me falling in lv wid ur writings di...
This ff doesnt seems like ur first one. The way u describd thier feelings was fab.
This was really dif. 4m ur TM and DA. Tht priya was really nice nd i thnk u shd hv mentiond abt arman in d end wt hapnd 2 d poor guy aftr al he was dier cmn frn. Ok that khushi k room part was realy senti nd abrtn 4 krish was just mind blowing.
And that court wala seen was superb.
I realy lvd krish's char. His dialogue
ISE BOLTE H PAPA KI BETI TO YE SIRF KICK KARTI H MUJE BOLO MUMA KA BETA I'L KISS U.
and ya that pwd attitude wala mk oops! MK. The frnshp of the 4 grls was so cute, lovely. They saying hot 2 maan infrn
of geet. Awe her plight was worth watching. Stalker was bg!! I was laughing holding my stomach and roling on my bed.
Reading ur writings one by 1 and loving each 1.
Tried to cment on maitri but no place so was heartbroken i thnk that thread has been ended. Plz try ie u cd do ne thng wid it. I m tempting to cmnt on it. I likd dat ff also.
K lvd all ur writngs thnx 4 ur work an plz ad me in ur pm list. Bye
38