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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7 :-

geet stood rooted there for few mins with teary eyes...she din't like anu's act n speaks to herself "geet u were right....u din't do anything wrong....let it be....!! jab gussa utrega..toh khud baat karlega.." & went back into the hall... everyone/everything seems to be very happy...
Rano: ki hoya geet puttar..?? anurag kahan hai??
Geet: kuch nahi mumma..woh use kuch zaroori kaam yaad aagaya tha isliye chala gaya..
nobody noticed her moist eyes except maan..maan got lil worried but he din't have an idea "how to ask her"...
geet ran upstairs to her room..maan becomes helpless...
raaji n titoo..both enjoyed maan's company a lot & asked him to light up more crackers...maan was so lost in geet that he din't listen to wat they said...
Rajji: chalo na jiju
Titoo shook him: aap kahan kho gaye, ab chalo bahar...
rajji titoo dragged him out to the garden.. chintoo joins them.. maan seems to be lost
Chintoo: uncle rocket jalao na..
maan looked at him... chintoo was such a cute & adorable kid that maan's heart denied to say no to him.. he light up rocket for chintoo.. rajji, titoo n chintoo started jumping in joy... where on the oher side maan was still lost... he excused himself n went to geet's room..
geet laid cuddling herself up on the bed hiding her face in pillow.. maan silently walks in & sat on bed.. geet started weeping... maan clears his throat, geet din't glance...
Maan: Geet..! (very softly)
geet looked up, glare him an icey glimpse & hides her face again..
Maan: kya hua??
geet kept quite
Maan: geet kya hua??
geet din't say a word
maan speaks to himself "MSK ko jawab nahi diya"😡
Maan said loudly: geet maine kuch pucha..kya hua tumhe?? (contolling his anger)
Geet in croaking voice: tum..tum sach mein KHADOOS ho..sach mein..mujhe Pyaar se chup karwane ki bajaye, yeh ganda sa attitude dikha rahe ho..
maan narrowed his eyebrows
Maan: maine konsa attitude dikhaaya..??
Geet: "geet maine kuch pucha..kya hua tumhe" 😡(mimicking his voice).. yeh aise koi kisi se puchta hai kya..tumhari mummy se mujhe milna padega..
maan lifts his eyebrows
Maan: kyun??
Geet: unse puchna hai, tumhe kya kha kar paida kiya tha.. karele khaaye the kya?? na haste ho.. na pyaar se baat karni aati hai.. itne kadve kadve se rehte ho...
Maan yelled: GEEEEEEEET..!!
Geet: dekha fir... hamesha chillana aata hai bas tumhe...
Maan: GEET..
Geet: oh hello.. zyada chillane ki zarurat nahi hai... i'm not ur paid servant.. aur tumhe pata hai, aise toh koi street dogs pe bhi nahi chillate...huh
Maan calms himself: geet mai yahan chillane nahi aaya tha..par tum baatein hi aisi karti ho..
Geet shouted: tum kehna kya chahte ho.. tumhara matlab kya hai ke mai chilla rahi hun tumpe...
Maan: SHAYAD
she rolled her eyes
Geet: whatever..!!
geet's phone rang...
Taani: geet..tera aur anu ka jhagda hua hai kya??
Geet: thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou taani... tujhe pata mujhe teri abhi kitni zarurat thi..
Taani: kya hua bol..
Geet: T sab kuch galat ho raha hai..
Taani: arey bacha bata toh hua kya??
geet explains her the whole situation that how maan helped her out...n there is nothing between them...
Taani: hmm...fir aage??
Geet: anu heard everything but misunderstood me...
maan lokked geet but ignored her words...
Taani: geet tu apni life se kyun khel rahi hai.. yeh kaisa ajeeb sa mazak hai.. tu anu ke baare mein ghar pe sabko kyun nahi bata deti.. unhe love marriage se koi problem thodi na hai..
Geet: haan nahi hai unhe love marriage se koi problem but anu se bohot problem hai..
Taani: wat?? but why??
Geet: taani u know na.. dad thinks "he's a spoil brat son of a rich businessman, who just wastes money n doing good for nothing"
maan looks her again but this time with "WhOm U'rE tOkInG aBoUt" expression...
Taani: hmmm...anyways listen, jisliye phone kiya tha wo toh bhool gayi.. Anu called me up, he was in a very bad mood, i asked him "Wat Happened" but he din't tell me anything & suddenly hanged up the call.. now i'm trying his number n it is out of coverage area...
Geet: what??
Taani: haan.. now m worried..!
Geet: omg.. wait i'll try...
she hangs up & calls anu.. it was not reachable.. she got restless n keeps on calling him.. she made 20-25 calls in 5mins... maan looked her with a confuse "wHaT aRe YoU uPtO" expression.. she got upset.. started walking over n forth...
Maan: wat happened??
Geet: Nothing.. none of ur business..
Maan: tell me.. may be i can help u out..!
Geet: no thanks.. wasn't that enough for u whatever u just did few mins back in the hall... hmm tell me??? wasn't that enough... n now again u want to create more problems for me..
maan din't get her..he was not able to understand her..
Maan: whats ur problem??
Geet: i told u.. i don't need ur help..!
Maan: i'm not talking about this problem of urs.. i'm talking about YOU - wats ur problem "are you mad or something".. u only asked me to convince ur parents for all that crap.. n now ur blamming me... wat have i done???
Geet: Shut up! wat have i done (mimicking)... Ohh Gosh..!! wat do u think of urself.. maine tumhe yeh kya keh diya ke dikhne mein ameer lagte ho toh apne aap ko MAAN SINGH KHURANA samajhne lage.. pehle toh bohot SATYAVAADI HARISHCHANDRA ban rahe the "mai sach bataunga, jo mai hoon wo bolungaa".. ab kahan gaya tumhara wo sach...
maan glare a shot..
Geet: do u even have any idea, who is dis MAAN SINGH KHURANA.... damn it he own's KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS & INDIAN PAINTS.. KC ka kabhi naam bhi suna hai... KC is one of the largest Const. Company in India.. MSK banne chale ho..🤢
maan looks her angerily but smiling inside on her innocence.. thinking " how does she know me"
Maan: tum MSK ke baare mein itna kaise jaanti ho..??😳
Geet randomly: meri ek friend hai, he loves MSK, she drools over him.. jo bhi uska interview aata hai toh hamesha mujhe aake batati hai.. i don't know MSK mein aisa kya hai, maine kabhi use nahi dekha... (making a face)
maan smiles
Geet: haso mat.. jhoot bolne se pehle soch toh lete..
Maan: mai jhoot nahi bolta..
Geet: haha very funny.. yeh baat jhoot bolne se pehle sochni chahiye thi..
maan keeps his finger on her lips.. his single touch threw millions of shivers in her body
Maan: Chup..! Bilkul Chup..!
geet looked him innocently then his finger.. maan jerked his finger back..
Maan: mai hi hoon MAAN SINGH KHURANA
Geet: mai mere gharwaalo ki tarah pagal nahi hu...jo tumhari baat maan loongi...
maan takes out his wallet & showed her license n credit cards with name MSK written on them.. geets eyes poped out n put her hands on them..
maan rolls his eyes
Maan: ab toh maanti ho, mai hi hun MAAN SINGH KHURANA..
geet was dumbstuck
Maan shouted: yeh aankhen faad faad kar kyun dekh rahi ho..ab bolti kyun nahi ho..??
geet gave him a naughty smile..
Geet: kya baat hai yaar.. tum toh sach mein bade ameer nikle..😆
maan maintained his look
Geet: Thik hai..! Thik hai..! ab zyada yeh khadoos look mat do.. mai bhi kam nahi hun.. well hi i'm.......................... (extends her hand to shake)
Maan interrupted n took her hand in his: GEET HANDA.. famous model of Mumbai.. 23yrs old.. Miss World 2008.. worked for many brands/companies... currently working with CHRISTIAN DIOR (Brand Ambassador of CD)... done soooo many Ads... & not interested in movies n all...
geet looked shocked, her face was giving "HoW dO yOu KnOw Me" expression... but along with that she had a big smile on her face..
Geet: wow... u know me pretty well.. but anyways how do u know me?? i mean being a businessman, u ppl really don't have any interest in this industry.. so how come u know very well..
Maan: i'm MSK.. i can get each n every single information about anybody wenever i want..
geet rolls her eyes
Geet: haan haan thik hai... zyada udne ki zarurat nahi hai...!!
she keeps on calling anurag...but no use...it was off...
Maan: ab bata do hua kya??
Geet: woh mera friend hai anu, uska ka number nahi mil raha... pata nahi kya hua use, aaj tak kabhi aisa nahi kiya usne...
maan makes few calls n got all the details of anurag...
Maan: dont worry...he's in Bling club at Andheri...he's fine...
geet gets furious...smashed her fone...
Geet: Holy crap..!! wo mujhe aur taani ko itna parshaan karke khud aish kar raha hai... i'll kill him...
she was about to threw vase...maan holds her hand...
Maan shouted: yeh kya pagalpan hai..
geet calmed down n looked in his eyes very innocently...

Precap: geet getting angry on taani...

Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
wow Thats Awesome dear....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...........
Loved it.......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️......... I just start to read I will comment u later but pls add me in u r pm lisssssssssssssssssst
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ff sound Interesting...........
Pls Continue sooooooooooooooooon...........
pls add me to Ur PM list............
n ya keep udpating
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff.plz update soon n add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice😳

😳but maan ko kaise pata laga ki whoes geet n where is anu!!!😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear
excellent work by you
keep it up
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi... nice update ya...👏👏 OMG... Geet actually needed proof to believe that he is MSK... 😆😆😆Good one..
I wish she was a bit more nice & polite towards Maan... Anu k chakkar main Maan se kitna rudely baat kiya.. 😡😡😡
& Anu... 😡 samajta kya hai woh aapne aap ko... Bechari Tanii...😭😭
When will Anu grow responsible??? realise his true love..??
Hey office main kya hoga??? When Maan & Tanni meet again???😉😉
Hope that tanni doesnt fall for Maan... I know aisa nahi hoga...
Please update asap... & thanks a lot for d pm...😊😊
Edited by Tressa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it....I really like this track a lot....nice story line....pls continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago

good and sweet 👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. thnx 4 the pm. so geet finally comes to know abt MSK. will they get married? waiting 4 ur next update..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it yaar😊
The conversation about MSk was good, Geet tayaar hi nahi thi sach manne ko😆

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