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sabinariktaa07

@sabinariktaa07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

WoW Mann!! I love the intro part between Maaneet....... that was too funny. 👏 very good going dear,in fact,mind blowing...!! waiting for the next episode..... I'm Lovin' it........😊

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taanni

@taanni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

wow nice part.

loved it.

geet knows about MSK , thats expected, but how come Maan has all info of Geet? so he's really interested in her, it will kill him when he hears abt Anu n Geet. actually it's good that there is a taani in this ff😆.

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

awesome update

loved it

loved how shocked geet when she finds out he was MSK

loved when maan told geet everything he knew about her

wonder why geet is angry at taani

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Sireesha

@.sireesha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

wow wow wow Thats Lovely.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.....

Loved it Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.....

Loved the way Geet denied Maan's identity.....😆😆😆......

Loved it so much when Geet got a big Shock after realising Maan Singh Khurana's true identity..😆😆😆😆...

Loved it so much when Geet got a very big shock when Maan told her abt her details.....

Loved every single line...😆😆😆😆😆😆.....

Loved these lines soooooooooooooooooo much...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....

tum..tum sach mein KHADOOS ho..sach mein..mujhe Pyaar se chup karwane ki bajaye, yeh ganda sa attitude dikha rahe ho..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

unse puchna hai, tumhe kya kha kar paida kiya tha.. karele khaaye the kya?? na haste ho.. na pyaar se baat karni aati hai.. itne kadve kadve se rehte ho...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

do u even have any idea, who is dis MAAN SINGH KHURANA.... damn it he own's KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS & INDIAN PAINTS.. KC ka kabhi naam bhi suna hai... KC is one of the largest Const. Company in India.. MSK banne chale ho..🤢🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

yeh aankhen faad faad kar kyun dekh rahi ho..ab bolti kyun nahi ho..??🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

kya baat hai yaar.. tum toh sach mein bade ameer nikle..😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Holy crap..!! wo mujhe aur taani ko itna parshaan karke khud aish kar raha hai... i'll kill him...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Eagerly waiting for the next part.........

Pls Update Sooooooon..........

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

hey mannpreet.plz add me 2 ur pm list.i liked ur ff!!

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553993

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

👏Amazing Yaar👏

love it each and every line of this update. looking forward for next update.

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

great part..

do continue plz.

thx for the pm.

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Manpreet

@Manpreetmann

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

thank you guys for ur sweet n lovely comments..... love you all 🤗

muaaaaahhhh

love

Manpreet

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Manpreet

@Manpreetmann

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Posted: 14 years ago

#140

Part 8 :-

geet calmed down and looked innocently in maan's eyes

Chehre se Masoomiyat jhalakti thi..
Aankhon mein ajeeb sa nasha tha..
hothon mein dabaaye shabd the..
kaano se nikalta gussa mein dhuan tha..
mano kisi ka khoon karna chahti ho..
maan kho gaya usme kuch pal ke liye..

they both were looking lost into each other's eyes.. there was a perfect silence in the room "PERFECT SILENCE OF LOVE"

Hawayein bhi ek pal ke liye ruk gayi..
mano wo bhi inn dono ko tang na karna chahti ho..

maan moved lil forward, geet was lost in him.. he again stepped forward.. they were extremely close to each other.. he was almost leaning on her.. their lips were almost touching that only a thread can pass through them.. geet was getting tempted with his maskuline fragrance.. he couldn't help himself & lost looking at her "hOw CaN sUm1 lOoK sOoOoO cUtE iN aNgEr"..
geet regains her conciousness & moved backward.. maan felt embarassed n straighten himself..

Subah mile do Anjaane ik raaste pe..
Shaam ko bandh gaye ik Anjaane rishte mein..
Dil mein uljhan.. Aankhon mein kashmakash..
Milkar bole toh kya bole ek dusre se..

they kept quite for few mins.. geet was feeling odd.. maan noticed her uncomfortability & cleared his throat to break the silence..
Maan: tum..
Geet @ the same time: Aap..
maan thinks "AAP??????????" & narrowed his eyebrow..
Geet: dekho aap mujhe galat mat samajhna..
Maan: geet itna formal hone ki zarurat nahi hai..
Geet lifts her eyebrows: mai?? mai kahan formal ho rahi hun.. aur mai aapko pehle bata rahi hun, mujhe aisi waisi ladki mat samajhna..
maan rolls his eyes.. he tried to avoid argue with her..
Geet: aap bol kyun nahi rahe ho..
Maan: geet yeh pehle AAP AAP bolna band karo..
geet mummers "hey babaji.. ab inhe mere AAP bolne se bhi pareshaani hai.. chi chi kya soch rahe honge mere baare mein, pata nahi.. maana mai inki aankhon mein kho gayi thi *nai actually Pyaar bhari aankhon mein* oye chup kar, yeh kya soch rahi hai .. par iska yeh matlab thodi na hai ke yeh mere baare mein galat sochne lag jaye"
Geet: dekho mai aakhri baar aapko bata rahi hun, mai aisi waisi ladki nahi hun..
maan gets irritated
Maan shouted: Shut up!! bakwas band karo apni.. kya yeh aisi waisi ladki ki ratt laga rakhi hai.. kon hoti hain aisi waisi ladkiyan, samjhao mujhe..??
geet looked down..feeling embarassed.. maan calmed himself
Maan: geet.. hum dono ek dusre ko abhi nahi jaante hai.. aur mai kisi ke liye apne dimaag mein koi perception nahi banata, jab tak mai use jaan na lun..
Geet innocently: toh aap mujhe galat toh nahi samajh rahe..
Maan smiles: nahi...
Geet: pakka na..
Maan: GEET..

they came down to the hall.. everyone was busy with sumthing.. darji mahender rano was busy attending guests.. brij was busy with kids.. etc etc..
maan meets everyone & took permission to leave.. darji offers him to stay there with them but he din't agree coz he felt lil odd..
Darji: beta aaj raat yahin ruk jao..
Maan: ji..meri kal subah ki flight hai aur luggage hotel mein hai toh mujhe jaana hoga..
Darji: tum kal wapis ja rahe ho..
Maan: ji..
geet felt bad hearing those words.. she herself din't understand "what was bothering her"

Ek pal mein Anjaan ho..
Ek pal mein Armaan ho..
Ek pal mein Apne ho..
Ek pal mein Sapne ho..

geet speaks to herself.."mujhe kyun inke jaane se pareshaani ho rahi hai..kahin mujhe usne...........😍.............chup kar, faltu sochna band kar.. aur yeh kya AAP AAP ki ratt laga rakhi thi unke saamne.. geet tu GEET HANDA hai, tu itni izzat kisi ko nahi deti hai.."

maan greet them n leaves.. everyone gets busy agian with sumthing .. geet gets restless wen maan left, so she decides to catch up with taani at her place..geet told rano that shez going n left

geet reached taani's house

Taani: geet tu yahan?? (looking confused)
Geet: haan kyun.. mai nahi aa sakti..
Taani: arey nahi.. itni raat ho gayi hai..
Geet: tu chahti hai toh mai chali jati hun.. (taunting)
Taani: arey pagal mera matlab yeh nahi tha.. i meant its too late.. is everything ok..??
geet kept quite
Taani: kuch pata chala anu ka..??
Geet: haan
taani felt lively
Taani: sach..!
Geet: khush mat ho.. he's enjoying at bling club..
Taani: what???
Geet: yup..
Taani: how do you know that..?
Geet in angry voice: leave it.. i don't wanna talk about him.. ab usse mujhe milna hai bas, uska toh mai khoon kar dungi..
Taani: acha thik hai.. chod na yaar.. gussa mat ho..
Geet: yaa.. why should i spoil my mood bcoz of him.. acha tu mujhe subah kuch batane waali thi..
Taani: kab??
Geet: jab maine call cut kar diya tha jaldi mein, when i was rushing for my shoot..
Taani: ohh yeah..woh geet..kya hai na.. (she pauses)
Geet: bol
Taani: nahi yaar tera mood already kharab hai..
Geet: bol na yaar..
Taani: mujhe delhi jaana hai.. meri job lag gayi hai na..
Geet: why?? for how many days?? (confusing voice)
Taani: mmmm... jab tak job karungi... (waited for geet to smash something)
Geet: kya? tera dimaag thik hai.. tu kahin nahi jayegi.. samjhi..!!
Taani: meri job delhi base hai..
geet holds the vase from side table & smashed it.. taani closed her eyes..
Geet: tell your bloody boss to shift you in mumbai branch.. mumbai mein bhi toh office hoga.. n now i don't wanna listen anything else..
Taani: geet woh mera boss hai, servant nahi hai..
Geet: tujhe nahi bolna toh mai baat karungi usse..
Taani: geet samajhne ki koshish kar.. plz baby.. i can't help it.. it's my job..
geet picks up taani's phone & was about to smash it on floor, meanwhile taani holds her hand.. taani with teary eyes..
Taani: geet nahi.. mat phek use, mai teri tarah rich family se belong nahi karti hun.. tu ek phone todegi, tujhe 10 mil jayenge.. par mujhe nahi milenge..
geet looks into her eyes.. taani noded her head for NO..
Taani: geet.. yeh job mere liye bohot important hai.. i need this job for myself n my family..
tears rolls down from geet's eyes n said sumthing very innocently
Geet: tu mujhe bol tujhe konsa phone chahiye hai..
tears rolls down from taani's eyes even faster..& noded her head for no..
Taani: nahi geet.. yeh fone ki baat nahi hai.. tu aaj mujhe ek phone dilwa degi, par kal ko mai kya karungi baaki cheezo ke liye.. mai har cheez ke liye toh tere paas nahi aa sakti.. haina??
geet hugs her tightly n started crying out loud..
Geet in croaking voice: tu mujhe hamesha ke liye chodkar ja rahi hai..??😭
taani hugs her back
Taani: pagal hai kya yaar.. tujhe mai chod sakti hun kya..
Geet: par tu mujhse door toh ja rahi hai.. sab mujhe chodkar ja rahe hai.. anu bhi gaya, tu bhi ja rahi hai..
taani breaks the hug..wiped geets tears..
Taani: dumbo.. koi tujhe nahi chod raha.. anu gussa hai bas, maan jayega.. aur mai jab bhi mumbai aaungi toh sabse pehle tujhse milungi aur bas tere saath rahungi..
Geet: pakka..
Taani: pakka promise
geet again hugs her..
Geet: tu mujhe bhool toh nahi jayegi..??
taani pats her back
Taani: kya hua tujhe aaj.. kaisi baatein kar rahi hai.. pagal ho gayi hai kya??
geet suddenly breaks out the hug
Geet: mai zyada senti ho gayi kya??😲
taani noded her head for yes
Geet: Crap!! yeh sab uss khadoos ki wajah se..
taani lifts her eyebrows
Geet: pata nahi.. jabse gaya hai, tabse mai aise ajeeb ajeeb si senti types ho rahi hun..
taani's eyes poped out
Taani: tu ek ladke ke jaane se senti..
taani touched geet's forehead
Taani: fever toh nahi hai..
Geet: kya?? (confused)
Taani: arey nahi wo tu ek ladke ki wajah se senti ho gayi isliye check kar rahi thi, kahin tabiyat toh kharab nahi hai na..😆 & starts laughing
Geet: u're making fun of me..
Taani: abey budhu nahi..woh kya hai na actually tu aaj tak kabhi kisi ladke ke liye senti nahi hui na aur infact anu ke liye bhi kabhi nahi hui.. toh bas isliye dekh rahi thi ke tu thik hai..
Geet: yaar pata nahi kya ho gaya mujhe.. jabse wo gaya hai, mujhe bohot ajeeb sa lag raha hai.. jaise mujhse koi mera khaas...................... (she pauses)
taani ignored her words..
Taani: anu ke baare mein soch.. sab theek ho jayega..
Geet: oh plzzz.. uske baare mein sochkar mujhe apna mood nahi kharab karna hai..
taani's cousin joins them.. taani introduced geet with her..
Taani: geet yeh hai pari..
Geet: u mean angel.. pari from parilok.. 😆 & starts laughing
pari lifts her eyebrows.. geet hugged her..
Geet: meri baaton pe dhyan mat de yaar.. mai aise hi kuch bhi bolti rehti hun..
Pari: kuch khele.. i'm getting bored..
Geet: haan yaar plz.. mai bhi bore ho rahi hun..
they started thinking "what should they play"

taani gets sumthing to eat..
Taani: Antaakshri khele??
pari n geet makes a weird face.. & noded their heads for no..
Geet: hide n seek??

Taani: Shut up..
Pari: i have a great idea.. mai kuch words bolungi, jo pehle word dimag mein aayega usse related, woh bolna hoga..
Taani: fine
Geet: kewl (with a naughty smile on face)
Pari: remember, no backing out..
they started it
Pari: ohk..i'll start with taani di..
geet smiles
Pari: 1st crush
Taani: Gurmeet Choudhary
Pari: any girl, u hate
Taani: Debina Bonerjee
Geet: lolz i know.. she's his would be.. thatsy no..
Pari: friends
Taani: Geet..Anu..
Pari: cute
Taani: you
Pari: diary
taani looked at geet, geet turned her face
Pari: jaldi bolo.. diary
Taani: memories
Pari: love
taani started thinking about anu n kept quite..
Pari: bolo na di..
Taani: ............................... (din't say a word)
Pari: not fair.. acha now geet's di turn
Geet: hmmmm.. start
Pari: accident
geet started visualising an accident she had in the morning with maan.. she kept quite..
Pari: yaar aap bhi taani di ki tarah mat karo..
Geet: never had an accident
Pari: perfume..
she memorized the eye lock with maan n that time she was getting tempted with his maskuline fragnance..
geet again kept quite
Pari: fight/nok jhok
geet starting remembering the fights she had with maan during the whole day.. 1st in car n others in her house..
even this time she kept quite..

Precap: confused geet..

Link to part 9 :- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1528467/anjaana-rishta-maneet-ff-thread-1?pn=23

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago