MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic. - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
wow dis ws really nice i ws actuallty waiting for it from yesterday bt den now forst of all u get well soon n den continue it it ws as usual awesum
now m thnking of inventing some new n gr8 names n words for ur posts as dey r totally out of da world 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
awesome updates!!!
loved all of them...
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
res
edited
awesome
lovely update
so finally they met.but they coldnt talk
gunjan and sam started cally mayu and nupur as jiju and bhabhi thats so sweet
the wind part was awesome
u r really good writer
Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
OMG!! Mehak........you made my day!!!🤗
I came here after one week & I found your pm....I was so happy & excited that now what surprise is in wait for us...
& truly.......mindblowing & awesome FF...👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
⭐️Loving to core❤️❤️❤️❤️
Plz cont soon..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Congrats. on the third FF... Very nice update.. and the third update specially, i liked the wind... but where's my PM for the third update? mana late ho gayi comment karne mein.. par itna gussa ki PM bhi nahin bheja?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Beautiful...........your FFs are just so mesmerising😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
heya sry to comment late...............
grt writin jus adorable .........
HATS OFF!!!!!!!
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waitin for update "DI" (do you mind me callin dat ?i hope not😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
edited my post on page 9😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
thank u so much guys...🤗

@rabiah..awwwwh...MashAllah..God bless dear...

@divya di..sorry di..i must ahve misse dout ur mane..i know u read my FFs regularly..i am really sorry...😒

@dhano_arti..of course u can call me di..btw i am 19..i hope u are younger..😳


PART 4:


G...tujhe kaise lage nupur..

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M..samrat we have work..

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G...tu bol rahi hai ye nahi..

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M...OK...achi hai.

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G..bus achey?

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M...ok bht achi..

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G....bus bht achey

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M...bht bht achi..she is like an angel..so beautiful..ankhen dekhi tu ne uski...so huge and so deep.

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N...he has such a deep voice..and his gentle smile..jab tujh se mil rahe they...it was so mesmirisng.

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M..she was wearing such nice decent clothes...

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N...kitni achi shrit pehni hoyi thi...i love blue..

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M...she is so elegant...kitni simple jewellary pehni hoyi thi...

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N..i loved his watch..

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S & G...aur..

M & N...just perfect...

S & G..aur...

M & N..simply meant for me..

S & G..u want to meet and talk?..

M & N...yes..

S & G..awwwwww....then what is the problem?..

M & N..tujhe nahi pata?..

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S..yaar aunti ne mana kiya hia tu kia hua..unhain kaun sa pata chalney wala hai..

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N...tu kab se ghalat advice dene lag gayi hai?..

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S..mayank yaar....

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M & N..NO!..

S & G..fine..go to hell..

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Samrat and gunjan both left in anger and nupur was sitting on the grass...an mayank was standing on the first floor corridor...viewing the whole college beneath and nupur seeing endless grass ..

and both again lost in the first meeting...nupur was gently brushing her hand over the grass..

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"awwww...i love her touch.😳."said the grass to the nearby flower..

i know she herself is flower..😍.replied the flower..

"u know her fiancee is here" 😳the grass questioned..

i know the flower replied sorrowfully..but they cant meet..

hmmmm....but just wait...one day they both will be sitiing her on us and he will pluck u out and give it to her...😆"..grass repled naughtliy.

i so wait for that day..my poor princess..so lost in his thoughts..".😍..flower said staring at nupur..

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Mayank's watch said to his shirt..."hey dude...isnt nups gorgeuos.."😍..

Shirt was sighing..."gorgeous"..OMG..i still cant get over the heavenly fragnance of her scarf which fell on me..".😍.

lucky you"...replied the watch.."btw my mayank is not less handsome.".☺️.

Made for each other"😍..said the shirt..looking at mayank..

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Everyday they both went to college..and their eyes did search for each other..although they knew they wont meet but just a look...and that would be enough fro them...

But it was almost a week and they didnt meet each other....


M..tujhe nahi lagta k wo clg se chuti kar rahi hai..

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G..wo kaun?..

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M..samrat yaar..tujhe pata hai main kis ki baat kar rah hon...

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G..mujhe kia pata..khud pat kar le...

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guajan and samrat again left and mayank and nupur were thinking about finding..bcz it was impossible that they couldnt see each other...being in the same college..

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The sun was shing very brightly and smarat and gunjan were walking through the grounds when they both shifted to shade...
and they saw each other...

S..hi..

G..oh hii...

and recpies started cooking in their minds....

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the sun shining finally was relieved.
."finally the duo of overcoming force is forming.."..


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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Okay I need to say this - I think you are quite inspired by your OS on Arjun's ring huh😉

Gosh, the update was just so cute!!! The way Samrat and Gunjan made their hearts talk was perfect!!

Mayank and Nupur's description about each other was so beautiful - the pictures actually got created in front of my eyes ... Beautifully written ...

M & N..simply meant for me..this line is one of my favourite ones - they are already falling for each other ...

Mayank and Nupur are really obedient and I loved how Samrat and Gunjan try to pacify them ...

hmmmm....but just wait...one day they both will be sitiing her on us and he will pluck u out and give it to her...

I am eagerly waiting for this moment to come ... by just imagining this, it feels good ...

"finally the duo of overcoming force is forming.."..
This is so exciting - so Mayank and Nupur : the two repelling poles are going to come together due the outside force of Samrat and Gunjan - very interesting ... I am so eager to read the next chapter ...

This story is totally different from what you have written previously - be it the concept or the style of writing but I must compliment you of the innovative way in which you are taking the story forward - brilliant, Di ...

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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