Recap:-
geet stood there frozen
Daadi shook her: beta kya hua??
Geet came out of her thought: ji....
Daadi understood her plight: beta aap jaiye aur so jaiye... bohot raat ho gayi hai...
Geet nodes: ji daadi.... & left
Part 16 :-
Daadi: aaiye beta... hum aapko aapka room dikhate hai...
geet nodes n follows daadi.....daadi shows geet, guest room......
geet goes inside.....
Daadi: beta raat ko koi bhi problem ho toh hume bata dijiyega...
Geet nodes: ji daadi maa
daadi smiles n left
Geet sat on bed n thinks: kya maan ne mujhe sach mein??????? nahi nahi..... woh toh bas game ka ek part tha......par jo maine Maan ki aankhon mein dekha, fir woh kya tha....????? geet itna mat soch.... aur soja ab....
she laid down....but she was continously turning on bed from on one side to other side....she was having difficulty falling asleep.....she was confused, worried, happy, delighted n god knows what.....her mind n hearts was full of questions....mind was confused n worried n on the other side heart was happy n delighted....
Maan's room
he felt guilty, how could he do that... he cursed himself... n started walking over n forth...
Maan: kyun kiya maine aisa...??? kya mujhe geet se............(he pauses)
he felt helpless n went on roof...
Taani's hotel room
she sighed relieved n fell on bed in happiness... she was happy, that she is going to start her new life from tomorrow... now she can live her life in her own way... she was pleased that her parents supported her... she was glad that she has the most happening friends in her life, she thanked god for all this... after a while, she started feeling lil awkward... she started getting restless that she has to live her life all alone from now onwards, no one will be there at the moment when she'll need them... this was the first time ever in her life that she was out without her parents... there was mixed feelings in her heart... she was happy n was unhappy as well as... she got helpless n went to anurag's room...
she knocked on his door...
Anurag: kaun hai??
Taani: mai..
Anurag: mai kaun?? bakri??
Taani: shut up.. taani this side..
Anurag opens the door: ohh sorry yaar..
taani looks lost...she got in...
Anurag: kya hua??
Taani: woh mai.......
Anurag bit worried: kya hua baby?
taani shocked n thinks "baby?????"
Anurag shook her: what happened?? are u alright??
Taani: nahi.. mera matlab hai HAAN.. nahi i'm not..
Anurag makes her sit on bed: kya hua ab bata?? pareshaan kyun hain??
Taani: tujhse baat karungi toh tu bas mazak hi karega.. kabhi serious nahi hota hai...
Anurag pretends to be serious: yaar tu bata mujhe...
Taani: tu sach mein serious hai, mazak toh nahi karega...
Anurag smiles inwardly: nahi..bilkul bhi nahi..
Taani: anu i'm just about to start my new life and (she holds his hand tightly) i'm nervous...
Anurag felt her touch different: tu kyun darr rahi hai..
Taani: anu kal se mai akeli rahungi.. mujhe har prob ko akele face karna hoga.. koi mere saath nahi hoga.. (tears rolled down her eyes)
Anurag cups her face n said seriously: taani r u mad, why r u crying.. dekh life sabko aise mauke nahi deti hai.. tujhe teri life mein jeene ka sabse pyaara mauka mila hai.. akele jeene ka..
taani looked in his eyes
Anurag: haan.. pata hai taani kabhi kabhi humare paas sab kuch hota hai SAB KUCH, par humare paas waqt nahi hota apni zindagi jeene ka.. tune apne parents ke saath rehkar sabse acha time spend kiya hai, ab iss zindagi ko bhi jeele... maine apni zindagi puri jee hai par apne parents ke saath kabhi bhi nah...............(he pauses)
taani looked at him in surprize... the pain in his voice... the meaning of his words was so different...
he controls his feelings.... n smiles fakely....
Anurag: aur ab bohot raat ho gayi hai... jaa aur soja... (shares a teddy bear hug)
Taani: mai tere room mein so jaun...??? aaj pehli baar aise akele sona padh raha hai... toh thoda sa darr lag raha hai...
Anurag nodes n said: par taani kal se tu apni new life start karegi... meri ek baat dhyaan mein rakhiyo........ Apne Darr Se Jeetna Seekh..!!!
Taani din't get his words properly but she knew he had gone through something n thatsy he said those words..
Anurag: tu bed pe soja, mein sofa pe adjust ho jaunga..
Taani: nahi... mai sofa pe so jaungi..
Anurag: shut up... go n sleep on bed...
taani lays on bed n anurag adjust himself on sofa..
Back to geet's room
geet was getting restless.... she turned on bed here n there, from one side to other..her mind was confused n worried "did maan really proposed her...if he really did that, then why he did so........they are not even friends yet..." n her heart was happy and delgihted... she was on cloud nine.... she was getting confused in her mixed feelings... she wanted some fresh air... she gets up n went outside.... n saw stairs going upward, she follows them n reached on roof...
weather was pleasant... smooth air was blowing... she closed her eyes n inhales the fresh air taking a long breath.... it soothe her soul n brings joy to her senses.... she opens her eyes n saw someone standing in the corner glaring at the stars, facing her back... she walks towards him... the more she was moving towards him, the heartbeat starts rising, she din't knew why.... the more she went closer, her heartbeat was about to touch the sky.... maan heard the noise of footsteps, he stood frozen.... geet was a step away from him... he knew somebody was just behind him but not sure "who it is"... he suddenly turns back n holds her by waist n closed her mouth with his hand...
moonlight was falling on geet's face.. he saw her face in the dim light of moon... her face was so fresh... so smooth... it twinkles like a star.. her heartbeat was high... they both keep on starring at each other for few mins..Maan was not able to stop looking at her..he wonders why are those eyes so deep..why am i able to see myself in them..geet slowly looked down...maan saw her uneasiness.. he quickly frees her...
Maan: tum itni raat ko yahan kyun aayi??
Geet: aap itni raat ko yahan kyun aaye??
Maan: tum kisi baat ka dhang se jawab nahi de sakti kya??
Geet: aap kisi baat ko pyaar se nahi pooch sakte kya??
maan kept quite..geet looked away
maan thinks to himself "pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi mere baare mein...maine kuch zyada hi bol diya tha neeche...sorry bol deta hun..."
Maan: jo maine neeche kaha tha woh.......
Geet gladly: woh???
Maan: i mean use serious mat lena... woh bas dare tha...
Geet din't like his words n looked away: acha??
Maan: haan..
Geet: toh woh "pickle" waali line??
Maan stammers: woh.....woh toh.....maine
Geet smirks: aap kabse bolne mein sochne lage??
Maan: nahi aisa kuch nahi hai...
Geet: toh fir batao... woh pickle waali line kyun boli thi aapne
Maan: wo tumhe pickle se allergy hai na...
Geet with a big grin on her face: aapko yaad tha??
maan smiles
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Flashback
geet slaps anurag on beach n walks off.. anurag tries to stop her but she ran off n bumps into maan... she weeped
Maan: geet tum itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahi ho??
geet hugs him n cried out loud
Maan worringly: geet kya hua...
she keeps on crying
Maan pats her back: geet batao kya hua??
she was nowhere to stop...
maan makes her sit in car n drove to hotel... he took her in his room, makes her sit on bed...
Maan: geet kya hua...
geet nonstopped crying
Maan in angry voice: god damnit... tell me... what happened??
geet got scared... wiped her tears
Geet: aap khadoos hi nahi.. DUSHT DANAV bhi ho...
Maan rolls his eyes.. but din't ask her any further questions, as he din't want to make her upset again...
Geet: mujhe bhook lagi hai..
maan orders italian...
Geet: mujhe aloo parantha khana hai...
Maan makes a weird face: raat ke 1baj rahe hai...
Geet angerily: toh.. aur waise bhi maine khana hai , aapko nahi...
maan roll his eyes n orders aloo parantha..
room service delivers it after few mins.... maan serves in a plate n gives it to her
geet refuses to eat
Maan: ab yeh kya nautanki hai...???
Geet kept quiet
Maan: geet kya hua... khalo ab....
Geet: aloo parantha mummy mujhe hamesha apne haath se khilati hai....
Maan: hey bhagwaan.. ab mummy kahan se laun
geet starts crying
Maan: geet plz rona mat.. acha dekho, mummy yahan nahi.. ek kaam karo, mere haath se khalo... & feeds her with his hand
geet took bite without noticing n spits
Maan angerily: what is this geet?
Geet makes a baby face: mujhe pickle se allergy hai aur aapne mujhe khila diya, mujhe rashes ho jate hai....
Maan: ohh sorry.. din't knew that...
then maan fed her with curd n she happily ate...
maan drops her home after that...
{abhi i think sab confuse honge yeh kya hua, actually just go through the last part again n read the pickle line from proposal lines, u'll get it......n this flashback is connected with the part 10's ending}
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Present
Geet: waise aapko wo ganda sa firangio waala khana pasand hai na... chi chi italian..!!
Maan: GEET
Geet: kya geet.. hamesha bas GEET GEET GEET chillate ho... mujhe seriously aapki mom se millna hai ab...
maan din't say anything
geet thinks to herself "tu pagal hai kya..bakwas karni zaruri thi kya"
Geet coughs: ahem ahem
maan kept quiet
Geet: acha aapki family mein aur kon hai, except the one's i already met
Maan: no one else
Geet: kyun?? where's ur mom-dad??
Maan with moist eyes: my mom ditched my dad when i was 8 and my dad passed away after that
Geet: ohh i'm sorry
Maan: don't be
Geet: u missed them na??
Maan in angry voice: i don't miss my mom
Geet: maan she was ur mom
Maan: no she wasn't.. agar unhe mujhse aur dad se thoda bhi pyaar hota toh woh hume kabhi chodkar nahi jaati
Geet's eyes welled up with tears: maan i seriously don't know much about life, i brought up in a very protective environment.. hamesha koi na koi mere saath raha hai, but as far as i know, a mother can't leave her child like this... there must be some reason behind that... unki bhi koi majburi rahi hogi... have u ever thought about her... unpe kya beeti hogi, wo konse dukh se guzar rahi hongi... i can feel her pain...
Maan shouts: don't try to support her... i hate her like anything...
geet taken a back... she got scared with his anger... maan noticed it n lowed his voice
Maan: geet tum neeche jao..
Geet: nahi mai nahi jaungi...
Maan said loudly: geet tum yahan se jao...
Geet held his hand: i'll not leave u like this..
maan pulled out his hand n turns & next moment geet fell on floor with his sudden jerk... maan realised it n suddenly turns back n looked for her... he saw her n makes her stand....
Maan: i'm sorry geet.. i'm sooo sorry... woh maine galti se...
Geet: its ok maan...
Maan: no its not ok... i'm sorry... i din't mean to hurt u...
geet could see the deep pain in his eyes, as if he is really missing his mom but his ego don't let him accept that fact, he was hurt inside, which he never shows to anyone... he always faught with his feelings alone.... geet wanted him to share it with her... but she din't know what to do.... she unknowingly hugs him... he hugs her back tightly, like he was waiting for someone to hug him...
Maan cries out loud: geet meri mom mujhse pyaar nahi karti...
**Yaadein teri aaj phir aayi hain baar baar
Pukara tumko aur phir roye hum zaar zaar**
Maan: geet meri mom mujhe chodkar chali gayi thi...
Geet's tears roll down: nahi maan unki koi majburi rahi hogi...
maan nodes for a no.... his tears wet geet's shoulder
Geet pats his back softly: maan sambhalo aapne aap ko....
maan broke down...
Maan with teary eyes: kaise geet.. kaise sambhalu... mom ne choda... fir dad ne bhi chod diya... uske baad jisse umeed thi usne bhi mujhe.... geet kyun usne bhi mujhe, kyun samee...............(he pauses)
he came back to his senses.....he runs off from there, leaving geet standing there with moist eyes....
geet stood rooted... she remembered naintara's words n speaks to herself "geet yeh kar rahi thi tu... maan toh sameera se... chahe unke beech mein ab kuch nahi ho par sameera hai toh meri behen hi, mai use dhoka nahi de sakti.. yeh galat hai... yeh jo bhi ho raha hai wo sab galat hai... mere ehsaas, mere jazbaat maan ke liye sab galat hai..."
Precap : taani's first day in office... & ...geet avoiding maan
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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