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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a nice part. I was thinking how wud Raj manage to go to the wedding....but his mom...wah!! Wat a lady...made it all soooo easy...for RN...hehe. And well here...Raj has no clue abt his feelings....hmm...nice!!

And yeah...the cadets-Raj's mom scene...along wid Raj-Raj's mom scene....all was very nice....and not to mention funny!! Gr8 job dear....w8ing for the wedding part now....seems to be interesting!! Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

That was a nice part. I was thinking how wud Raj manage to go to the wedding....but his mom...wah!! Wat a lady...made it all soooo easy...for RN...hehe. And well here...Raj has no clue abt his feelings....hmm...nice!!

And yeah...the cadets-Raj's mom scene...along wid Raj-Raj's mom scene....all was very nice....and not to mention funny!! Gr8 job dear....w8ing for the wedding part now....seems to be interesting!! Pls continue soon.


Thanx..And although I haven't started writing the next part, I know it would be gr8 fun..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part.
Toh saare cadets ne aapni baat manvane ka plan bana hi liya.
They convinced Raj's mom to plea for their leave. Aur Raj bhi apne mom ki baat nahi taal pata. Poor fellow did not stand a chance.
Aur toh aur his mom wants him to attend the wedding as well.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Here goes the next part guys!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Parking Lot

KMA's parking lot is always loaded with hundreds of military trucks and jeeps, but today it has 5 of its cadets holding their bags and suitcases and waiting for Capt. Rajveer.

Yudi: Kya yaar Naina..tujhe kya zarurat thi Rajveer Sir ko apne bhai ki shaadi mein bulane ki? Ab hume saare raaste "so-called-quiet-students" ki tarah rehna hoga…(moving his fingers in air to explain his comment)

Naina: Maine bola na yaar…maine unhe invite nahi kiya..vo to Auntie ji nahi kaha tha ke Rajveer ko bhi le lo..vo yahan kya karega..kabhi uski bhi to shaadi hoga..and all..

Yudi: Yaa..lekin phir bhi tu kuchh bahana to bana sakti thi na..

Huda: are chhod..hume ki takleef dega vo..hume uski vajah se koi problem nahi hogi..

Pooja: Aur ye tu kaise bol sakta hai?

Huda: Kyunki Rajveer sir hamare saath jaa hu nahi rahe..

Everybody speak up at once-"WHAT"?

Huda: Mera matlab hai ke hum log to ladki walon ki taraf se hain..kyunki hume Ali ne invite kiya hai..aur Capt. Rajveer ko Naina ne..to vo ladke walon ki taraf se hue na..Aur maine iske bare mein Capt. Rajveer ko bhi bata diya hai..to ab hum logo ke liye do cars aayengi..ek Kanpur jayegi..aur ek Delhi..

Everybody gets excited at this and return back to their festive moods, except Naina.

Naina: But guys!! This is not done. Maine tum logo ko bola nahi iska matlab ye nahi hai ke maine tumhe invite nahi..i mean..

Yudi: We know what you mean Naina. But we're soooooooo sorry..Hum log Kanpur jaa rahe hain..and you and Capt. Rajveer..Delhi..So..enjoy the trip..

Naina: Please guys..please..main..tum..sab..I mean.. (out of words to say anything)

Pooja: Chill maar yaar..koi baat nahi..sirf ek din ki hi to baat hai na…shaadi ke din to hum log Delhi mein honge..saath mein!

Naina: lekin guys..

Huda: ab..lekin vekin kuchh nahi..it's done..

Naina turns her back towards them in order to show that she doesn't aprove of their plan.

Alekh sees her retreating figure and decides to speak up.

Alekh: Koi baat nahi Naina..main hoon na tere saath…(Naina turns towards him) ye tino Kanpur jaayenge..aur hum tino..tu, main aur vo Hitler, hum log Delhi..aur Shaadi ke din to hum log saath mein honge na..

Pooja: Chal theek hai..Alekh tere saath jayega…ab to theek hai na Naina?

Naina: Okay! Lekin shaadi ke din hum sab saath mein hi rahenge..tum sab ladki walon ki taraf mat bhag jaana..okay?

Yudi: Okay!! Done..

Suddenly Capt. Rajveer appears on the scene, wearing a blue jeans and a green coloured T-shirt. Pooja and Naina keep staring at him till he reaches near them.

Rajveer: So cadets! Let's go and hit the bunk!(cheerfully)

Yudi: Sure Sir..bye..

Pooja and Huda: bye Sir..aur Alekh aapke aur Naina ke saath aa raha hai…

Rajveer: Okay! Good! Bye guys..

Yudi, Pooja and Huda excitedly enter their car and leave for Kanpur while Alekh, Naina and Rajveer leave for Delhi in another car.

HEEBA-ANUJ's WEDDING DAY!!!

During their journey, Yudi, pooja and Huda had great fun. They sang songs, played games, danced in the confined place and ate lot of things. The driver of their car was also very frank and got mixed up with them in their journey.

While the experience that Rajveer, Naina and Alekh had, was completely contrasting. Alekh kept sleeping all through the journey. Rajveer and Naina made a little talk initially about the weather, but Rajveer kept looking outside and watching the scenes after that. Sometimes occasionally Rajveer's hand touched Naina's. She found herself trembling at his touch, whereas Rajveer was unknown to the fact that he was touching her, although not deliberately, but he was actually touching her.

Ali's family and Naina's family, both had welcomed their guests with open hearts. They felt like it was their house in which they have come like guests. Past one day has passed with complete enjoyment and fun. All the rituals got rejuvenated by them. It was very a very lively experience for all of them.

And today is the wedding day. The bride's side has already arrived at the venue. The baraat is about to come. So there is completely hustle-bustle going on in there. Yudi, Pooja, Alekh and Ali are the most excited, for the baraat, ofcourse after Heeba. And here comes the baraat!!

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I know thoda chhota tha..par this was all I could write in this month's busy schedule..Sorry!! But I hope you'll like it. And please do comment

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part....update soon.............hope to see some rn scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwee...thats a nice one. Rajveer went wid Naina...and Aalekh accompanied them....hmm...not bad!! May be nothing much happened....but that touching of hands...and feeling a tremble is enough for this level I guess...hehe.

will be w8ing for the wedding day to begin...lets see how everything goes!! Continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi the up is good so naina alekh and rajveer went together while huda yudi and pooja went in another car that's cool
ab dekhte haai shaadi mein kya hungama hota haai
plz cont soon and plz bring some rn moments so they we all can cheerish on it and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Alekh decides to join Rajveer and Naina on their journey to Delhi, just to give naina some company. Where as Huda, Yudi and Pooj enjoy their trip to Kanpur.
Waiting to see what happens in the wedding.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx every1...and just wait n watch!! The next part has too many surprises n RN scenes too..you would have a blast!!

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