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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
hi
awsome update
just loved the part
love sajans little curcing sesion 😆
and omg the meeting was also good
but i hope they dont do anything bad with gunjan
cont soon
cant wait for that precap
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff Dear 👍🏼 👏 Cont soon 😳
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Part 11

Samrat, Gunjan and GM reach Bhushan Manison. Gunjan got out of car, took her and GM's luggage and went inside.

GM: Samrat, tum Gunjan ki baton ka bura mat manna. Woh teri ziddi hai, but buri nahin hai.

Samrat: Ji. Koi baat nahin. I understand.

GM: Gunjan ko kal Se College join karna hai. I think uska admission tumhare college mein hi hua hai?

Samrat: Ji. Excel college.

GM: Good. Gunjan o apne saath hi lekar jana.

Samrat: Kya? Apne saath?

GM: Dekho beta, Gunjan bahut dino baad India wapas aayi hai...isliye main chahti hu ki usk saath koi aache se time spend kare...taki woh yahan lonely feel na kare. Is ghar se uski kuch bahut kharaab memories hai...agar akeli rahi to un sab ko yaad karegi aur dukhi hogi.

Samrat: To phir aap log wapas kyun aaye? I mean, Gunjan wahan zayada khush thi..!!

GM: Nahin...khush nahin thi...bas life thi isliye jee rahi thi...aur phir jo cheez aapko buri lage usko face karna chaiye....usse dur nahin bhaga chaiye. Jitna dur bhagoge...utni takleef hogi...aur agar samna karoge...to us problem ka solution dhoond paoge.

Samrat: theek hai. Main Gunjan ko college saath le jaunga. Par woh jayegi mere saath?

GM(smiling): Don't worry. I will take care of that.

Samrat: Ok. Good Night Nani.

GM: Good night beta.

Inside Bhushan Manison, we see Gunjan unpacking her stuff. GM comes to her.

Gunjan: Nani, maine aap ka luggage aapke room mein rakhwa diya hai.

GM: Ok. Waise tum apne papa se mili?

Gunjan: Papa?? Oh...Mr. Shekhar Bhushan?? The most famous lawyer of Mumbai? Unki baat kar rahi hai aap? I didn't knew ki unki koi beti bhi hai jo abhie tak zinda hai? I thought he killed his daughter when he killed his wife too.

GM(angrily):Gunjan!!

Gunjan(crying): Kyun nani....aap mujhe yahan kyun laye hai?

Saying this she goes out of room and sees her father Mr Shekhar bhushan standing at the door listening to conversation. He looked at her angrily and said:

Shekhar: Mujhe nahin pata tha ki yeh ladki London ja ke inti badtameez ho gayi hai. Yeh India hai Gunjan aur tum apne father ke ghar par ho apni Nani ke ghar pe nahin jahan tum jo chaho kar sakti ho...Whether you like it or not...you have to behave yourself. Aur aap, Suhasi Ji....my ex-mother in law....bahut aachi sekh di hai apne meri beti ko...she doesn't know how to behave.

Saying this he turns to leave, but stops.

Shekhar: KalGunjan ka college mei first day hai. Time pe bhej dejiye ga isse. Aur kal shaam ghar mein party hai. Gunjan ko samgha dejiye ga ki isse behave theek se karna hai. Kal bahut important aur bade-bade log party mein aa rahe hai. I don't want this girl to spoil my image.

Saying this he leaves.

Gunjan turns to GM who herself had ters in her eyes and ran to hug her.

Gunjan: dekha aapne. Hum kyun aaye hai yah ape nani?

GM: (patting her back): you will know soon mishthi....everything would be fine.

Next Morning

Sunrays fell on Gunjan as she was lying in her bed. She opened her eyes only to realize that she is back at hell. Yes that's what she called her father's home. This was the place where she was born 18 years back and lost her mother 10 years back. She hated herself for being born at such a place where she lost her everything, the place which is her father's home but where she never felt at home.

She heard some steps in her room but she knew who it was. The person was her Nani. Sometimes she wondered what drives her Nani at such a age to take care of her. She was the one who needed utmost care and support at an old age, but she was always full of energy, always taking care of her needs and fulfilling the responsibilities of her parents.

Gunjan ( looking at her nani): Good morning nani.

GM: Good morn mishthi....utho...tumhara college me first day hai. Here is your coffee.

Gunjan: Thanks.

GM goes to cupboard and takes out a beautiful suit.

Gunjan: I am not going to wear this at all.

GM: Misthi...tumhara college me first day hai...u don'tknow ki college ka kya dress code hai, kya culture hai. So it's always better to be on safe side.

Gunjan:( coming to GM and smiling): I know..you are too smart nani...!!

GM (laughing): I know..aakhir nani kiski hu. Ab ja....jakar tayyar ho ja. I wil get your breakfast.

Gunjan took her clothes and went to get ready.

On the other hand Samrat got ready and entered Bhushan Manison to take Gunjan. He met Nani on the gate itself.

GM: Good morn beta.

Samrat: Good morning nani. Gunjan ready hai.

GM: Haan. Bas aati hogi. They heard footsteps and Samrat turned to find Gunjan coming out of her room. She was wearing this...

Edited by rupal.sri24 - 14 years ago
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Part 11 contd..

Samrat looked at Gunjan and was lost in her. She was looking very beautiful. But then reality struck him. She was daughter of one of the most affluent person of the country and he is nobody. He shouldn't be thinking about her.

Gunjan: Nani...yeh yahan subah subah kya kar raha hai.

GM: Mishthi....tumhe iske saath college jana hai.

Gunjan: What? Iske saath...no never.

GM: Mishthi....yeh tumhara college mein hi padhta hai....infact tum log ek hi class mein ho. To better hoga kit um iske saath jao.

Mumbai ke traffic ke bare mein isko tumse zayada pata hai na. Aur tum apne papa ke car to use karogi nahin. To....

Gunjan: Fine. Aapke paas to meri har baat ka jawab hota hai. Hey Mr. Ab chale?

Samrat: Sure.

Gunjan: Bye Nani.

Saying this both goes from there to the parking area.

Gunjan: Hum kaise jayenge?

Samrat: Is par.....he says pointing towards his bike.

Gunjan: Ispe? Main is phatphatiya par nahin baithungi.

Samrat: mere paas aur koi vehicle nahin hai. Hum isse par chalte hai.

Gunjan: No ways. Hum taxi se jayenge.

Saying this she calls a taxi.

Samrat felt bad. But he didn't said anything.

Gunjan sat in the taxi and called Samrat.

Gunjan: Tumhe special invitation chaiye kya.

Samrat: Main taxi mein nahin jaa sakta. I am sorry.

Gunjan( getting out of taxi angrily): Kyun kya problem hai?

Samrat: I...I haven't .....nothing leave it. Tum taxi se chalo..I will follow you on bike.

Gunjan: Fine. Do as you wish.

Gunjan sat in taxi and asked the driver to start, while Samrat started his bike.

At excel college:

Gunjan entered Excel College. Samrat was nowhere to be seen.

Gunjan: Yeh Kaha reh gaya. Pata nahin nani ne aisa kya dekha usme. Ab main kidhar jau.

Gunjan enters the college premises only to be stopped by a group of girls.

"Hey you....college mein nayi ho"?

Gunjan: Ya so?

"Attitude...!!! Dekho yeh attitude kisi aur ko dikhana....!! abhie tum woh karogi jo hum kahenge"?

Gunjan: Tum log yahan ke professor ho...jo main tum logon ki baat sunungi...saying this she pushes a girl and goes ahead when someone holds her hand and pulls her.

The guy is Yash.

He pulls Gunjan towards him and twists her hand backwards. All his gang surrounds them so that no other person could see what's happening.

Yash: Not so soon babes. Is college main job hi aata hai...usse yeh karna padhta hai.

Gunjan: Who the hell are you? And leave my hand. Don't mess with me.

Yash: Tum bahut arrogant ho babes...I can fix your attitude....but I will give you a chance. Next 1 ghante mein tumhe is college ke kisi bhi ladke ko kiss karna hoga aur woh bhi lips pe. Agar tumne aisa nahin kiya... ya phir agar tum yeh nahin kar payi then after 1 hour I will kiss you wherever I want in front of whole college.

Gunjan( Still trying to free herself): Tumhe pata nahin hai ki main kaun hu.

Yash ( Laughing): Tumhe nahin pata sweety ki who am I.

Saying this he leaves her hand and goes from there.

Gunjan (to herself): Isko sabak main seekhungi.

Saying this she goes to washroom to fix herself.

Gunjan:( to herself): Yahan ke log kitne ajeeb hai. London mein kisi ki himmat nahin hui mujhe chune ki...aur yahan. She stops as she heard some girl crying.

Gunjan: Kaun hai wahan pe?

She goes to one of the washroom only to find a girl sitting there crying badly.

Gunjan kneeled down besides her and kept her hand on girl's shoulder.

Gunjan: Kya hua? You need help?

Girl: (crying): Woh...woh ladka ?

Gunjan: Kaun?

Girl: I joined this college two days back. This guy and his gang asked me to kiss a guy from this college in 1 hr. When I didn't he tried to force himself on me in front of whole college and I slapped him. I complained to the teachers and principal as well but no action was taken.

Next day during the lectures he and his gang came to my class and dragged me from there. No one stopped him...not even the professor who was taking the class. He brought me at college gate, pulled out my top, and kissed me. No one dared to stop him and kept on kissing me till he was satisfied and then pushed me and threw my clothes on my face. I am from a poor family. I came here on scholarship. I have to study to support my family and nowc I won't be able to do so. When I enterd the college today, his gang was ready to humiliate me further.

Gunjan:(shocked and scared): Why don't you report to police?

Girl: I can't. His father is very influential. Some people says....his father is a mafia king. I can't take that risk.

Gunjan: ( was too shocked to react): Even she is asked to do so. What will she do..? Will her fate be similar to this girl.

Thinking all this she looked at her watch. Time was running away....she had only half an hour to save herself from meeting the same fate as of this girl.

Gunjan came out of washroom and started looking here and there to find some solution to save herself. She went to notice board and saw her time table. She didn't had any lectures for another 1 hour. Damn. Gunjan looked at her watch.....10 minutes to go. Now she started panicking...she could see from distance the gang and the guy....teasing another group of students. Five minutes to go..."Should I hide somewhere in college", where they won't be able to find me....yes that would do...but I hardly know this place. Where will I hide? Oh god help me please.She saw the guy Yash and his gang coming towards her, the guy was smiling at her evily....she wanted to run but before she could think of running the guy caught her again.

Yash: So....nahin kar payi na.

Gunjan: Leave my hand.

Yash: No ways tumne apna task finish nahin kiya.

Gunjan: Abhie bhi 1 min baki hai. I wil do my task.

Yash: Ok. Do. I am here only. But on my condition. Saamne ek library hai. Usme se jo pehla ladka naha aayeg agle 1 min mein....tumhe use sabke saamne kiss karna hoga. Agar koi bahar nahin aaya,then you will have to kiss me....otherwise...You know. Your toime starts now....

Gunjan looked towards library....30 sec passed....another 10 seconds passed when she heard someone coming out of library....the moment she saw the person...she ran to him the person was Samrat and before Samrat could realized what happened she pressed her lips too his and kissed him.


Do comment guys...It really helps and encourages to write further since this is my first ff.

I am sorry for keeping you all waiting but I hardly get time now-a-days to update. But will surley update next part soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh God !!Gunjan kiss samrat omg!!
hey dear updt ws awsm,superb,fantastic.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice updt..
thanks 4 d pm
cont soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow awesome part
wow kiss
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing upd rupal ...loved it to d core ..oye hoye SaJan's first kiss☺️☺️❤️ ...really hope Samrat find out d reason behind this kiss...n do not react instantly on Gunjan i mean as per ur previous upd...in precap u wrote that Sam vl slap Gunjan infront of everyone...i really dnt want this other big fight btw them:(( neways do continue soon it was so mindblowing upd...n thanks for d pm🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW awesome update.
I feel so bad for that girl I mean that is so sick!😒
I hate Yash!
And yeah Sajan rocks!😎
cont soon...

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