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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Zara 🤗 finally u updated this ff after soo long
it was an awesome update
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do complete it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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welcome back
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Plz pm me too.. Love it to its core!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*Part24 (b)*


"oyee khotteee"

armaan had lost the count of this word..since the time he had entered in chadha house for rahul and muskaan marriage…so the scene was that after that deadly encounter in rahul's home that day when riddhima got to know about their not- so- well- planed -plan….she decided to forgive rahul and muskaan on benefit of doubt….as their intentions were good after it but as usual armaan was accused of being most insensitive person alive on earth..he never got time to talk to riddhima in last two days after their return back home…he was so despo to know the reason for which that two evils were forgiven that easily but not him.


Rahul and muskaan wedding was already decided in this week…this option was also included in their master plan to get riddhima on her best friend's wedding…they succeeded in it but one person wasat loss and that was none other than armaan mallik.


So he was here with muskaan in chadha house….as riddhima and anjie already decided to be on groom's side then he has no choice but to join bride's side. Only after two hours of his stay at her chadha mention he realized what a huge mistake he had of his life.


"tumhare ghar mai log normal pitch par baat nahe kar sakte kia?".


He nudged muskaan as he finally found her sitting on her bed with heavy embroidery dresses all over it as he tried to pick one of dresses to make place on bed to sit for him.


"ye kia kar rahe hooo?".


She shouted…tearing his ear membrane.


"woaah…..relax lady….sorry to ask it" he was about to left in frustration when she called him.


"hey armaan…..please jaa kay riddhima ko le aa na…mujhy sangeet kay lie dress chose karna hai or mere dimagh patha jar ha hai par kuch smajh nahe a raha".


"mai…….?? Are you sure?".


"of course tu…..ab zayada bhao mat kha…I know tu us se baat karne kay lie mara ja raha hai"


"nahe ab aise bhi koi baat nahe".


He ruffled his hairs faking blush.

"oyeee drame…..ab ja naa….mere ghar mai log kam nahe hai use lane kay lie".


"abee….ja raha hon naa…tu he kab se late kara rahe hai…mai ne kab mana kia".


He rushed outside and she smiled on him. How she wished both of her best friends to be together on the biggest day of her life and that was looking quite possible now.


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As he entered in anjie greeted him with friendly hug and ask him to come in.

"so….is every thing fine now?". She asked generously.

"ya ya….i am fine".

"not you duffer….i can see you are more than fine today…I was asking about both of you".


He blushed a bit and realized he had plastered a constant smile on his face as the time he left chadha mention to pick her up and now it caused him embarrassment so he made a spat face.

"ya ya everything is fine".


He was just not comfortable to talk about them to anjie as he knew her hardly and never get a time to gell with her.

"ok….cool……..so?".

"so………..?".

He asked her back foolishly not getting what she meant with so…she wanted to know the purpose of him sitting in their lounge.

"I mean……..what are you doing here?".

She had to come clear to him as he was proving himself dumb creature again and again.

"o yeah…..actually muski need riddhima's help so she asked me to pick her up".

"ohhk….but I don't think she would go with you".


She announced casually as she recalled her long night chit chat with her.


As riddhima entered her home after long years she felt nothing but blessed as she hugged her dad, mom and anjie….whole family stood there at door with heavy hearts and teary eyes to get her back. They never forced her to tell them what made her to leave all this like that….anjie and her mom knew well there was something else than that job only for which she left her family and decided to cut off from each and every person around her.


But her dad….he believed her daughter to be highly professional and serious about her career and believed that she preferred her family over her career for which he felt proud of her but little he knew was that it was not the case.


Anjie who was more closer to her and already knew about armaan stuff she had guessed it but wanted to know all from her only….riddhima felt guilty for being unfair to her family shewas being selfish in all these years…..only thing she cared about was armaan even if it was hating him she only decided to do that in her life and left all the people who love her….in whose life she had some major place and more than that but she never bothered to realize others feeling s…..she was just concern about her heart….her feelings….her loneliness…..her life….her decisions and that realization dawned upon her when she saw the pain in their eyes and that was for her absence in their lives…..she decided to tell anjie everything and her mom too very soon about armaan…..it was only some natak she was doing with him for his prank but somewhere inside she knew everything was stable now between them and soon she had to tell hr parents about it so she decided to act on it from now…..this was one of the reasons she opened her heart to anjie first….she knew she would be there by her side if she needed her.


"is my question that tough to answer?".


Finally he had to shake her shoulder to get answer from her who was so much absorbed in her thoughts.

"haan…what did you said?".

She had no idea what he was asking for.


"just a simple question….please call…… riddhima I wana talk".


"ohh…yeah she is in her room…..upstairs on left".


He gave her perplexed look…….is she asking me to go to her sister room…is she serious or playing some game on me.

He could not help but to think like that. She read his confusion on his face:

"you wana go or you wana wait for dad to call her for you".

"no no….i am going".


He rushed upstairs leaving her giggling behind….she really wanted to see her little to see happy and after that last night their confrontation she realized her happiness lied in one name only and that was ARMAAN MALLIK.


He knocked at the door after reaching there….when he heard her "come in" he did not waited for other moment to open….her sentence only completed whenhe had done damage already…she turned to say "anjiee" and next moment she was shock enough to say anything and more than her he was in a death shock to see her in her towel only….casually tied around her chest till her knees….she was probably drying her hair as he just noticed hair dryer in her hand and as she turned to look at anjie but find him standing there with mouth open wide and like a statue not even blinking once and then it was only


"aaahhh"

in the room that snapped him out of statue to human being list once again what he was just before that deadly encounter…without wasting any time he ran to her stopping her to call her entire family in the room and spoiled his image which he never got a chance to make even till now.


"shhh…..dont shout sab aa jayen ge"


She was struggling hard under his hand as he was in serious to stop her breath literally…. finally she had to bit his hand at corner to take her next breath for life.


"stupid…jerk…what are you doing here….you almost killed me".

"am I looking that hot kia?".


Very innocently he looked at himself to find out what was actually making her die on his looks.


"arghhh……..not funny….now get lost I have to change".

She pointed toward the door to show him way out like he never knew about it.


"you want me to sit there…..aww riddhima….okay I am waiting…you change please but fast okay I don't have time".

Very calmly he went to stool that was kept just beside the door and sat there like it was routine for him to watch her changing.


She snatched her hairs literally in frustration that was limit of irritating and he knew very well he was getting on her nerves so he smiled to himself ….quite enjoying the sight before him….droplets sliding on her cheeks making their way to inside the towel and by now her nose and cheek had turned in to red courtesy to armaan mallik himself for making her angry so much…..but then suddenly he realized his purpose of coming there.


"man….what the hell I am doing…I am suppose to be nice with her as she is suppose to angry with me, which she is not I know very well but still she ll resume her nutanki for few days since I know her too well…but here what I have done….look at her face man…like she gona burst out any moment…this place is not safe for you any more mr mallik….you are so dead".


She was witnessing the change in his expressions as he seated there then suddenly got up "ohhh…I am so sorry…I am waiting outside…I change and you come….i mean you change and come outside..i am waiting".


He said in one go and ran for his life leaving perplexed riddhima behind.

"iss ka dimahg hai ya kia hai????ya shayad hai bhi nahe….but whatever you are so dead mr.mallik for this nonsense of yours…argghhh".

Still mad on him she moved to bathroom to change finally.

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She was glaring at him and mumbling under breath umpteenth time stupid jerk moron dumb duffer khotta (this one was courtesy to muski) but whatever she had learned in her whole life she was using at him at the moment sitting with him in a car who was trying to be so cool with white shirt,jeans and black shades no doubt he was looking cool but arghhh……… she was not suppose to think like that…..she had to think of some plan to irritate him as he did….but she can never ever meet his level no matter how much she tried in this irritating stuff…he was just master of it….she sighed feeling pity for herself….even her family now was not on her side….she recalled what happened when she came down all dressed up.


When he told he muski had send him to pick her no way in this life she was going with that man after what just happened but when anjie and pdma interfered in it she was left with no choice but to agree with them because other choice was to tell them reason of her denial which was quite embarrassing for her to tell them the whole towel scene stuff and what followed after that had no sense in it….so it was useless to do even any effort to make them understand her point of view so she just sighed and got in car with him.


She heard something like kind of singing which got her attention and broke her chain of thoughts…she focused a little more on voice and its source she got to know it was not too far it was just coming straight from the mouth of a person driving next to her.


"sheila…sheila ki jawani….i am too sexy for you…tu mere hath hi ane".


When she heard him finally singing his very own original version of sheila and knew very well what was inspiration behind she just closed her fists in anger and frustration.


"have he ever heard the things like sur and taal…man he is singing like a nursery rhyme..hell with singing….what the hell on earth make him sing that cheesy song"


It was not enough for him yet as he was having time of his lifetime….grinning foolishly at her and sang again but this time a bit louder….of course the person for who he was dedicating this new version….cant miss it.


"riddhimaa………riddhimaaa ki jawanii…..you are too sexy baby…tu mere hath he aniii".


He decided to not to look at her after that he knew very well which will follow after it…….firstly she could not believe her ears but then as soon she realized ya it happened in actual…her jaw dropped down in shock and as she turned to him attack like a wild cat…he stopped the car with a jerk as he was much expecting this reaction and of course he never wanted this one to their last journey of life as he had much much more ahead to tease and moreover love her for the rest of his life.


He snapped out when he found her in attacking position…leaving her seat and bending on him….well that was not what he had expected her to react.


"woooh…..wooh….jungli billi…..leave me"


he pretended to afraid of her as she leaned on him, holding his collar with both hands.

He wondered what she is actually trying to do with this….he smirked at his thought.


She found him smiling to himself it was then she realized her half body was lying on him as his head was rested back and she felt his hands on her wait pulling her even closer if it was possible.


"I like your way of revenge riddhima very much….but you know problem is that I am really not comfortable in car…I hope you understand plus there are lots of guests around who are starring at us right now….so please don't mind…can we continue inside".


He winked at her grinning widely ear to ear.

She looked around…they were in parking of muski home and he was right about people starring in the car..she got up suddenly and making her hairs and dress in place…all embarrassed and red once again but not of anger this time.

He looked at her and smiled opening the door of car for her. She came out not meeting his gaze, not any one, looking down almost ran inside.


He sighed saying under breath...

"I love you riddhima….my sheila"

rolling his eyes on his own joke and brushing away all the sheila thoughts he went in too.


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Edited by zara-KSG-malik - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg !!! Armaan n Riddhima 🤣
he doesn't spare any occasion to tease her nah!!! omg when he got in her room n she told him to get out, he sat on the stool beside the door in the room itself ??? n what u said "sat there like it was routine for him to watch her changing" 🤣
n the sheila's song , omg my stomach is paining now laughing!!!!!!!!

but that was awesome!!! love it!!!!

Cont soon, thanks 4 the pm
Tc 😃
Muahh

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
hahahahha armaan is soo funny!
i love him teasing riddhima!
continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
woowowow lovely part
loved armaan n his nautanki
i almost forgot the last part
kitna time lagta hai update karne mein
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
omg omg i love it
specially the bit of sheila ki jawani
awesome
continue soon

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