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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz

hey jassi!
m luvin it!
d way she gets back at him!
at too gud!
m really luvin it loadzzz!
n wtz geet gnna do....may d door is open or sumthing...n she tried to get away!?!?!
update soon!
really curious to noe wtz gnna happen!
n srry not got enough time to write a long comment!
but i loved it loadzzzz!
update soon!

love
Navpreet

🤗Navpreeeeeeet!🤗
Awww! Thanks so much!
Me too loves writing scenes when Geet gets back at Maan!
I'm happy ur liking it!
Keep Wondering, you might be a bit shocked!
It's okay, at least u commented!
There's always next time for longer comments! Heehe😉
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 20tullip2000

hi jassi....
add me to your pm list i was unable to add u in my buddy list

i have been waiting for your update ....
it has a very different story line and unique one too it is very interesting one tooo
very mean of u that u left it on such a point
i love the way maan snatched the knife from her and also when he came close to her she was to much petrified ..
but this is not love it can only be called infatuation . but i m eagerly waiting waiting for it to turn it into love
and about the guess i think that maan might have left his lap top in the living room and she would use it to mail to someone and tell about herself.
i m very very very curious to know the motive behind the kidnap
love
kritika



Awwww! Thanks So Much Kritika!
I'm sooo happy you liked it!
Will definitely add you! Don't Worry!
That's a good guess, you will find out next update if it was rite or wrong
Thanks again!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

i cant guess any reason for maan to kidnap geet..

Dunno when I'll reveal! It's fun to leave you guys in suspense!
hehe, i'm evil! i know!
-Jassi

Originally posted by: Shalve

wow ... loved it.... pls update soon

Thanks!
Will try!
-Jassi

Originally posted by: lody

U know I like to see geet start to fall for maan like she still in maan house for one year and then she ran and that maan was liking her be fore like he see her be for kidnap geet and was liking her but now he start to fall for her and I like ur color word and thanks for pm plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

Thanks soooo much!
i'm so happy you liked it!
I will consider your suggestions!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Prettierpreeti

awesome update..........

loved it a lot.😊
i think maan is attracted to geet... its not love
soon he will fall for her😉
poor geet...😭..... waiting to know why maan kidnapped her....😕
cant imagine adi helped in kidnapping......😉
waiting for the next update.................

Heyyy. Thanks so much!
Enjoyed reading your comment!
Thansk again for commenting!
Will try to update soon!!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chubzy

Nice update! I realy cnt guess wat is she upto bt m eager to knw, lovd ur update, waitin to knw why he kidnapd her. Maan 4 nw is jst attractd towards her bt its a beginnin of love.

Thanks Youuuu! I'm happy you liked it! Thanks again for sharing your views! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Hey Jassi!

OMG! I loved it to the fullest! Was really laughing hard throughout.....Geet thinks her kidnapper is hot....lmao.....and Maan called her a professional eavesdropper.....🤣......I love their angry retorts dripped in sarcasm.....they are superb! Lolz.....Geet tried to stab Maan with that knife.....she is one gutsy person. Great! Maan thinks that the Handas are stupid and that Geet is an exception.....lolz....he is even attracted to her.....start of something I guess.....and is also a bit scared of her anger....me likes it! Lolz.

As for your analysis question, I too think that it's just an attraction.....which will mature into love.....he also cares for her a bit.....me thinks!

Love ya girl! Do continue soon.


Huh?? You were laughing! NOOOOO!! Lolzz, I'm trying to make it a serious FF! Hehe... I guess, i just can't! I'm Jokinggg! Your comments are so enjoyable! Thanks for always commenting and making me sooo happyyy. Thanks, also for sharing your views! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shining_moon

it was simply awesome

geet's anger is way too much for maan to handle.......bechare ko veg katne pare😆😆😆
loved their convo...thanks for bolding the dialogues it really made it easier to read
using colour code is up to u I m fine with bolding also
I felt sad for geet for wat maan did to her.....I mean getting physical n stuff....but still knowing he is the hero won't mind if he repeats that😉😆😆
n I think may b geet saw maan's ph on the table which he might have forgotten or may b the keys😕...
n as far as analysis ques is concerned I think maan is just physically attracted to geet coz some weak moments can't b love but then attraction is the first step to love😉😳😳😳
n a ton for the pm
hope to read more soon so plzzzz do update soon
I hope I have given a long enough reply😊

Awwww! Thank you Dearieee!! So sweet of you to actually accept my request for long comments!! Sooooo nice of you!
Seriously, you comment mad eme smile a lottt!!!😃😃<< like that!
Thanks so much for your comments!
Happy you like the update!
And, thanks for appreaciating my efforts of bolding dialogues!!
And Thanks, yet again for sharing your views!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Jes75

Hey Jassi ...good update yaar ...now i'm dying to know why MSK kidnapped Geet .....😊 so plz update soon ....

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

superb!!!
loved the update
awesome work
do continue soon

Thanks Guyzzz!
Will definitely try to update soon!
I hope, some time this week!!
<3
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jassi!
I really want to hug you and kiss you!!! - Awwww!!! Mee toooooo! <3
Thanks a lot yaar for the awesome update
I'm really addicted to this FF!!
Thanks a ton for liking it!
I loved the update yaar
I'm gonna read it again and again till u update...
What? Really?! OMG!! Thanks so much! i feel so special
Please please please update soon😉
Will try...

Now,my favourite parts...
Aww! Your taking out time to that! How sweet of you!
"His name is Maan Singh Khurana. He seems to be a rich business dude. He's hot...What the hell! Where did that come from?" Haha..you don't know where did that come from,huh,Geet? LOL..
He leaned in and his lips touched her collarbone. Geet felt electric vibes running through her. Her eyes widened in shock and she stood there while Maan continued to kiss her neck.OMG... This was HOT!!Sent a chill down my spine..
Wow! Didn't know, my garbage writing could do that!
Maan didn't feel guilty or anything. He was just enjoying himself.Of coz,MSK ko toh mazaa hi aayega...haha..Zaalim khurana kahin ka!!!
Her eyes were red from crying over Dev. Maan looked at her and felt a little bad seeing her state.Relieved that he's not ALL mean!!
LOL! He's the hero after all!
Maan noticed a red mark just under her collarbone. That was where he bit her. It made him remember how heavenly those moments were for him. Yeah,right...Hurt our phool-si Geet and enjoy urself...wait till our sherni kills you,then we'll see who will smile.
haha... one point she phool other second sherni! Hehe
"Maan Singh Khurana!" Maan heard Geet yell loud and angry. He wondered how she knew his name. He loved the way she said his name.
"What is it?" Maan asked as if he was really annoyed by her, while entering the kitchen.
"How the hell am I supposed to cut these vegetables, if there isn't a knife?" she asked with anger in her voice again, and her hand on her hips. She always got angry really easily.
"First of all, you cannot talk to me so rudely, and second, use your mind'That is, if you have one, and think of a good reason as to why I would let you use a knife after what you tried," Maan said. Geet shot him a glare.
Maan stared at her while Geet tried to come up with something to say. She was darn hungry, and she needed a knife.
"First of all, don't look at me because I hate when you do, and second, you will also get to eat the lasagna so I don't think you would want to eat it with big fat vegetables floating around," Geet said the same way he did.
Maan chuckled, "You think, I'm dying to eat lasagna made by you? Do you even know how to make it?"
Geet looked at him fuming. Maan was hurting her ego, with every line he said. While Maan looked at her a bit scared. Her anger was enough to set the building on fire.
"Okay, okay! Since you look like you are going to explode any second, I'll get you a knife, but please calm down," Maan said. Hahaha...darr gaya na...ooh...mere mu mein bhi paani aa gaya...give me some*with teary eyes*...haha😆
LoLzz...

"She's probably seeing me in the vegetables," Maan thought.While he said that to himself, she was again, chopped loudly as if wanting to murder the vegetables. He was afraid, she might hurt herself so he made his way into the kitchen."Why the hell are you making so much noise?" Maan asked making an angry face as he entered the kitchen.She looked at him and started chopping even louder. 🤣🤣 Hahahahahahahaha...that's the kind of thing I'll expect Mrs.MSK to do....haha..can't stop laughing!

Thanks!!!!!
Just then, there was a knock on the door. Maan noticed Geet's hopeful expression.He smirked and said, "Don't get so happy. It's Adi, the guy who kidnapped you from your room." Aw...bechari ka dil toot gaya! 😆

Geet thought of Maan. To Geet, he looked like a bad guy just from his face. An angry, rude, arrogant, rich, intimidating, dangerous, villain. Geet sighed. Hahahahaha...that's exactly what my sister says!

Hawwww!!! How can your sis think like that bout MSK!!?? i mean THE MSK! LoLzz... My older sis doens't lie him too much either! hahaha, sister these days! Have no damn taste!
Now I think she saw Maan's phone in the hall which he left accidentally...Am I close to the right answer? Yes I really appreciate that you bolded the dialogues😃No,no..there's no need to colour code yaar...bolding is enough!
Thanks Yaar!

My prediction >> I think he'll realise that he left his phone and he'll come back and Geet wouldn't know that and is still trying to figure out the code(security lock,like the one in the iPhone)...He barges in and snatches his phone...locks her in a room or something...

Hmmm... Maybe I should've done that, but it's too late now, cause I already wrote what happens! Trust me, you will be shocked!
As you can see,I'm in no hurry for her to free herself..haha...wanting more intense moments between them!

Thanks a lot yaar for the awesome update

Loved it

Please update soon

Love you


PS:Was this long enough?😉

Of Course it was! Damn, you made me smile soo much! And you amde me feel so special! I had khushi ke aansoon-- literally!
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AwWwwwwW! Thanks soo much!
BIG HUG!
Incase, you didn't notice I replied in bold above ^^^
-Jassi
EDIT
I think I will update on Friday or Saturday - Maybe earlier!
Edited by MaanKiGeet... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoini

i cnt guess what geets nxt step is ..maybe scream tht shes hurt or smething ...or fake illness ....

Keep Wondering...
You'll see what happens when I update!
-Jassi
Your Welcome!
-Jassi

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