MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151 - Page 46

OMG that was totalllyyy AWSUM sorry for replying late, hve beennn veriiiii busiii wid work, work, work and more of work... nwayssss i nw ur also busi bt please post a realliii long update, and gosh im such a die heart fan of kidnap, like i totallly love ittt, so plz update more of it... and thanks jas for making way for us ff readerss! :P

Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...

Thank you sooo much!

You are truly Amazing to write me such a sweet comment! i am so happy you liked it! LoL, you made me smile so wideee. Every time I would stop, the next thing you say would just make the smile widen! My sister looked at me as if I were mental! Awwww! You fainted over the chapter, and i fainted hearing the tareef! hehe! Next chapter dedicated to you! 8-) haha, you want more blushing scenes eh? Incase you dunno I'm 13! Lolzz, don't worry, i'll try to add those for you! And ya, i am making more maaneet scenes for next update! i'm happy you liked those lines! you mad eme feel so special! thanks soo mcuh! I always look forwards to ur comments!

Love You!

-Jassi

Jassi
haye awesome update dear
it was rocking update
wow Gt is so smart and intelligent but Mn - he is more smart than her.
hehehehehehee the kiss was fantastic

i feel really very sad for Gt. but jo hua accha hua.
now everything will be fine b/w Gt and Mn soon.

i think in next part we will get maneet hug.

Very good update
keep it up

Jas, be honest with me now. Are you honestly only 13?

I'm not trying to be patronising at all!!! I'm just so confused about how you can write up such .. such .. FAB scenarios and depict them so Awesomely as well!!! I LOVED that part!! Uff that was sooooooo freakin' brilliant, and has initiated my ... 'fav chapter' list. This has Got to be my fav chapter so far! It is So So So well written. The dialogue, descriptions... I dunno Jas, just everything. You've got a great style of writing too - like, it's so much fun reading your updates!

I love how you made Geet hit Maan for 'misbehaving' / kissing her like that in this part! Even though that kiss was... wow and I absolutely loved it lol I thought it was a brilliant, Fab fab fabbbbb reaction!! I was like Go Geet! Meri Sherni!! 👏 😆 I wanna present her this >> ⭐️ and Maan... omg, I'd present him Myself!! 😆

I feel So horrible for her though - with that ass Dev cheating on her. Urgh, he's just the way he was in the show! Ass. However, I love you for it Jassi BECAUSE now Geet can't feel guilty for starting to feel something for Maan 😉 Let's get this love track started!!!! 🥳 😆 of course not just yet, as she's mega annoyed / angry and so heartbroken. I'm glad Maan just let her be the way she was when he entered the room + didn't say a word when she screwed at him too. Awww Jas! Is he gonna comfort her? Like forcefully grab her into his embrace just so she can let it out - all her tears I mean. Poor girl!! I do doubt that in a way, cos they're not really at a stage to do that. He is attracted to her (and I will allow myself to believe that she's somewhat attracted to him too!) I don't know if he's ready to comfort her though - he's still gotta be the fierce kidnapper right? Who is just So Damn Sexy - as he himself says lol.

I just Have to tell you - I know this is soon, but I'm Loving this Maan a million times more than the Maan in your previous ff 😳 😃 As well Maaneet, the concept and story so far in this one. Jas your a fantastic writer!!! Loving your updates!! KEEP it up my CandyCoatedLilMunchkin!

Saz
xxxxx

read ur last 2 updates....

Sweetie when u updating next?

Originally posted by: MaanKiGeet...

^^ Soon but dunno when! Hehe

Probably be4 Friday!

Cool :-) Thanks😊

Originally posted by: ansah

that was superb update....really loved it

and maaneet are jsut so adorable....

it sure is geet hawt....and i am loving it

great that dev turn out to be a jerk...

and when is maaneet happening....

hope so soon...and waiting for the suspense

to be uncovered......

Originally posted by: hinalshah

tht idiot dev stupid always behind money good u kicked him out of the story hope she doent hurt herself bcoz of tht idiot
really loved the update
plzzzzzzzzzzzz update next part soon