MG FF: ~||The Kidnap||~ Thread 2 Link - pg151

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anupam

@shining_moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

I know u have shown that geet love dev n so she is always preoccupied with his thoughts

but I think u should show that dev is not actually wat geet think him to b like he is just after her money n playing with her emotions n then maan just somehow aquaint geet with this info....

how he does that is upto u but plzz I would like to see it.......just a suggestion....rest is upto u😊

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Thanks 4 great n awesum update Jazzz...!!!

its getting interesting huh...!!!!

Maan is so professoional...!!! yet a Kiddnappers....hahahha

wiv Adi...!! lol...!!!

Kitchen scene was Gud...!!!!

hahaha she ordering MSK...!!!

lol...Maan is being attract towards her...!!!

I wonder wat is d dustmani wiv Handa's...!!

cnt soon...n get rid of Dev...!!!!

i want Geet 2 think abt MAAN....n MAAN...!!!

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MaansMishti

@MaansMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Kick Dev out yaar....but not so soon! I want him to stay at least until Maan starts liking Geet so tht he can be jealous of Dev and then u can kick him out! 😉😆

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

plzzzzzzzzzzzz kick tht dev out of the story he doesnt deserve geet as he did not go to even search geet how bad he is so kick him out

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she_ratchet

@she_ratchet

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Jassi🤗

Well if you really ask me, just say that Dev takes the letter seriously and hates Geet, and leaves from her and her life. This is probably the shortest and simplest way but you can do as you wish! I know your an aesome writer and will come up with something extraordinary and awesome!😉

~Shilpa

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Sadie

@..CountingStars

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Haila!! That Was Sikk!!!😲 Just Read Both The Chapters Uff Geet Is Soo Cool!!😎😆 And Maan😍 Love How You Write Your Chapters😃

Update Soon! And Pleaseeee Add Me To Your PM List And Even If You Miss Me Out, I'll Still Read It😈🤣 You're On My Watch List!! Muahahahah!! LOL Sorry Getting Too Excited 😳

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Chalo na yaar you got so many comments and votes on what to do next. Please jaldi update karo na

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: pushpi
Chalo na yaar you got so many comments and votes on what to do next. Please jaldi update karo na

Sorryyyy!! You have no idea how much I wish i could update! But, I'm also busy with a project on Canadian History! And, I'm not getting enough time to update!
Trust me, i will update as soon as I get time!

I only have like half the update

-Jassi

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: cutiepie9512345
jassi i lovd it yaar omg finally u updated girl
loved when she was cutting the veggies
i dunno maybe he left his phone and she can use it
but maan wasnt outside right?
yeah its too ealy to be love but its an attraction
wondering y he kidnapped her
awesome yaar keep it up!!

Heyyy

Thanks so much Amna (I'm guessing that's your name?? Well, I think) Lolzz... I'm happy you liked it! That's a good guess, not gonna tell if it's right! Actually, Maan was outside. Come on yaar... Geet should get a chance to do something atleast, hehe, Maan's been ruining all her attempts! But, that doesn't mean Geet succeeds. Thank You sooooo much for your lovely comments!

-Jassi

PS: UPDATE AJNABEEEEEE!!!!!!