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Ur ff is different n i lyked it very much. Do add to ur pm list
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Update coming soon! :-)

Maybe half an hour!
Love you all! Especially 'pushpi' who pestered me to update! Love you for that! You'd always remind me to get working on the update! And it's finally ready!!!!
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Heyyy.

I know, its been a long time! Here's the update finally! Thanks, pushpi and bluedreamz, who gave me wonderful comments and asked me to update!

Thanks everyone who commented!

And since 'Dhara_s' guessed right about what Geet's gonna do, she got a role in the FF, of Geet's sis.

Excuse Mistakes! Didn't edit! The Kidnap

Recap:

She sighed and started making the lasagna. Her stomach was rumbling. She was planning on eavesdropping again, but decided against it because she was too hungry to care about what the two men were talking about. She sat down and started eating. It was getting dark outside. There was a window in the kitchen. She looked outside. It was the huge parking lot of the building. It was empty.There was only one car. It was probably the Adi guy's. Then, she saw two men outside walking, deep in discussion. She noticed it was her kidnapper and the Adi guy. She went out of the kitchen. An idea struck her brain, when she saw what was in the living room.

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Chapter 3:

"Somebody isn't too smart!" Geet thought in her head, evilly.

Geet eyed Adi's iPhone. She rushed to the kitchen window to check if the coast was clear. Maan and Adi were standing by the car talking. Geet took a deep breath in and let it out. She hurried over to the living room. She pressed the button to call. She kept her ear open for any sound indicating Maan Singh Khurana's arrival.

"Argh!" Geet yelled in frusturation.

For some reason the phone was frozen on some stupid cricket site.

"Oh Wow! Mr. Dravid scored a century!" Geet said in her head, while she waited for the phone to unfreeze, and then added, "From 349 balls?"

She laughed.

"Aaj kal ke cricket players..." Geet said in her head.

The phone unfroze. She sighed of relief. She ran to the kitnchen window to check again. They were standing by Adi's car tallking.

"Suckers!" Geet thought in her head. She dialed her dad's number as fast as she could, and ended up dialing the number wrong, "Damn!"

She dialed again, but no one picked up, "Please Dad! Pick up the phone!"

She then tried her sister's number. Her heart was thumping loudly. What if he was coming. Thankfully, her sister answered, "Hello?"

"Hi Dhara! It's me Geet!" Geet said quickly, her eyes filling with tears of hapiness.

"Geet? Oh my god! I have to tell you something about De-" Dhara started, but Geet cut her off.

"I don't have time Dhara! Jaldi meri baat suno! I didn't runaway from home yesterday. Someone kidnapped me! His name is'" Geet was explaining and was about to mention Maan's name when she felt somebody's lips forced onto hers stopping her from saying anything.

Her eyes widened in shock when she felt his lips against hers. It actually took her some time to realize what was even happening. While kissing her he snatched the phone out of her hand, turning it off right away while he continued to kiss her senselessly. She was the only woman he lost control around. She was making him go wild. He pulled her as close as he could by her waist. She was lost and too shocked to do anything. Maan moved his hands to her hair, feeling the smoothness, going through it with his fingers. He started sucking on her lips. Geet was trying to push him away, but Maan held her wrists and twisted them behind her back. Geet struggled to free her from him. When, nothing worked, she finally kicked him hard in the nuts. He almost fell back. She looked at him disgusted. She couldn't control her anger and slapped him twice as hard as she kicked him. Even that wasn't enough to stop her anger. She took Adi's phone and threw it in Maan's face hitting his head. Tears streamed down her face, and she ran into a room slamming the door shut.

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Maan was furious. Not only did she kick him, she slapped him as hard as she could. And, to top that she flung the phone at my face. How dare she? Geet wasn't the only one with anger problems. Maan also got angry easily. And when he did, it was twice as much as Geet. Maan paced around angrily. Adi had realized he left his phone in the house. Maan knew this meant danger, if Geet saw it, so Maan had ran as fast as he could to retrieve it for Adi. Little did he know that if he was a second late he would've been exposed. This Geet was making this kidnapping harder than ever. If he just covered her mouth with his hand, she could've still blurted out his name, so he had to think fast. He felt that kissing her was necessary to shut her up. Although, he did feel a little guilty when he saw the tears make their way out of her eyes. Maan decided to go and return Adi's phone. Before he left, he made sure every thing was locked. Maan even double checked to make sure his laptop was password protected. Thankfully, Adi's iPhone didn't break.

Geet sat against the bedroom door sobbing in her hands. She was finding it hard to believe what happened. How could he just do that? That is illegal! Did it make a difference? Even kidnapping her, was illegal. There was nothing she could do about it. It wasn't like she did something bad. She was asking her sister for help. Anyone kidnapped would try to do the same. He can't blame me for almost exposing him! I have every right to try! She was still finding it hard to believe that her first kiss ever was like this. What would Dev do if he found out? Would he leave her? No! Dev isn't like that. He would never leave me, no matter what! She wished she could kill this Maan Singh Khurana. Damn! She was only one second away from exposing Maan Singh Khurana. Well, at least they know she hasn't run away, and she has been kidnapped. But, how will they find me?

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November 21, 2010. It was officially the worst day of Geet's life. Geet didn't come out of the room even once. She was hungry, but would not eat. She didn't want to see his face. It was dark outside, so it was probably 10 o'clock, because Geet had been in the room for many hours. The next second. Somebody barged into the room with a furious look. It was Maan. Geet gave him an angry look.

"Go away!" Geet yelled in frustration.

Maan was done putting up with her rude behaviour and angry looks. He simply ignored what she said and walked towards her angrily. He gripped her arm tightly, and took her out of the room.

"Stop it!" Geet yelled, "Let me go!"

Maan continued to take her to the living room, while Geet tried to free herself. Maan made her sit on the table and got her teh lasagna she had made.

"Eat!" Maan ordered.

Geet just sat there, not wanting to obey him, simply because Maan was ordering her to.

"Eat or else, you have no idea, what I'll do!" Maan shouted.

Geet looked at him terrified. She slowly started to eat.

"I'm not eating because you told me to. I'm eating because I made this for myself," she lied, not wanting him to think she was listening to him.

Maan rolled his eyes at her childishness and thought, "As if I can't see the fear in her eyes."

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"Hello Adi," Maan spoke into the phone, "Geet used your phone to call her sister, they know that Geet's been kidnapped."

"What? Now we have to start our plan earlier," said Adi.

"Yes Adi. On Friday, I'll make the first phone call," said Maan, "Let them worry for a few days."

Geet was just eating and listening while Maan and Adi were talking on the phone. She was curious to know what they meant. She would've asked, but just looking at him would've made her furious. She quickly glanced at him. He was disconnecting the call. There was a mark on his forehead because she had threw the phone at him. She was satisfied with herself for doing that.

She was walking towards the kitchen with her dishes, when Maan interrupted, "Wash all the dishes in the sink."

Geet gave him a wide-eyed 'WhatTheHell!' look.

"Aise mat dekho! Go and wash the dishes!" Maan yelled, he was punishing her for injuring him.

She continue to gawk at him as if he were an alien. Maan stared her down.

"I know I'm sexy, but you can stare at me later," Maan said.

Geet rolled her eyes and went into the kitchen. Hell no! I'm not washing any dishes! She put the dishes in the sink and walked out of the kitchen. She was planning on going into the room and having some alone time, so she won't have to see that stupid kidnapper's face, but he held her wrist, stopping her from going anywhere. She instantly slapped his hand away from her wrist.

"Don't touch me!" Geet shouted her signature line.

"Kyun? Dev aa jaayega? I'm hell scared!" he mocked. Geet looked at him angrily.

"Give me these angry looks later. Now, go and wash the dishes," Maan said.

"Ugghh!" Geet said in frustration as she made her way to the kitchen.

"I hate you, Maan Singh Khurana!" she muttered under her breath, but Maan heard.

He smirked, at how she always uses his first name just like he usually does. Maan was reading something on Geet's phone, while Geet washed the dishes, purposely banging them loudly.

"Oww!" Geet yelled.

Maan quickly got up, shoving the phone in his pocket and ran into the kitchen.

"What happened?" Maan asked entering.

Geet's bleeding index finger, caught Maan's attention. He rushed over to her holding her finger in his hand. He put it under cold water. The bleeding stopped.

"Can't you be careful?" Maan asked angrily.

Maan went to get something.

"Don't you think, I need to see a doctor?" Geet asked hopefully.

Maan rolled his eyes at her.

"What a stupid attempt," Maan said, as he bandaged her finger, carefully.

"Argh!" Geet groaned.

Geet noticed something in Maan's pocket. It looked exactly like her iPhone which was basically her life. She knew it must be hers.

"You have my iPhone?" Geet asked.

"Yes," replied Maan.

"Can I please, please have it! I swear, I won't try to contact anyone! Please!" she pleaded.

"Umm... I don't think you should have it. It'd be better if you don't" Maan said a bit hesitant.

Geet looked at him curiously, "Why? Please, can I have it! Put a lock on calling."

"Fine, I enabled calling, texting, and the Internet," Maan said, and then hesitantly added, "But, you can read new text messages."

Geet wanted to thank him, but remembered that he's the enemy, Maan Singh Khurana, the enemy! She took her phone and happily went into a room and started playing games. Then, she remembered that the Maan Singh Khurana dude said, she can read text messages. She took a deep breath when she saw there were 7 recent text messages, since her kidnapping. She started wiht the first one she'd recieved since then.

From: Dad 912 539 0649

Geet beta, bachpana chodo! Jaldo vaapas aa jao! Please! Hume phone karo beta

"I wish I could, Dad!" Geet said as her eyes welled up.

From: Armaan 912 376 5093

Geet? What is all this? Tell me, ur joking. we were in the same college, you didn't mention any Karan

"Cause there is no damn Karan!" Geet said angrily.

From: Dhara 912 713 1059

Di!!!! Please come back! What is this, how can you just leave us like that! We miss you so much, mama is crying! Your not aswering our calls!

"Mama is crying? I miss you all so much!" Geet said as a tear fell down.

From: Dad 912 539 1649

Geet, come back! I'm serious! I will get you married to Karan, just please come back and please answer my calls!

"Again with this Karan guy!" Geet said irritated.

Geet read another two texts, based on the same topic. She wished there was one from Dev. She wondered why he didn't try to talk to her. She smiled when she saw the next one was from Dev.

From: Dev 912 398 0928

Geet! I didn't expect this from you. Whatever, I don't give a damn! If you think i'm sitting crying over you, then you are wrong! What did you think, I really cared about you? No, you're wrong. I don't need you, when I have Naintara with me. This was all just so I could get your money. But, you turned out to be a bigger cheat than me. Whatever, you live your life and I'll live mines. Good Bye! Just wanted to tell you, you never had any importance in my life!

Geet couldn't believe what she read. She remembered what the Maan Singh Khurana guy was saying about it being better that she doesn't take the phone. Geet reread the text. She wished it were just a nightmare. But, she knew it was reality. Dev never loved her. He was a cheat. A gold digger. Geet didn't want to cry over the bas***d, but couldn't stop the tears that fell out of her eyes. Why was all of this happening to her? She thought back to how her mom always said 'Whatever happens, happens for the good.' But, how could her being cheated on, and being kidnapped possibly be a good thing? She tried to stop crying, but the tears continued to stream. Her life had become such a mess! The one person, who she'd loved, her first love, cheated on her for money! And to top that, she was kidnapped. Nobody was there for her. Not her mom. Not Dhara. Not Armaan, or any other friends. Not her dad. She was all alone facing the worst time of her life. She hated her life. She didn't even want to live anymore. But, she couldn't let that idiot, Dev think he had so much importance in her life.

Maan heard glass shattering from the room Geet was in. It didn't come as a surprise. Maan expected such behaviour from her side, if she read that message. He felt sorry for her. He heard more glass shatter. He hurried to the room, incase she hurt herself. When he entered he saw pieces of glass shattered all over. Her hair was a mess.Tears were still coming out of her eyes. Her clothes and everything was messed up. She was a total mess. He carefully pulled her to the side, away form all the glass, so she doesn't step on any of the glass. She angrily pushed him away.

"Don't Touch Me!" Geet yelled, angrier than ever before, "Tum Aur Woh Kamina Dev! Mazaak Bana Ke Rakh Diya Hain Meri Zindagi Ka!"

Maan was angry, but he got a grip on his anger, because he knew that geet must be going through so much pain right now.

Geet was so angry. Her life was becoming such a disaster. She felt the need to take her anger out on something, so she broke everything she could. When Maan came she just got even angrier and blasted at him. He was still standing there.

"Please! Just Get Lost! I Don't Want To See You!" Geet shouted.

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Precap:

... Any Guesses?

Sorry, once again for updating after 8 whole days! But, I don't feel that bad because I got lots of work done and I got 100% on a Math Unit Test! 98% on a Science Quiz! Thanks for being patient!

Important! Everyone please check the PM List which is the post after this. I know, I made many mistakes so check your username and tell me if I spelt it wrong or whatever. It's in alphabetical order.

Lastly, I apologize, that I didn't reply to every single comment. I only got to reply to about half. I am so sorry about that. If I would reply, I wouldn't be able to post the update just yet. I enjoyed every single comment! I'm so happy with the response! So, everyone please give me long comments again, as the update was long!

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Love you all.

~Jassi

PS: I'm so crazy bout the Main Agar Kahoon sequence. it was so beautiful, that I had to make a siggy!

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read it before u pmed!
jaz it was AWESOME!!
tu itna achha likhti hai!
wow loved the dev part, awesome way to get rid of him!!
he kissed her and she hit him ROFL!!!
coongrats on ur tests smartiii!!!
jaldi update karna!!
muaz!!
AMNA!!
Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Thanks...!! Jazz ....i was getting bored....!!!😆
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Originally posted by: cutiepie9512345

res
read it before u pmed!
jaz it was AWESOME!!
tu itna achha likhti hai!
wow loved the dev part, awesome way to get rid of him!!
he kissed her and she hit him ROFL!!!
coongrats on ur tests smartiii!!!
jaldi update karna!!
muaz!!
AMNA!!

AWWWW!! Thanks!! I had a lot of fun making Dev a kamina! Lol, i dunno why... hehe i will try updating soon! -Jassi
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Originally posted by: charmed ones

Thanks...!! Jazz ....i was getting bored....!!!😆

LoLzz, You're Welcome! -Jassi
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Hmm..I think Maan will console her?
Loved the awesome update yaar
Thanks a lot Jassi
Love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome siggy! for starters


AND YAYY! you updated and this was legit. hehe loved how dhara is geet's sister :) but anyways, the kiss! <3 sigh, she kicked him LMFAO is it bad that i was like rofling?! hehe poor geet though, </3

can't wait for the next update! this was an awesomely fantabulous part and im so excited to read more! congrats on your two amazing test scores!

Cheers!
~Naina

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