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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Raj knows that naina is naveen's sister and he has promised to help her prove Naveen innocent.
Everyone wants to go and attend the wedding. Waiting to see how they are all going to get leaves.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was great
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey nice ff dear...

liked all the parts...

if possible PM me when u update next....😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxx a lot for the support guys!!! By the way I promise you won't miss Rajveer in the coming parts..so be happy guys...
And A VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR to all of you...love ya..
Edited by RiddhiB - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey so sorry for being late.i was so busy.bt main parha tha bt to lazy to give a comment.so ali and naina is becoming rishtedar wow .aur rajveer sir ki mom ka kya hua,lage hatho raj aur naina ki shaadi bhi karwa deneko bol unhe.kharcha kam hojayega.
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Posted: 14 years ago
add me 2 the pm list plz.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

add me 2 the pm list plz.............😊

I have added:D😃😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

"Pleaseeeee…..Auntie"

All the cadets had gathered around their "lovely auntie" aka Rajveer's mom, trying to convince her to convince Rajveer to convince the authorities for their leaves. Much of convincing work! Pheewww!!!

Auntie: isme main kya kar sakti hoon beta?

Huda: bahut kuchh kar sakti hain aap auntie. Aap "ma" ho "MAA"!! (Moving his hands in air to produce a greater impact)

Yudi: Exactly! Aap auntie to humari ho par Rajveer Sir ki to aap "Maa" ho..(raising his eyebrows to show her, her grand position) Aur Rajveer Sir..hehe..Sir to vo hamare hain..aur aapke"bete" (making a face to show how small Rajveer is in front of her)

Pooja: Aapne use paal paus ke bada kiya hai..itni baat bhi nahi manega kya vo aapki..

Auntie: NAHI MANEGA NA…..

Pooja : (unexpected of this answer from her) nahi manenge to aap ko manana hoga na..Afterall aap unki maa hai..aapka adhikaar hai un par..

Yudi: Yes..she HAVE this right! And it's Rajveer sir's duty to obey your orders. A child HAS to obey his parents, no matter what!

Naina: Aur haan auntie aap samajhiye na..sirf mere bhai ki shaadi hoti to chalta..par ab to Ali ki behan ki bhi shaadi hai..DO-DO shadiyan hain..(winking at Pooja) Aur DO shaadiyon ke liye humne din hi kitne maange hain…sirf DO!!

Pooja: aur aap hain ki…hihehihe..(makes a false cry to provoke her)

Auntie, over-filled with confidence, stands up and lets out a deep breath. Each drama-queen and king present in the room waited excitedly for her action and response. She had a feeling of proudness and confidence in her eyes. She opened her mouth and instantly spoke up.

Auntie: follow me, everyone.

Everybody looked at her amazed and confused, as to what was she upto? But she had already started walking out of the room, they didn't wait either and started following her. Their confusion as to where she was leading them to, unlocked when they saw her entering HIS office, RAJVEER's office. They excitedly enter the office.

All the cadets hide themselves behind a brown curtain near the door, while Auntie walks straight to where her son was standing, reading a file.

Rajveer looks up from the file to find his mother puffed up with confidence.

Rajveer: Hie mom..

Maa: main teri "maa" hoon

Rajveer: I know…And guess "mom" and "maa" mean the same. (Sarcastically)

Maa: Lekin tu mujhe "maa" samakhta to nahi na..

Rajveer: What? Mom..I mean maa..aap ye sab kya keh rahi ho..I can't get it.

Maa: Ek baat bata..tu mera beta hai ya nahi?

Rajveer: Haan..so?

Maa: So children obey their parents or not?

Rajveer: ya..they obey..

Maa: To tu meri baat kyun nahi suntan?

Rajveer: What? Maine aapki kaunsi baat nahi suni..maa? Maa..look..I don't have time for this drama…please tell me ke aap ye sab kyun keh rahi ho..Please maa..you are getting on my nerves now.

Maa: To phir meri ye baat maan..tu sab cadets ko do din ki chhuti de de.

Rajveer: Oh! Now I know ke ye drama ka reason kya tha…(looks around to find the cadets and finally his eyes land on "that" curtain) Come on..cadets..bahar aa jaayo…I have seen you..

All the cadets come out, embarrassed and then stand in a line near their lovely auntie.

They keep staring the floor and nobody dares to look at that "look" on Rajveer's face.

Rajveer: Main aap sab ko saath mein chhuti nahi de sakta cadets.(straight away)

Auntie: lekin kyun? Sirf do din ki hi to baat hai..do dino mein tum military waale inko aisi kya training de doge..jo ye baad mein nahi seekh payenge?

Rajveer: Maa..

Before he could speak, Auntie huddles in.

Auntie: Mujhe nahi pata..inke itne karibi doston ke bhai-behan ki shaadi hai…aur inhone sirf do din ka hi to time maaga hai…isme problem kya hai?

Rajveer: lekin maa..

Auntie: Lekin vekin kuchh nahi…tu in sab ki leaves ke liye aage baat karega…that's final..tujhe meri kasam..

And with those words, all the cadets became sure that they would be getting the leave permission. Rajveer also couldn't do anything after that. He relentently agreed. All the cadets got contented and jumbled .around Rajveer to hug him. Yudi,Pooja, Huda and even Alekh hugged Rajveer warmly and left the room hurrying towards their rooms for packing. But when Naina hugged Rajveer, they both felt some different kind of feeling. Naina felt a shiver down her spine. When Naina separated from the hug, they kept looking in each other's eyes constantly. Their eyes represented love but they didn't know it. Although Naina had a clue of what she felt for Rajveer, but Rajveer was completely unfamiliar to the fact. Their eyelocking session didn't go unnoticed by Rajveer's mom. She kept looking from Naina to Rajveer and Rajveer to Naina.

Finally, she decided to put an end to their present eye-interlock. She cleared her throat in order to make them aware of their surroundings. Hearing the signal to stop what they were doing now, they both came back to their senses.

Naina: (looking down) main..main vo..main jaati hoon… (Naina hurries to the door)

Auntie: Ruko..

Naina felt a lump forming in her mouth when she heard her stopping her. She turns around to find her smiling.

Auntie: Beta..tumhaare bhai ki shaadi hai na?

Naina: jee auntie..

Auntie: Vo main soch rahi thi ke jab tum sab cadets ko chhuti mil hi jayegi..to phir Rajveer yahan akela kya karega...(her mind building a great plan) Rajveer bhi agar tumhaare bhai ki shaadi mein aa jaaye to?

Naina: jee..why not..(feeling very happy at her proposal)

Rajveer: (irritated) No maa..it's not going to be like that. I am not going anywhere.

Auntie: are tujhe jaana hi hoga..ab teri bhi to kabhi shaadi hogi na..tu dekh kar aa sab rasamein hoti kaise hain…aur phir kya pata tujhe waha apni dulhan hi mil jaaye.(looking at Naina who's looking at Rajveer)

Rajveer: no maa..no!!

Auntie: Tujhe jaana hoga..tujhe meri kasam.

Rajveer: This "kasam" is a big torture. I hate you for this mom.

Auntie: Keep hating..but tujhe shaadi mein to jaana hi hoga…I'll pack your bags.

Rajveer stands there helplessly as Auntie leaves the room.

Rajveer: Okay..Main chalunga shaadi mein..

Naina: As if you have choice!

Rajveer: What?

Naina: nothing.

And with that Naina moves out to go to her own room and Rajveer moves towards the office to report the absence of the cadets and himself too for the next 2 days.

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Happy new year guys!! And I hope you loved the part. Do coment. Love you all..

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Posted: 14 years ago

the

up is good
aur tune mere baat maane that's really good
rajveer ke mom ne na he sab cadets ke leave conform kiya par uske saath he saath rajveer ko bhi shaadi mein dia wow i love rajveer's mom
anyways ab dekhte haai shaadi mein raj-naina ke love stroy track pe aate haai
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was great
plz continue soon

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