MAYUR FF..The Repelling Magic. - Page 40

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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak after title of ur ff if u write mayur ff ur reader will increase more
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Express.. when are you updating
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promise me ki tum aesse hi aur mayur based ss banaogi aur inka happy ending karogi

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much guys..i am really flattered..🤗

@rumki..thnk u so much for ur advice dear..i have added MAYUR FF in the title..😃

PART 16:


Mayank left the next morning..and nupur didnt had the courage to say good bye to him..she cried the whole day, praying to God..

N..plz God mayank ko jaldi wapis le kar ana, plz, ik rishta diya hai ap ne,usey mat door karna, plzzz..

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Mayank left delhi..and the only memory of this city he had was nupur, before leaving he turned back to the city..and his heart said..

M..tum ne mujhe ik khushi hi di hai, aur ab us ka khayal rakhna..meri nupur ka khayal rakhna plz..

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Life was equally hard for both of them..they understood what they meant to each other, but what they didnt expect was
that there comminication would be difficult for them..

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Nupur dialed mayank's number..

N..*in a vibrant voice*..hello...

M..nupur?..

N..ap so rahe they?..

M..ummm..nahi..bolo..

N..nahi..ap so rahe they na..i am so sorry

M..nupur ..plz..acha ok main so raha tha..per main tum se baat bhi karna chata hon..

N..nahi..ye tu bilkul thek nahi hai..hamare timings match hi nahi hotey hain...subha jab main clg main hoti hon tu ap office hotey ho...sham ko mom merey sath hoti hain..phir app ki wo part time job..ab ap merey liye late night tak jag kar tu baat nahi kar sakte na..aur mom ne mne bhi merey phn bills check karna shoro kar diye hain...we will have to find another way..

M..nupur aram se..tum tu non stop bl rahi ho..aur dosra kaun sa tareqa hai..hum phn pe hi baat..

N..main ne soch liya hai..

M..kia?..

N..bye..ap ko ik do din main pata chal jaye ga..bye

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One early morning mayank was sleeping in his apartment when his roommate handed him an envelope..

Mayank tumhare liye delhi se letter aya hai..

M..letter...delhi se..


He took the letter and opened it..

kasia laga mera surprise!!....yehi tareqa sahi hai..LETTERS!!..is main time ka koi problem nai hai..
aur waise bhi economical hai...so..kaise ho ap..
... main kal raat ko phir se main belovard pe traffic main phas gayi thi...
aur mujhe woh raat yaad ayi jahan main ne aur ap ne apni life ka sab se bara secret share kiya tha..aur phir kal subha main wo wale ghr bhi gayi..jahan hum ne ghr ghr hkhela tha..
wo ban gay hai pura..aur ap thek keh rahe they...15 logon ki family hai...actually main un k ghr survey officer ban kar gayi..
acha ab mujhe dantna mat shoro kijiye ga..k aise akeli ku gayi aur ye wo....mujhe dekhna tha k kaise log rehtey hain wahan..aur bikul ideal family hai
..itna pyar hai sab main..meri tu anknon main ansoo agye...un k dada gi tu mujhe beta beta keh rahe they..bht acha laga mujhe..

acha ab main apna hi sunati ja rahi hon..ap kaise ho?..meri yaad ati hai?..job kaisi chal rahi hai?..koi problem tu nahi hai?..
khana kahan khate ho ap?

plz plz mujhe sach sach batiye ga....ok ab main bus karti hon..aur plzz..jadi reply kijiya ga..

i love u and i miss u and i am waiting for u..

aur apna letter ap gunjan k address pe bhejna..main mom k sath risk nahi le sakti..
waise main ne gunajn se apni kasam li hai k wo ap ka letter nahi pare gi..tu ap bhej dena.

ok..bye..

nupur..


Mayank's eyes got teary and he smiled at the inncence of nupur..

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gunjan brought mayank's letter for nupur, teased her for while but then handed her..and she went on the top floor to read italone..

hmmmmmm....well suney main tu meri doll bilkul the thek lag rahi hai..aur bus aisye hi khush raha karo nupur..tumhari khushi mujhe hosla deti hai..now coming to ur questions..
main bilkul thek hon...meri job bht achi chal rahi hai..and mind u i am awarded as the best employee of the month..aur jahan tak baat merey khane ki hai tu mera room mate
bht acha khana banata hai..tu no problems aur office main meri collgue meri liye roz lunch lati hain, main itna mana karta hon..per wo le ati hain..tu mian mana nahi kar sakta...

most probably next yar tak mujhe promotion bhi mil jaye ga..and ur way of communication is AWESOME!..ok sweetz..take care.,.and do write soon..bye..

..mayank..


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.plz apni health ka khayal rakhna ap!..aur ye kaun si collegue hai jo ap k liye roz roz lunch le kar ati hai?....aur mujhe tu letters pe itna maza a raha hai..itna medivial romance lagta hai na..it shows
how much effort we put in comunication..
waise is semseter main ne top kiya hai..acha ap ne mumbai ki sair ki...kaisa shehr hai..main ne suna hai k usey sapne ka shehr kehtey hain..


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wow..congratulations doll..i hope tumhe mera gift psnd aye...aur rahi baat tumhare medivial romance ki tu thek hai..jaisa tum kaho..mumbai dekha ahi main ne..it is a very fast city..delhi se tu bht fast hai..but i have learnt
to manage with its pace..aur thek suna hai tum ne..it is the city of dreams..and i am sure it will fulfill my
dreams..our dreams..and my collegue is above 50..Mrs Desai..bilkul apne betey ki tarah samjhti hain mujhe..so relax..

aur haan ye gift main ne pura din laga k choose kiya hi...i just hope its good..aur agr tumhain nahi psnd aye ga tu bhi mujhe bata dena..i wont mind i promise..bus such such batana..mera dil rakhne
ki zarorat nai hai..

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OMG..ap ko kasie pata chala k mujhe white color psnd hai?..aur mujhe sari bht bht psnd ayi..thank u so much...sachi..ap ki kasam...waise ap ne sari ku bhejhi?..sari tu main ne kabhi pehni hi nahi hai?..mujhe lagta hai
ap k sapno main main sari pehn kar ati hon..right?..anyways Mrs Desai ko mera namaste bol dejiye ga..aur thank u bhi..thora bht tu ap k sath koi hai..wasie main ne bhi ap k liye kuch bheja hai..i hope ap ko acha lage..main ne mehnat tu bht ki hai...
per main arts main itni achi nahi hon..bus mujhe batana zarror k ap ko kiasa laga..sach main..ok..


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i love u nupur..

aisa nahi hai k merey pass likhne k liye time nahi hai..its just meri pass likhne ko aur kuch hai nahi...

i love u..


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kia hai?..rula detey ho hamesha!..ap ko psnd aya mera art work..actually dus baar kharab kiya tha main ne..finally 11th time i was a bit
satisfied, tu main ne bheja..ap ka aur apna naam jor k likha main ne..

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and i will make sure k ye naam hamesha jurey rahen..

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wow wow wow!...finally mera bachelors khatam ho gaya hai..and u know what!, jo award ap ko apne farewell main mila tha na..
outstanding perfromance wala..wo muhe bhi mila hai...i am so happy..but i really missed u..kash ap bhi merey sath hotey..



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awwww...no problem doll..main ne tumhari picture university ki officail website pe dekhi hai..kitni moti ho gai ho tum..

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KIAAAAAAA???????.....OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG...........main moti ho gai hon?..oh no.ab kai ho ga?..
...lekin mera weight tu utna hi hai..aur kapre bhi sare porey hain..lekin ab main kia karon?..
aur ap tu itney handsome ho..mian tu bikul achi nahi logoan gi ap k dsath..oh no..ab kia ho ga?..


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oh ho nupur..stop it...mian tu mazak kar rah tha...haad ho gai hai doll..tum khud socho, website pe kab students ki pictures hoti hain..main tu mazak kar raha tha...
main ne koi picture nahi dekhi tumhari...aur na hi mujhe dekhni hai...i dont need to see ur picture...i really dont..


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Huuh?..pata hai main soch soch kar adhi ho gai hon..*hmph*..

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i love u..

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ye acha hai..jitna bhi mera ghusa hota hai..apne ik ilove u se khatam kar detey ho..that is not fair..

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i love u..

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i love u too...
ap jis sapne ko le kar mumbai gaye they..wo pura ho raha hai na?..


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nupur main ne apni life main bht kam sapne dekhey hain..aur jo bhi dekhen hain wo sab pore kkiya hain...tumhe kuch batoan ga nahi...
aur waise bhi ab tu hamari shaadi main bhi 6 months reh gaye hain..tu thora intezar tu kar sakti ho tum..

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ap k liye tu sari life bhi intezar kar sakti hon..wasie ap ne notice kia..kitna ajeeb hai ye..mtlb we have not talked since the past 2 1/2 years...i never knew
hamara rishta itna strong hai k bina dekhey aur baat kiye bhi koi problem nahi aye gi..

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the only reason behind this is that we both love each other..and love has never demanded proofs and declarations.

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kal ap ki mom ayi thin...shaddi ka shagun de gai hain..keh rahi thi ka ap next month a rahe ho..ap ne tu bataya hi nahi mujhe...when are u coming?

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1st december..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
One word - Incredible ... You know how much I adore letters - they are one of the best ways of communication, it's resplendent and I absolutely love their relationship - it's so pure, so true and surreal ... I loved how you showed the positivity of the whole distance matter - that's why I love your stories : they are so affirmative ... I am loving the whole story and eagerly waiting for 1st December ....
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!
mayur ka pur love + mehak ke awesome words = 😊 😭 ☺️ ❤️ all my emotions felt at same time ....................
mehak =👏 👍🏼 keep it up ...........

hope these few words said everything jo main tumse kehna chahti thi............
Edited by ginny09 - 14 years ago
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omg.............so lovely........................

letters padh ke i was feeling all the emotions in them.........
continue sooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Mehak! That was amazing..in todays days everyone depends on other means..and not the most purest form of love..letters. Its lost its substance over the years..

I love the way how she started writing the letters..and they kept talking through that..for years..that is true love..her possesiveness was cute..his love was amazing..and they're realisation..that they havent like heard each others voices..or seen each other..esp. "the moti waala line" that brought a smile to my face :) Hes coming back!! I hope everything gets resolved ASAP..Im sensing the end....:( but BADLY looking forward to it..:):)

-Mansi
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh mehak dis ws really awesum
wht a mean of communication in dis century......loved it
oh GOD mehak ur way of writing da dialogues seems soo realistic
it ws fab yr👏👏👏👏👏
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u know Mehak.. the moment I saw your Pm.. i left all my work.. and sat down for reading the update... and you deserve a hug sweety.. kitna achcha likhti hain.. Very nice updte.. and their way of communication... very medeival and personalized.. Looking forward for the next update

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