~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93* - Page 28

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Lovely update.

Hope your exams went fine😊

Continue soon😊

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awwwww.......totally loved ur update...maan and geet are so cute together :) btw...hope ur exams went well :D

Originally posted by: sweet coco

Epilouge: Fantastic!! Love the concept! The character sketch is amazing!! Maan is rude and Geet in so much pain..I wonder how it will unfold!! Time to read part 1!!

PART 1: Ranibr-Geet death scene was so sad and beautifully written...I love what he says to her, but it makes the whole scene even sadder!!! 2 years later and she's still so sad and depressed....poor soul! BTW I love that name....Ranbir!!!! Pinky is so chweet...trying to get her out of that sadness and move forward in life!! She's cute and now Geet as maan's sec....getting so interesting!!

PART 2: Dev-NT are so cute together! I love it when NT says Geet is perfect for maan...love the foreshadowing!! Tu muskara...what lovely last words...but how painful to always remember that! Love that geet calls Maan dusht danav...lovely name! CAn't wait for Maan's entry!!

PART 3: Maan's body glistening with sweat...great visual and for that you get 👏!! Def a greek god for sure...such a hottie!!! NT just blurting it out...funny!! Poor geet and the flashback, but the flashback was cute! Loved it!! Oh no!! the papers went flying everywhere...but love how she felt like she belonged there!! And NT giving her hug...so chweet!! maan is mad...not good at all! awwww...he's mesmerized by her hazel eyes...what a cute way to end!!!

PART 4: Love how he finds her eyes and her the most thing he's ever seen!! he's so fida over her!!!awwwww...he couldn't stay mad at her for long!!! And nooooo...poor geet started to cry!!! adi is the sweetest and maan's his best friend...NICE!!! maan decides to join adi-pinky once he knows geet is also coming....love it!!! Excellent...all 4 playing cupid!! Matchmaking in session!!! YES!!!

PART 5: OMG!!! I love the name abhay...and he made maan jealous..nice!! NT is so adorable!!! and the number!!!😆 that was so funny and cue, especially all 4 watching him and maan tearing it up!!! They're gonna help him figure out that he likes geet!!! oh the flashback...so cute!! But she cried and he became restless...beautiful ending!!!

PART 6: Loved the clothes!! awwww..maan smiled seeing geet laugh!!! So cute!! And loved the sari scene, plus the pics!!! YAY!!! Sangeet function and maan's eyes only searching for geet...beautiful!!! the catching her, hand grabbing, and him insisting she call him maan...love it all!!! oh no geet cried, but so happy maan was concerned!! ranbir....lovely cliff-hanger!!!!

PART 7: KILLER!!!!!!! he's married her...damn amazing! thank god he shut up all those people...such idiots!! Love everyone for standing up for geet!! Nice twist and nicely written!!!!!!!!!

PART 8: he ties the taveez...so cute!! They get married!!! YAY!!! I'm jumping with joy!!!! and then he gives her his mother's manglasutra....he's so adorable!!! and so ever caring!!!!!!!!!!! Love his promise at the end!!!

Lovely lovely lovely writing!!! So much fun to read!! Enjoyed every word of it!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: my_maan_geet

awesome update, i m desperately wtng 4 it nd u just made my day.................

thanx, update soon........

Originally posted by: nan_10

just came across ur FF

loved it!!!!!

plzz add me to ur PM list

Originally posted by: Tuli

About ur latest update....

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Also, thanks 4 the PM. Waiting for the next one...