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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.
to cadetsr trying manged leave thru auntie.....nice lage raho.
aunty-raj convo was grt.
finally they managed their leabe.
train scene was nice........naina was feeling something on raj's touch.........awwwww
waiting for marriage seq.
waiting for next update.
contiue soon.
thanks for the pm.
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice part.

to cadetsr trying manged leave thru auntie.....nice lage raho.
aunty-raj convo was grt.
finally they managed their leabe.
train scene was nice........naina was feeling something on raj's touch.........awwwww
waiting for marriage seq.
waiting for next update.
contiue soon.
thanks for the pm.


Thanx..bt it wasn't a train scene..i think you mistook it.they went by car..two different cars.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Band Baaja Baraat..

Everybody is dancing together on a loud and Punjabi music played by the band walas. Anuj is sitting on the ghodi, watching his dancing family. It was actually surprising to watch Rajveer dancing, and that too so good. He wore an off white sherwani with red thread work on it and looked extremely handsome.(Note: Rajveer has met Naina's mom, but acted as if he didn't recognize her and Naina also told her mom that he knows nothing about them) As they reach the door of the banquet hall, the sisters of Heeba, including Pooja came to the door to welcome the baraat. After all the bargaining sessions, milni and jaimala, all the cadets with Capt. Rajveer, assemble near a food stall in the banquet hall itself. All the boys wore sherwaani of different colours and styles, and looked amazingly handsome. Pooja and Naina also looked breath-taking, the former in a blue lehenga and the latter in a red one.

Huda: Chalo roz ki us disciplined life se thoda break to mila…(turning towards Rajveer) Aap ko maza aaya na Sir?

Rajveer: (smiling) haan..bahut..

Pooja: Sir..aap to bada achha dance karte hain..hume to pata hi nahi tha..

Rajveer: Thanks! Anybody for coffee?

Pooja: mere liye ek..please..

Rajveer: Sure. Aur kisiko chahiye?

Everybody shake their heads and Huda and Alekh takeYudi away from the rest of the group as Rajveer goes to take the coffee.

*HUDA-YUDI-ALEKH (PRIVATE)*

Huda: vo dekh saamne..(pointing to a stall far away)

Yudi: Kya?

Alekh: Bear Bar!!

Yudi: to?

Huda: abe to kya? Chal hamare saath..ek peg lagake aate hain. Abhi nikal lete hain..Capt. Rajveer bhi nahi hai..

Yudi: No guys..I don't drink. You guys go..

Alekh: agar tere bina hi jaana hota to hum kab ke chale jaate. Mujhe to tab sedaaru ki smell aa rahi thi jab hum darwaaze par hi the.

Yudi: to phir tum log mujhe kyun apne saath lena chahte ho?

Huda: Taki tu Rajveer Sir ko kuchh bak na de..ki hum dono kya kar rahe hai. Aur agar hum tujhe bina bataye jaate, to tu hume dundh bhi leta aur pasva bhi deta.kyunki Capt. Rajveer thode na tujhe aise chhodenge..ab samjh aaya? Nahi bhi aaya ho to chal..

Before Yudi could speak anything, Huda and Alekh dragged him with them to the bar. Now Pooja and Naina are standing their only asking each other about each other's ornaments, dresses, footwears………………………………cosmetics, handbags, etc…

After discussing almost everything they wore or carried, when they weren't left with any other item to discuss about, Pooja looked at her surroundings. She saw a very cute and handsome man with dimples, walking around. She found him so good-looking that she couldn't help herself control but ask Naina about this particular man.

Pooja: Naina..Naina..

Naina: haan..bol

Pooja: Vo samne jo yellow kurte mein handsome sa ladka khada hai..vo kaun hai?

Naina: (looks around to find a man who fitted in the characteristics that Pooja said, and finally finds THE man)Vo…vo bhi Anuj ki tarah mere cousin hain..aur Anuj ke real brother.

Pooja: achha!! Milva na please unse..please..

Naina: achha ruk..

Naina: (calling out loudly) Armaan Bhaiya…(the man turns around to find her sister calling him) idhar aaiye na please..(moving her hand so as to make him clear..because in THAT loud music, signals serve greater communication facilities than words)

Pooja gets excited watching the handsome cum cute man coming towards her. And finally he arrives.

Naina: Hie bhaiya..Meet Pooja..my friend…(Armaan looks at her, smiles and then gives her a brief nod which signifies "hello") And Pooja..he's my brother..Armaan.

Pooja: (who is filled with thousands of emotions at the moment) Hie..Nice to meet you…(brings her hand forward to shake her hand with his)

Armaan also reciprocates the shake. And tries to take his hand back, but Pooja doesn't let go off his hand, and keeps looking into his deep blue eyes. Armaan tries again but all in vain. Helplessly, he looks at Naina, asking for help. Naina fells weird at this but shrugs Pooja's shoulder to bring her back to the world. After shrugging her thrice, Pooja comes back to her senses and leaves his hand, feeling embarrassed.

Then suddenly a pretty lady arrives there. She looked around 23 and was wearing a green saari. She looked extremely pretty and beautiful. Everybody in the hall was looking at her only.

The pretty lady: Armaan..main kab se tumhe dhoondh rahi hoon…tum yahan..(Armaan turns around)

Armaan: Are Riddhima tum..Meet Pooja, Naina's friend(Riddhima smiles) And Pooja, this's my beautiful wife, Riddhima.(winks at Riddhima, who blushes a little)

Pooja: WIFE??? (Completely shocked)

Naina: (looking at Pooja, with meaningful eyes) Haan..Wife…Aur meri sweet si bhabhi (giving Riddhima a side hug) Ye dono doctors hain..

Pooja:Oh! Nice jodi…Aap.. aap dono saath mein bohat achhe lagte hain..(hesitatingly)

Armaan: Thanks..(looking at Riddhima, teasingly)

Pooja: Achha chalo..let's go and hit the dance floor.

Riddhima: Nahi..tum log enjoy karo..main yahan Armaan ko bulane aayi thi..stage par jaana hai…kuchh kaam hai udhar..to hum chalet hain..baad mein milenge..

Pooja: Okay…

Armaan and Riddhima depart from the talk and move towards the stage.

Pooja: Tune bataya kyun nahi ke unki shaadi ho chuki hai? (hiting Naina)

Naina: Tune puchha hi nahi..(giggling)

Rajveer enters holding a cup of coffee.

Rajveer: Ye lo Pooja..tumhari coffee.

Pooja: Aap itni late kyun aaye? Aur aapka cup kaha hai? (taking the cup)

Rajveer: Main pehle bhi aaya tha..magar tum dono pata nahi kya..diamond hai..ruby hai..bole ja rahe the..to coffee thandi ho gayi thi..phir main phirse gaya..aur dusri leke aaya..tab tum kisi aur ke saath khade the..baat kar rahe the..to maine socha ke disturb na hi karu..uske baa dab main tumhare liye coffe leke aaya hun..aur maine apni coffee peeli.

Pooja: Okay!! I mean sorry for the inconvenience..

Rajveer: No..no it's alright.

Pooja: Vaise ab mera coffee pene ka man bhi nahi kar raha..

Rajveer: Koi baat nahi..main pi leta hoon..I love coffee..

Pooja: theek hai..good! Aap coffee peejiye..tab tak I'll go and hit the DJ…Naina tu chalegi mere saath?

Naina: Nahi..tu jaa…mera mood nahi hai..

Pooja: as your wish! (Pooja exits leaving behind Rajveer and Naina alone)

Naina: (looking at Rajveer who's drinking coffee) aap ko coffee itni achhi lagti hai?

Rajveer: (taking the last sip of coffee) hmm..i am addicted to it. Jitni bhi de do..kam hi lagti hai..

Naina giggles as she hears this. Then she looks at her left and finds a lady, in a heavy saari walking away in hurry. Naina recognizes the lady and speaks up.

Naina: Palak Di…!! (The lady turns around) Itni jaldi mein kaha jaa rahe ho?

Palak: Are vo..Aravh aur Arohi room mein so rahe hai..uth gaye to rone lagenge…Unke pass jaa rahi thi.. itne kaam hai..offo..

Rajveer: koi baat nahi..aap kaam keehiye..hum dono unke paas chale jaate hain..

Palak: aap kaun? Maine aap ko pehchana nahi..( in a light tone)

Naina: ye..vo…

Rajveer: Mera naam Rajveer hai..Naina meri student hai...

Palak: Oh! Nice to meet you Rajveer…lekin kya tum un dono ko sambhal loge?

Rajveer: ofcouse..bache hi to hai..aur Naina bhi to hogi na mere saath..(looks at Naina who blushes)

Palak: theek hai..vo banquet hall ke corner mein jo dressing room hai na..waha par dono so rahe hai..please dhayan rakhna haan..main jaati hoon…aur kuchh problem ho to main stage ke paas hi milungi…bula lena..theek hai..aur..

Naina: bas..bas..Di!! hume samajh aa gaya..aap jaeye..

Palak satisfactorily sighs and leaves.

Rajveer: (looking at Naina) Chalein ma'am?

Naina: Yes Sir!! (saluting him)

And they both start moving towards the room.

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Phewwwww!!! Quite a long part this time. And with AR surprise too!! I loved writing it. And the next part includes only RN.opps!! the children too..Do comment!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
really a nice part.......hope to read more RN moments..
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was so nice
plz continue soon with lots of RN
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeah...thats a nice part.....as it lets us knw that the next part is gonna be on Raj n Naina....hehe. And yeah AR surprise is nice....but are they a cameo? Lolz...I dont mind either way....and well...am looking forward to the next part then....continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi 😊
the up is good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
so sab log shaadi ke mahool mein mast haai😊😊😊😊😊🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
huda alekh aur yudi sab jaate bar mein aur pooja aur naina starts gossiping about their clothes as every girls do 😊😊
aur yeh pooja armaan se fida ho gaya😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍par ridz is his wife becchare pooja dil tuta uska😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
par ab naina aur rajveer are going to take care of palak's children hmmm aaccha haai practice makes a mnan perfect😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
plz cont soon and pm me
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.
i enjoy this shadiwala mahol.
so,huda, alekh n yuvi r enjoying their own way🤣
AR surprise was too gud...........loved it.
waiting for raj-naina moment.......with palak off course😉
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Rocking part
Everyone is surprised to see that Raj can dance so well.
Alekh and Huda sneak away to get some drinks and pull Yudi with them because they are afraid that Yudi would tell Raj.
Raj likes kids and naina is surprised when Raj offers to watch over them.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice ff yaar
Just read ur ff nd i liked it
Im wondering, isnt it similar to the actuall story
Luuv ya

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