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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello di,...!!
Well...like every one...i too love this FF of yours but i have a different bonding with it!!
It started after ur FF actually completed...!!
I am a reader of your Truly magical n i used to get all the updates too...but as the stories were very far,i didnt tru to read them..but then i got ur PM saying last part of Pyar ka ehsaas...As i was new to I..i duno how FFs end...thought to look how it ends...read it..it was beautiful...n then i went through the summary just to see what was the story line...and i fell for your .FF..!! it was awesome...Maan falling for Geet, not knowing that she's his wife sounded romantic...and i started reading,...i dunno how i managed but i completed reading all 157 parts in less than 3days...No wonder i skipped my lunch n dinner a lot n shockingly Geet serial too...😲
to start with the story line.Geet is a normal 18yrs gal who had no idea about Maan...hmm..Maan marrying her but not looking at her even once...Geet got to know the realities about Maan...his past and his son...but accepting it!! 18yrs gal reacting in that way was truly unbelievable..!!Then Maan asking her not to bother him and she obeyed it..!!Then she developed a bonding with krish...her usual college life with her friends smriti,pooja and kavya...!!
Then one romantic day Maan bumping into Geet for the first time at TajMahal...and falling for her..Geet trying to get back priya into maan's life.. I really loved Geet here...she wanted to give love to the love of her life..!!it was truly amazing..I loved few scenes well i love ur entire FF but there are few scenes which i can never forget...to start with..

1.maan Geet's meet at Taj Maha
2.Geet buttoning Maan's shirt at her college and the entire presentation in her college
3.Night at Disc with Armaan and Geet's friends...and Maan observing her closely
4.Her night at canal with Armaan where she confessed that she's in love

At this point i would like to say i liked Armaan...his character sketch is so natural..he's so understanding and not questioning and caring types...
5.Geet joining Maan's office and all the office scenes..including the lift scene..and the discussion for a better marraige life..
i especially liked this part because it was the first time maan began to show his feelings which were bottled up inside him for so long...when he shed tears i could not control myself too..

6.Their trip to mumbai and their intense moment...i would like to quote geet's words when she was drunk in the plane...i didnt remeber exact words but it goes on like this"too much of alcohol,Maan are not good for health"or something like that...And Maan blushed!!☺️Oh god!! that was magical!!
7.Armaans proposal n Geet's reaction..
here..i liked when u described the restessness in maan and Geet holding Maan's arms tight fearing that something is going wrong and the pain Maan went through when Armaan proposed Geet...Geet catching maan's collar...wow! She was questioning him how can he do that to er..she couldnot thik of someone else in her life apart from Maan even she was about to bring priya back into his life!!

8.Geet getting priya back into Maan's life at the point when Maan actualy came to kow that Geet is his wife and was aout to propose her!!
wow di!! kya timing hain!!

9.priya understanding Maan and trying to help him by making Geet feel jealousy!!
10.Maan trying to make Geet understand his feelings by showing his love.
at this point di,i would love to tell you that you did a great job,maintaining character consistency is very much important while writing a story and the way Maan chose to express his love to Geet is just natural!!Its natural because guys think in that way...i was really surprised that you could write in a guys point of view too...!!kudos to you!!👏

11.Geet getting confused at Maan's behaviour..she was happy n hurt at the same time when priya wore that ring..
I loved maan shouting at priya "lo...pehenlo ring" in irritation
kickass!!😆

12.Geet taking priya's side and explaining everyone what priya felt while leaving krish at maan...that was simply superb..i loved Geet at this point!!! How innocently she loves everyone without expecting anything in return...😔
i would like to say ek aurat ki dard ko ek aurat hi samajthi hain
13.Geet leaving for shimla...getting pregnant and hugging Maan for the first time..
showed her feelings for him..lovely!!❤️
14.Maan's rude behaviour towards Geet and then patch up but still dunno abt the pregnancy..
Even thugh i was Mad at maan..i liked it...character consistency you see...you just wrote what Maan would do in his way...loved it again..
15.Krish's accident and Geet donating kidney,loosing baby,Maan's MU all at the same time
I was about to hit you di!! seriously!! Maan MisUnderstanding Geet is convincing but...how can he??But priya standing by her side n Maan repenting..
i would like to say again ek aurat ki dard ko ek aurat hi samajthi hain
16.Geet's bottled up emotions and maan again trying to make her fall for him in his own way
especially "papa loves you?"that line when Maan saw in the guest room and how he hugged the chart and replied "papa loves you!!"
wow di...!!at every stage you were showing geet's love towards him and Maan realising it and loving her more unconditionally!!

17.Priya leaving and telling Geet what maan wanted
i really really loved the entire dialogues of priya...!!Those were incredible!!Marvellous!!Standig oviation 4u👏
18.Maan's birthday party in shimla and he going to know Geet..
i loved the washroom scene when Maan was not going out of the bathroom and Geet replied"zor se aa raha hain"
LMAO!!🤣

19.Maan falling for her,trying to understand n explain his love for her...meanwhile Geet merging with his life and being the perfect partner in all sense!!
20.Their saath pheras again..and the romantic night at the cliff
21.The bomb blast...
once again a major twist which made maan to breakdown..! But it was necessary for Geet to know how much Maan loved her n how would he react without her..
22.Pooja,smriti n Kavya...wow these are wonderful...especially pooja..she was hillarious!!their tracks are cute...i loved the nautanki pooja..a bit more..
their reaction to Geet's job and marraige and Maan manofying them..
23.Office romance and Pari mixing up vodka in his drink..
Here Geet was trying not to interfere as she was always but...haq banta hain yaar...she should...!!So she was stopping herself and getting irritated and the whole restlessness was shown perfectly!!
24.Geet getting pregnant again and maan feeding her the medicine,her innocent qsn
Aww di..unhone aap ka kya bigada hain??just kidding..
hmm i agree it was necessary...ony Maan cant be wrong all the time!!
25.Finally the big MU and Geet leaving for shimla..and sasha's accusation,Geet's reaction,slapping Maan,Maan keeping mum..
wah di!! i have no words for you!! duriyon se pyar badtha hain n u showed it clearly...well its true that geet and maan were behaving out of their characters it was true but at situations like these,anyone cant be normal...especially geet burning off everything and slappin Maan and Maan keeping mum...just wishing that Geet should trust him...was AWESOME!!
26.Geet's chaal and the entire court sequence
it was unpredictable!!i didnt expect this!! even i know that Geet would take Maan's side,i didnt expect she to trust him this much and create jhoota-sabooth(trust me i liked it!!) was brilliant
i liked it because generally in movies we see our hero proving his innocence by trying to bring the sach...but here,..we know that those are false accusations...so geet going in that way and showing false sabooth was brilliant!!👏
27.their drive to tajmahal and their trust growing into a perfect relationship and Geet revealing she's still pregnant!!!!
that was awesome...no miscarraige!!yipee!
28.in season2, we got to see their chemistry and how they completed each other in every aspect..even love making was repetitive,well i dont mind as far as my favourite couple Maneet are happy and sound
29.papa ki beti and she kicked!!
wow di..maan's reaction for everytime she kicked was marvellous..!!
30.trip to HP
hmm...i oved this track so much...bringing back the happiness into any married girls life is just so easy...isn't it?just take her t her mayka..!! this track showed Maan's love and care for her and their relationship seemed to be complete with this gesture!!
31.Brij and Maan
here's another wow for you!!
you beautifully wrote here...changing Brij in Maan's style was very very nice..
here too Maan,the angry young man listening to Brij and not saying a word just because of his love and finally helping him and changing him was superb!!
32.kavya,smriti and pooja setting with their respective partners and Geet's delivery
finally the end!!😭
but i swear its the perfect ending!!
i loved the dialogue "looks like dev is about to deliver"
LMAO!!
Dev and NT are positive through out the story and are just awesome as a couple..
Geet delivering khushi and you described her pretty well..
epilogue was awesome too..!
finally here's my report on your ff!!Hope you are not bored with my longggggg comment...well it can be called as a small sized document rather than a comment...right??😉
PS: I spent my holidays on your FF and was not in touch with my friends and my holidays came to an end!! Am sure they are going to kill me...will meet u if they leave me alive at all!!
So am taking leave from you...hum hain rahi pyar ke...fir milenge aapke dusre FF section mein padthey padthey..😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
shika
👏👏👏👏
I just relived the entire pyar ka ehsaas..
wonderful...each & every part was so brilliantly written ..
u just made me very very emontional
😳😳😳😳😳
thanxs a lot
I am so happy u liked it
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

shika

👏
I just relived the entire pyar ka ehsaas..
wonderful...each & every part was so brilliantly written ..
u just made me very very emontional
😳
thanxs a lot
I am so happy u liked it
love
muskan


arey didi...u dontknow how many seepless nights i've spent..well 2 or 3 frankly speaking...!!😆
but di i really really loved it n i didint go through the FF again for writing this review...!! i remember it!! i just digested everything!!am glad u liked it!!☺️
Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome FF!
really well written
any chance for a season3? lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
One of those nights when I got the blahs and started randomly surfing the net, I came across this FF. I started reading it half-heatedly and very soon, your magical pen had sucked me straight into this achingly beautiful world of Maan & Geet. I was totally captivated by your dialogue (too many memorable ones to quote here) , all the tender, romantic, mischievous, delicious scenes and exchanges between M&G, their son, family. All, so very believable. Very soon, I became a PKE junkie and needed my daily fix! I was looking forward to reading MANY MORE installments of this lovey family, father-daughter-son-mother... bonding especially the first few years after Khushi's arrival, when the babies are at their cutest best... I came back from a trip and eagerly logged on only to discover that there will be no more PKE! Impossible!!! Plis, Plis, Plis... can you PLEASE re-consider writing a few more installments on this gorgeous family? You could perhaps do a few on the Meera-Vickey relationship. I'll settle for just once a week update as long as I know that this storyline is going to continue. You have carte blanche!! 😊. I'll read whatever flows out of your pen! Your are one remarkable writer. I am sure you will make the routine act of diaper changing into a memorable event! I have discovered your other FFs too and read them when I get a chance BUT PKE will continue to remain closest to my heart because it beautifully portrays how an 18 year old, small-town, "thodisi paagal, thodisi alhad", slip of a girl manages to bring about a 180 degree transformation of an arrogant, "be-ras", sour, egoistic loner into a deeply caring, sensitive, fun loving family man. Thank You.
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 154
awesome update
loved it
aww the baby kicked everytime maan said papa ki beti
so cute
feel so sad for arjun and pooja
hope she doesn't get married to karan
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
part 155
awesome update
loved it
such a cute part
loved what maan did for arjun and pooja
just to see a smile on geet's face
best jiju ever
wow meera is maan's bestie
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
part 156
awesome update
loved it
loved their romance
yay khushi is coming
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
part 157
awesome update
loved it
so sad u ended it
loved how pareshan maan and dev were
khushi is so adorable
so happy for all the couples
so happy for maaneet
loved their journey so much
thanks muskan for such a wonderful ff
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Posted: 14 years ago

this is not fair i didnt know wen u updated the last part all these i was waiting LOL🤪


by the way loving ending

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Posted: 14 years ago
Although an ending ff pains me, but d end esp d drilogue was awesome:-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey muskan..

Pyar ka ehsaas was jst superb.. Now its one of my fav.. even afta finish reading it.. am can re-reading it randomly.. each part of pyar ka ehsaas is jst .. no words to say.. I luv it.. Maneert life journey was well described. I totally luv it.. I wish all luv story has an happy ending in real like as well.. tat would really b a gud one.. jst like Mannet.. N ur last pic of d baby was so cute.. lil tiny baby..

Well it was a great FF.. I truly enjoyed myself reading it.. n will enjoy myself re-reading it again n again.. Keep writing…

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Posted: 14 years ago
di i jsst wnt u to hug knw if ur here bcoz the way uend ur FF's was really heart touchy nd lovely. oh di love u so much fr mking this lovely FF's. misses ths FF so muchhhhh

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