~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 36

Originally posted by: smj1977

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thanx dear for liking it

mistakes are inevitable

at least yours have no grammatic mistakes

some FF I try to read have so bad grammer that I find it very difficult to read

may be their contents are good but still I dont like having head ache after reading terrible english as well as hindi

yours is nice no criminal errors just silly mistakes which happen even with me when I write mine

your FF has a lot of potential explore them

no need to End, you can carry on you have matter worth 50-60 parts you only need to explore it

ALL THE BEST

thanks Buddy.. it is good to know. The response,typed with one hand only as my little one was leaning on my other arm at that time. 😆 and yes, i had no plan to conclude it this early either, but as i said my daily schedule won't permit me to update fast, and that defenitly affect my connection with each part..

really loved the way maan answered kanika want to see her face expressions yaar and really happy for maan nad geet as they r going to b parents sooooooooo party time

Originally posted by: hinalshah

really loved the way maan answered kanika want to see her face expressions yaar and really happy for maan nad geet as they r going to b parents sooooooooo party time

thanks for the quick response... i really value it.. was little concerned about college part.. but i need to get the spirit out from me.... so thank you...

lovely lovely lovely update

wow!! maan and his answers..

kanika..fell flat on her face..

geet is the same geet handa..and now GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA..

cont soon

Oh no why stoped at dis point i want to see geets reaction....... Maan was abt to say........ But i want geet to stood up nd tell everybdy dat she is Mrs. Maan singh khurana.....

hey r u gonna finish the ff...............pls dont its very nice ff.............i loved the convo in college but y is this kanika after maan's personal life.......is it like in the next part the truth is gonna come out............it wud b nice if u extend to some more parts....one for the truth abt geet's marriage and then abt the reactions of all including sasha.........one abt her success as ceo of indian paints and then her life after kids............make it few more parts dear.............

😡 Kanika 😡

Great update!! Seems like the truth is very close to being out...

Originally posted by: avi4rubi

thanks Buddy.. it is good to know. The response,typed theresponse with one hand only as my little one was leaning on my other arm at that time. 😆 and yes, i had no plan to conclude it this early either, but as i said my daily schedule won't permit me to update fast, and that defenitly affect my connection with each part..

so only winding up with few parts, to get the satisfaction.. for myself.. I don't know how otheres will take it.. but yes, i love story telling and really get excited when I see the response.. so this few parts are results of the response I got from here. so I thank you all for that...