Deewanapan-A sajan ff-Part 11 updated

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Palak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

heyy nice ff..lovd all the parts

plz add me 2 ur pm list:)

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Meera

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

hey...read all d parts...n loved reading it...pls do continue soon.....m eagerly waiting to knw bout SaJan's past n u made my eyes wet by describing Sam n his mothers convo(flashbacks)...it was so touchy...m really lookin forward to read d nxt part..pls do upd soon;-)

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rupal.sri24

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Note: From now on I will write "GM" for Gunjan's grandmother.

Part 10

Samrat looked at the departing figure of the girl....who just turned looked at him and then went out. He stood there for sometime unable to decide what to do....he wanted to stop the girl and ask her name...but couldn't gather courage to do so. A lot had happened since he arrived at airport. First Suhasi ji...and their conversation regarding his mother and then the feeling this girl had created in his heart and mind that made him completely lost...

Slowly still confused with his thoughts he came out of airport and reached the car where Suhasi ji( Gunjan's Grandmother) was waiting for him.

GM: Kaha reh gaye the beta...? Gunjan to kab ki aa gayi.

Samrat: Oh...I am sorry main unko hi dhoondh raha tha.

GM: its ok. Woh car mein wait kar rahi hai. chalo.

Samrat went toward the driver seat only to find a girl occupying it.

Samrat: excuse me....

The girl looked at him and he was surprised. The girl was the same girl whom he met just few minutes ago. The girl too looked at him shocked and both together shouted "TUM".

Gunjan: Tum mujhe follow kar rahe ho? sharam nahin aati.

Samrat: Main tumhe follow kyun karunga...aur tum is seat me kyun bethi ho.

GM: Tum dono ek doosre ko mil chuke ho?

Samrat and Gunjan together: Haan kuch der pehle.

GM: Wow... good chalo ab chalte hai....Samrat , Gunjan ko drive karne do...uska maan hai.

Gunjan: Samrat kaun hai nani?

GM: arre yahin to hai....tere saamne khada hai....

Gunjan: (making face): yeh...mujhe to laga tha ki kisi good-looking bande ka naam hoga....par yahan to sab ulta hi hai...

Samrat glared at her and Gunjan smiling took drivers' seat. GM took back seat and Samrat had no option but to take seat beside Gunjan.

Samrat:( to himself): Arrogant ladki...main good looking nahin hu?? Khud ki shakal dekhi hai...billi jaise...

Gunjan: tumne kuch kaha?

Samrat: Nahni to.

Gunjan glared at him and started the car and both cursed each other under their breath.

On the other side we see a big room where atleast 10 people are sitting around a big table. a person was sitting at the head of the table. Two people are tied at the pillar behind his seat.

Another person joins them and takes seat opposite to the main siting at the head of the table.
We will call him MM ( Mystery man) for now.
MM: Kya news hai Bhushan?
Yes guys that man who arrived was Shekhar Bhushan.
Shekhar Bhushan: Consignment kal subah deliver ho jayega. Custom desk pe bhi koi problem nahin hogi. Saare arrangement ho chuke hai.
MM: Good. Pichle 15 years se hum is business mein hai. Duniya ke saamne hum ek repectable business family hai....par hamara actual business to kuch aur hi hai...aur dekhna jald he hum apne maksad mein kamyaab honge. We will rule the world.

All the other persons sitting their nodded in agreement. The meeting got over and eveyone left except 4 people which included MM, Shekhar Bhushan and two are persons.

The two persons were:

Ranvijay

And

YASH

MM: So Bhushan...aa gayi tumhari beti?

Bhushan: haan aa gayi hogi.

MM: Don't worry about her. Mere bete usse handle kar lenge. Afterall woh bhi to excel mein hai.
Aur saath mein padengeto hamre liye bhi aacha hi hai na.

Shekhar bhushan: haan...isliye uske aane ki khushi mein aaj shaam ko party hai. Aap beto ke saath aayega.

MM: Sure.

Saying this Shekhar Bhushan leaves.

MM turns and smiles evily.

MM to his sons: Tumhe pata hai na kya karna hai.

RV and Yash: Yes Dad.

MM: Good.

Precap:
Gunjan drunk in the party.
Gunjan's entry in excel.
Samrat slapping Gunjan
Sajan kiss.

Edited by rupal.sri24 - 14 years ago

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Wao awsm updt dear too gud.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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Palak

@mohit_rockstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

nice updt..thanks 4 d pm cont soon

looking forward 2 d precap:)

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deepti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

wow superb update dear

totally loved it

im totally loving the suspense

do continue soon

n thanx for the pm

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Meera

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

OMGGGG....amazing loved it.....cant wait for the next part...pls continue ASAP......n yaa really dnt want those two villians in SaJan's lovestory😡😆
precap sounds really interesting...eagerly waiting for d nxt part;)