Maneet FF : You Belong to Me... Part 5...pg 47 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaspreetm2815

I loved it and plzz abb ek geet ke thriff seh maan ko likho



Thank you dear... i will add... but not now... in following parts....😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lov26

Very nice,,

Please do continue..

Will you be having a pm list? if so add me



thanks dear....sure i will add...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Lovely concept..Thnx for the p.m..



thank you soo much dear...🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sups2222

yup loved prewiev bt nt clear of plotline..bt waiting eagerly for it add me ........😊



thank you sooo muchhhhhhhh dear...🤗🤗 sure i will....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you dear...😃
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Part 1


Maan: I know that you will never do anything properly.... i want you to complete this work with in half hour...no excuses.... the tamasa you created to become a CEO again... now it is your responsibility to solve this problem....

Geet: Par sir....

Maan: Baas geet....don't utter even one word.... now leave....

Geet leaves his cabin in anger... and thinking...

"What does he think of himself... dhust danav....always passes orders and never thinks of others feelings...."

Sitting on her chair....

"chalo geet...lets complete the work and show that Dhust dhanav .. How strong is geet handa...."

Saying this... she started to work.....

Meanwhile Romeo comes near geet.

Romeo: Geet... need any help... I can help you....

Geet: No need.... thanks...

Romeo: Geet... i feel really bad for you.... our boss is giving you hell of work...you look so tired....

Geet looks at him and gives a fake smile... Maan comes and sees everything from a distance...

Romeo: Now you get up.....

Geet: No No...Pls... Let me do my work

Romeo: aree geet... no problem.... sit sit

By touching her and making her sit on next chair.... Maan fumes in anger by seeing all this....

Geet: Please romeo let me do my work...

Maan comes there with a red hot anger... and shouts at Romeo...

Maan: you don't have any work ah? Everyone in this office never does their work individually.... Even the Great CEO of this company....always takes help from others....and you... go away from here and do your work.....

Saying this Maan leaves that place staring at Geet angrily and also Romeo...Geet become really angry....and decides to complete this work....don't care how late this will take...

It has been 2 PM...Lunch time is over....

Maan sees Romeo again trying to talk with geet.... Maan calls him alone...

Maan: Listen... if I see you talking with geet or flirting with her again... mein ne tumko iss naukari se nikal dunga.... samgi...

Romeo: Jiii sir...

Maan: Now leave.....

Meera was really concerned...that... geet didn't have breakfast and she is not eating properly for one week.... so she calls her up to check whether she ate or not...

Meera: Geet...

Geet: Haan meera...Bolo..

Meera: Did you have your lunch....??

Geet: No meera.... will finish my work and then have...

Meera: Have you lost your mind...your soo irresponsible geet....

Geet: Meera.....dont worry... i said na... i will have my lunch promise....

Maan sees geet talking ... and comes near her...

Geet: ok meera... i will meet you in the evening....

Meera: but geet....

Geet hung up the phone not even letting meera to complete.....

Maan: Do you this it is office or your home.... not concentrating your work and chit chatting on phone...ohhh how I can forget... that you don't know to do any work.... you just know to make tamasa in office.... No work....

Geet: Please sir.... The time you gave is still not over.... so i will complete this work before the time..... and i will be perfect....

Maan: Oh... ok then... let's see....

Saying this... he leaves....

Meera was really worried... and started to pack something for geet to eat and leaves the house.....

Geet comes into Maan's cabin....

Geet: He is the file sir... i finished it....Before time...

Maan: oh...finished.... ok Miss CEO...Here is list work for you to complete.... No1 There is fault in the machine.... so i want you to make it ready and give me the details and...

He gave her lot of work and Geet gets irritated......

Geet: Ok sir...

She leaves the cabin.... Maan throws the file in anger...

He thinks..." I won't let you win Miss Geet Handa... you will need my help..."

Geet goes to check the machine. To solve this problem she needs to go to another place. So she first decided to complete all the work in the office and then go out....

She started to do all the work Maan gave to her... Maan watches each and every move of geet... to check what she is doing... She keep on walking here and there without a break..

Seeing her like this... Maan keep on staring her and thinking of all the most beautiful past moments of both of them... To control himself he walks towards his cabin... Geet also comes the same way... not looking who is coming on their way... both bump into each other... As she was about to fall Maan hold her hands tightly and pulls her towards him...While pulling her lips touches his shoulders...and she rests on him for few minutes...both of them closes their eyes... Maan lifts his hand to hug her and even geet also moves her hands towards his neck... before the hug gets completed both of them are back to the reality and move away from each other...to cover this embarrassing moment... Maan starts to shouts at her...

Maan: You never walk properly... always find a way to fall on me... you never do any work properly...

Geet: Sir... I was walking properly only... it is you who came in my way...and always find a reason to come close to me....

Maan: Oh you think you're the most beautiful girl and you wanted everyone to fall on knees before you ah....

Geet: and you think you're the most handsome and you want all the girls to shout your name and listen to you always... even if it is a wrong decision...

Maan: I never did anything wrong.... and why am explaining these things to a wrong person...who never sees anything right... Now stop jumping and complete the work which i gave to you....

Geet: I don't need you to tell... i know and i will complete it...

Saying so both of them leave the place in opposite direction....

It took her one hour to finish all the work... then

She takes her bag and leaves the office....

Maan tries to call her.... but she didn't answer the phone...It has been three hours....and geet has not returned back...


Precap:

both got lost in the most passionate and tight hug after long gap of separation....


End of Part 1..

Hope you guys like it..if so press like button.. pls do share your comments...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww hasini!!!!! u r too gud...... i didnt knw u can write so well....... i jst loved it!!!! n i m excited abt precap...... plzzz update soon!!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely......
Do continue
MSk is being so khadoos.......
Precap sounds interesting...


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Edited by -Parisa- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Aweome FF Hansini!!!
Please continue soon!!!
And add me to your PM list!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi dear,
ur FF is really good, n u describe each and every moment very nicely
so keep writting
and Pls Add me on ur PM list
love
monica

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