CaSual Affair [MN FF] Part-2 Pg-9 [21/nov] - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Daania-

*Edited*

Ruchi 🤗

YAY! I'm first 😃😆

Ah, this was an awesome update Ruch! I love the way you're taking this story.

A completely different genre, and you're handling it quite well. Bravo! Thanx Yaar .. yep , its totally different from m forte..but glad u liked my try ..

I really loved the relationship Nupur and her mom share. It's really sweet how Nupur acts like the grown up with her =D Lol.. yea..thats the USP for me .. !

And Mayank, ahh his character seems quite mysterious =| Hmmm.. Wait n Watch 😉

All in all it comes across as a very interesting read Ruch! Great job!

Continue soon. Thanx Again ..n will update very soon !

Happy Diwali 🤗

Love

Daania

Originally posted by: rkmnsg

shoo cant believe em not first

but at least em second=D

just loved part 1

it waz awsome ThanK u Thanku

like how Nupur n her mom r soo differ than each other I wanted to try something hatkeeeee 😆😆

n her moms soundz like the kid here😆

didn't quite understand Mayuz part He is a MYSTRY !!!!!..WAITTTT 😃

just understood he got dat new apartment=D

n haan sachi mein love da way u describe everything Thanx a tonnnnn sis !..

da last part waz awsome Thanx Again 😳

cant wait to read more

do cont soon Ruchi

n haan happy diwalii🤗

-Lina-

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Its a diff kind of story...Never read this kind before...I liked the starting...
Nupur-mom bond wz adorable...Anne is really sweet like a genuine friend of her daughter...
Mayank's part wz a bit confusing...Didnt understand whats up to him...
I loved the last part...Now its clear that why nupur came back to england...All in all very interesting...
Cont soon and happy diwali...

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hello Rach Its Ruchi...naam bhi bhuul gayi ??????
wah a quick update after ur prologue raha nahin gaya re.. 😆😆😆
thank u so much for it dear
yah i loved ur update as usual Thank uuuuuuu.....
though it was quite different frm ur other ff but i loved it
nups and moms convo was very nice
and mayank is totally different frm his real avtaar. Yep...mere FF mein Mayank is always ajeeb!!!
anyway good update jana
keep updating
and plz update BE and MJ Tujeh batay na..pen-drive mein hai.. chal i'll try !!😃
i m waiting for this update

take care

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Okie....sorry for the late comment...but I'm actually bored of IF....seriously need a break..so do pm me but I'll read and comment on my own pace......

well the story is something new and intriguing ...loving it
and I also have a feeling mayank and nupur mite end up sharing the apt.
looking forward to it ~!!!~

-Fatima