~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

I need some time to write..it was too good..will come back and comment pakka..

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Razz22

@Razz22

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

wow.... that was truly beautiful....

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

nice update yaar,,,,loved it ...

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nan_10

@nan_10

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

nice update

very well described their feeling

it was emotional i felt it as i was reading it

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MONICA OBEROI

@zebronics

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

u really a good writer yaar

pls continue soon

and don't forget to Pm me

love

monica

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Loved it again😊

It was so good!!!👏👏

The flashback scene was really nicely portrayed.

And the way Maan let his heart out in front of Geet was so emotional! My eyes were moist after reading this part. He has as much pain as Geet has.

Geet wanted to comfort him, but wasn't able to speak since she herself hasn't healed but she comforted him by the hug!

No, no, don't wrap it up quick please. Now don't make it a SS😛 We want this to be a long, vey long FF!😊

I really love your writing. The emotions, feelings come out alive through your words.

And the pace is also fine. I am just loving the flow.

Please don't stop, its a request😳

BTW whats your name?😊

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

that was really awesome update.....

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

No dear,you are not boring us with your writing...instead you have shown what a fabulous writer you are through this update 👏 👏 👏.....not romance always shows the depth of love,sometimes pain is the one which shows the bond between two souls,the love between two hearts,the need for one another.....and this update has definetly shown that.......I'm honoured to read your thoughts,feelings......

Can I know your name please????

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Nice update

Atlast Maan said watevr was in his Heart

Loved the way Geet listened to him n witout any words jus tried to tak his pain away

I wish evn Geet opens up herself soon

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

😊wow....i just luved ur take....i have been a silent reader but i just had to say that u are a very good writer plz do continue fast...ur story is soo emotional....and plz pm me when u update ...thanks...

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