Love Walked In (AR) part 11 on pg 49 11/28

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Hey my name is Hirra... I'm starting another ff'the inspiration that I got to make another is for the song below'this story is about AR and others'.the name is love walked in...hope you like


Love Walked In
This is a story about a girl that lost her mother in a very little age and her dad really doesn't care much about her after the mother died' The girl lived her whole life in a boarding school even on vacations she never came home' Sometimes her dad does realize his mistake of sending her away and promise to always do something that is good for her' While living 13 years away from her dad she made herself reserved she doesn't really open up to anyone' She has two friends that know some what about her but they don't know the whole true' She loves to help people in anything they need help with, example Work, love life problem and etc'. she is always finds ways to make herself happy'. She love to party to get away from stress in her life and love to sit in quiet area to make herself clam in life'. No one knows but she cries a lot just to get the love she diverse' when she sees other peoples parent with them she feels jealous of them' she was never very much loved but is waiting for it'. This story is about how she was waiting for love in her live and what happens when love walks in. will the love stay in her live or will it moves away due to a wrong decision made by her or her dad or even her love'.


The inspiration to the story is by a song called
KAISA YEH JUNOON

Kahi Daira bana hai
Kahi Aakhri hai...
Mahi bol bol haari
Koi hai jo sunn rahaa hai

Ye koi jaane naa
keh dil manay naa

Ye koi jaane naa
keh dil manay naa


Bikhar jaye naa

Kaisa ye junoon. kahi mile naa sukhoon. dekho kahi bhi qaraar aye rey.
Diwana hay kaun, yaha beghaana hay kaun, dekho zindagi bekaar jaye rey
Koi bheer main karha hai, Koi khud mein chal raha hai,
Mahi bol bol haari, yaha jo hai be-sila hai,

Ye saato aasma, hum inke darmiyaa
Ye saato aasma, hum inke darmiyaa
Bich-char jaye naa,

Kaisa hai junoon. kahi mile naa sukhoon. dekho kahi bhi qaraar aye rey.
Diwana hay kaun, yaha beghaana hay kaun, dekho zindagi bekaar jaye rey

chalti chalti jaye, aik aandhi...jo andhi bhi nahi
Jab se kalai, kuch baandhi, aur baandhi bhi nahi
Jaha raastein ne jhora
wahi faasley ne thora.
Mahi bol bol haari
yahaa sub ne haath choraa,

Ye koi jaane naa
keh dil manay naa

Ye koi jaane naa
keh dil manay naa

Bikhar jaye naa,
Kaisa hai junoon. kahi mile naa sukhoon. dekho kahi bhi qaraar aye rey.
Diwana hay kaun, yaha beghaana hay kaun, dekho zindagi bekaar jaye rey

Kaisa hai junoon. kahi mile naa sukhoon. dekho kahi bhi qaraar aye rey.
Diwana hay kaun, yaha beghaana hay kaun, dekho zindagi bekaar jaye rey

Kaisa hai junoon. kahi mile naa sukhoon. dekho kahi bhi qaraar aye rey.
Diwana hay kaun, yaha beghaana hay kaun, dekho zindagi bekaar jaye rey
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Index
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 3
part 3 page 5
part 4 page 8
part 5 page 12
part 6 page 16
part 7 page 21
part 8 page 25
part 9 page 31
part 10 page 35
part 11 page 49
Edited by iceprincess101 - 13 years ago
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hey dear u r writing on AR
so i love toread thier fic
so do pm me
when u update
love u
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heyy dear
cont soon
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thx
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Hey dear
plz continue soon
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Part 1

A girl standing in her apartment's living room looking at the view of LA'.

Thinking about where her life brought her'. thinking about her mother who passed away went she was 10 years old'. thinking about how her father treats her'. she thought her life would be different after coming back home after a long time but no everything is still the same'. a women in her 50's enters the room'

Woman: Riddhima would you like to do dinner'

Riddhima: Thank you Mary but I'm not hungry'

Mary: Are you sure? I mean that you didn't have lunch and you still are not hungry'

Riddhima: Is dad home yet'

Mary: you know he never does dinner at home'Today day he had a party to attend'His friend son came back and they are throwing him a party'

Riddhima: oh'. (Her face expression were very sad)

Mary: Ridzi you wait'. I know one day you will find the love that you have been waiting for'

Mary was the most trustworthy house keeper'. she took care of Riddhima after her mom died'she has seen how Riddhima wanted to be loved by her father'how she always wants him to be there for her'. always want her to be happy'she knows how lonely Riddhima got after her mother died and went her father went into deep depression'. She has seen Riddhima grow up as a strong woman and independent women that could take care of them self'she could see that Riddhima want to spend some time with her father after all Riddhima did just come back two days ago'. but there was no hope to that'.

Mary: Riddhima now would you eat dinner'

Riddhima: no' (While nodding her head in a childish way)

Mary: not for anyone else but eat for me'

Riddhima: please don't emotional blackmail me' (Saying this while pouting)

Mary: plzzzzzz

Riddhima: fine'I will'but you have to eat with me'

Mary nodded her head: yes'now come the dinners is getting cold' (While giving her a smile and by seeing her smile after a long time)

They walk together to the dinner table and have dinner and Mary asking how Riddhima was in boarding school and college'she asks about her friends' they have fun talk'.Mary could see that Riddhima was smile after a long time and she just admired her talking'

After their talk both of them together respected rooms to sleep'

Mary was in her room thinking about Riddhima and says to herself praying to god'

Mary: god plz keep Riddhima happy'plz help find the love she always wanted to have' always keep her happy and keep her smiling'

Riddhima in her room'.

Thinks about her past again and about what she should do in her life next'she says to herself'

Riddhima: where was I wrong'I'm not the cause of mom death then why is dad treating me like I am the one to blamed'I was always good then why doesn't he treat me like every father treats his daughter'I want you back mom'plzzzzzz' I still wish you come back and I know you can't but at least make dad come back to me'I miss you mom'I miss dad too'why can't he realize that I am also suffering cause of your death not just him'

She cried and cried remember how that all use to be when she was little'

***Flashback***

A woman in her early 30's trying to wake up her little 10-year-old daughter for school'.

Padma: Riddhima get up you'll be late'.

Riddhima: no mom dad said I don't have to go to school on my birthday'

Padma: he said what'

Shashank entry the room'

Shashank: I said that my little princess does not have to go to school on her birthday'

Padma: but why?

Shashank: because we will spend some family time together'go shopping for her gift and have fun'

Riddhima: see mom' dad the best I knew that he was going to plan this'

Shashank: see Padma' I knew my daughter was going to love the family time'

Padma looks at both of them and says: I don't think that I'm needed here'the father and daughter already made plan without me'

Riddhima: mom'we will have fun and it's my birthday I want to be the two most beautiful people in the world'

Then she went and took them in a group hug'

Riddhima: I love you guys'you are the world's best parents and I thankful to god that he gave you all to me'

Shashank: we love you too sweetheart'

He bent down and kissed her on her cheek and hugged her'

Shashank: we are lucky as well that we have you in our lives'happy birthday sweetheart'

Padma: we also are happy that god gave us a wonderful gift which is you'

She also hugged Riddhima and kissed her cheek'

Shashank: ok'now would the most beautiful ladies in the world go get ready we have to leave'because it's party time'

Riddhima: yeah dad'it's going to be so much fun...mom I want to wear the dress dad brought me'.

Padma: ok beta'

Shashank: hurry up'

They all leave and have a wonderful family time'laughing, playing and enjoying the family time'

***Flashback ended***

Riddhima: I really wish my life would go back and always stay as it use to be'I'm missing them so much'

She cried a little more and soon fell asleep'

Edited by ridziqbal - 14 years ago
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heyy dear
nice part
awww feel sad for her
cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Hey.

Like your FF.. Me too a die hard fan of AR 😛.. So pls add me to your PM list.. Wanna read about your story ..
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hey dear nice part
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