

"th.the pa.party?? but its on 5th November and n.now its only 29th October."

"I don't care!!!" saying this he again came closer to her and he stared deep in her eyes "you have to get started by now!!"

Geet was scared at his eyes burning with pure anger, and as a result she moved one step back from him and looked away, maan got more angry and putting his hand on her waist he made her come closer again. This scared geet to the core, she tried to free herself by trying to push him away by her hand. But his muscular arms dint even move.

Maan came closer to her neck and kissed the smooth skin. This made geet shiver. Maan was so lost that he again kissed it.

A tear dropped from her eyes, when maan was staring at her. The tear rolled down her cheeks. Maan quickly left her waist and took his hand away from her slowly. Geet quickly pushed him away and ran to her cabin, everyone saw her specially adi and pinky.

Geet closed the door of her cabin and leaned against it. The tears rolled down her cheeks like a train.

Maan was again disappointed at himself for loosing his cool. But he was unable to control himself when her face came in his sight. He punched his hand in the table and it got hurt badly, the blood came out as a shower. Soon his hand was covered with red liquid. He felt it coming out but did nothing to stop it. He just went somewhere.

After few seconds, in geet's cabin, she heard knock and she wiped away her tears with her hands, and opened it.

She was shocked to see maan there, and that too with a bleeding hand! He entered.

"s.sir your hand, its b.bleeding!" geet said scared and worried.

"look! I don't know what do u think of me! I don't care! But I cant stand u here! Just leave!!" saying this he clenched his same fist again and it started to bleed more.

"sir I cant leave! And I will NOT!! I m hired and that's final! I m not leaving!" geet said determined.

"you!!! AH!!!" he hit the glass window in her cabin, from which she could see his cabin connected. Actually it was the glass wall separating his and her cabin. And now he broke it!

Geet gasped and looked at him. She went running towards him, taking his hand in hers and caressing.

"WHATS INTO YOU!!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO YOURSELF!!! ARE U MAD!!! YOU STUPID ARROGANT MAN!!!!" saying this she ran out and took a first aid box from pinky and returned.

By that time maan had given up everything and sat on geet's chair. Geet came in and saw him sitting, she went to him and cleaned the wound with the cotton. After cleaning she saw a glass piece in his hand, she just stared at it. She was afraid to take it out, then stretching his hand, feeling nothing, maan took out the glass piece which entered his knuckles. He did it so badly that it increased the cut, he just pulled it out. Seeing this geet closed her eyes as she cant see the blood.

"Don't u feel pain???" geet asked super angry.

"no! I don't feel anything!!" maan said looking with the same intensity as it was in his cabin.

Hearing it, geet dint said a word as she knew it will be useless.

The bandage was going on, but maan couldn't control himself from staring at her. He saw her doing it so efficiently that he felt no pain.

The people outside did hear the voice of the glass-breaking but did nothing as it was usual for maan to break things in anger, but instead adi was worried for geet. She was very innocent, she had not seen a single piece of violence in her home, but now.

Maan was out of anger. Geet's sweet gesture of putting bandage has changed his mood instantly.

He just saw her face and said sorry to her in his mind. Sorry for hurting her.

He got up from the chair, but geet shouted "where are u going?? SIT DOWN!!!" maan's eyes popped up and he did as she said.

Geet then cleaned his wrist which had some traces of blood. After having it done, maan got up and said in barely audible voice to her "thanks" and left.

Geet was surprised. How can a man be so angry and then suddenly saying thanks! And That too, to the same person.

Then suddenly adi came in.

"geet!! R u fine?? maan sir-" he saw the glass broken and the traces of blood in it.

"adi." That's all geet could manage to say. Adi quickly came forward and hugged her. He felt her tears on his shoulder. He hugged her tightly and said "that's all geet! Don't work here! I request you. Get another job. U don't know maan sir."

"no!" geet said breaking the hug and crying. "I wont leave defeated, adi. You know I never gave up! And now too, I will not!" geet said and Adi felt concerned.

"geet, I m your big brother! And darji sent you here as my responsibility! I cant see you like this."

"yes, you are big! But just 4 months." Geet said smiling a bit.

"ohh! Then? I m big! No matter 4 months or 4 days. U will obey me!" adi said making her smile more.

"ohh my shweetttt brothheeerrrr!" saying this she squeezed adi's cheeks and he smiled too. He perfectly knew how to make her smile. Then she again said "I wont leave like this, I just, cant. You know na adi, this job is very important for me. I want to stand on my own feet. I want to do graduation by my own money." She said pleadingly to adi so that he lets her work there.

Geet was still in a shock.

She was confused too. She thought "maan sir is tarah mujh pe chilla nahi sakte! Wo kyu mujhe dekhte hi itna gussa ho jate hai.? I will find out ki unhe mujse kya problem hai! Unhe mujhe batana hi padega ki aisa kya kia hai maine jo wo mujse itni nafrat karte hai! Mai unki ye berukhi nahi sahungi. Mai abhi ja ke unse puchungi! And i wont tolerate his bad behavior against me."

She was thinking when adi disturbed her, "geet. What are u thinking!"

"uhh, nothing. Just some silly thoughts!"

"geet are u trying to lie to me! U know u seriously cant! Tell me!"

"adi I was thinking why maan sir is like that. He is so stubborn, arrogant and whatever not!"

"actually geet In his past----" as adi was about to tell, the door again knocked and pinky entered.

"geet, u ok?"

"yeah pinky, I m fine"

"ok. then lets go to see the hall for the diwali party."

"ohh god! I just forgot that." Geet said placing her one hand on her head.

"bye adi! I have to go!" geet said and went with pinky.

Maan on the other hand, after the bandage, was very much lost. So he preferred to get some time alone. So he told sasha not to disturb him for anything.

He sat on his chair, infront of his table and laptop. He opened a hidden profiled folder, on his laptop. It was named "Vanshika". . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Coming up:

Geet was asking so many questions from him.

Maan was so much screwed up with geet's questions that he grabbed her and pinned her to the wall and . . . . . . . . . .

Tell me guys how u liked it!

Comments appreciated!

Muskaan.

Edited by MastiMuskaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Hey Muskaan!!
Am I first to comment??Yay!!!!!!

Anyways,this update was awesome!
Loved it a lot yaar
He kissed her necked...omg
She was so commanding and he listened to her..lol

Thanks a lot for the update
Love you
Please update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
wowwwwww reallllyyyyyy nice update
plzzzzzzzz continue want 2 knw abt maans past😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
oh i loved it yaar..... maan was so lost in geet..so sweet... do update the next part soon,............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
hi good one dear
waiting for next part

love
monica
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Awesum FF
Jus loved Geet man she Tit for Tat towards Maan
Wen Maan interviewed her n the way she answered him was fab
Maan's dad was sho shweet
He really tried to control but cracked up after listening Geet's answeres😆😆
Loved Adi n Geet's relation
They are jus fab Bro n Sis
Now toh there is no wall seprating Maan n Geet's cabin😉
Maan always looses himself in frnt if Geet
Wats is that made Maan so rude yaar
Reveal that soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Geet is too fab here jus love her
She really got Hats off guts to stand n answer back Maan
Loved Pinky also
Dadi toh pehle hi pat gayi n Dad toh use pehle hi pat gaye
Geet wil paka be tehir daughter in law
Precap was fab
Waiting for it
Update soon longer parts n Plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hey muskaan that was nice update
maan is so scary....but geet bhi kam nahi hai😆
loved it
hope to read more soon
n plzz pm me next time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Hey! Jst enjoyd readin ur update, plz cn u add me to ur pm list.

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