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Geet still in shock

She don't know the person'..who is aiming at her……

What the hell is that .why the person wants to kill her //////////////

She knows that she is innocent and she cannot harm anyone……………

She belongs to a simple family…………..with her mother and her…….

She knows she had a uncle……but she didn't meet him………………….

By the time his uncle son should come and take her with him…………..

But this person kidnapped……her………….

And she is in train of thoughts……….

Where maan on the other hand………….

Thinking of the fact that why the person aimed at geet…………………

Is the same person….or some other person…………..

He thought of something…………

And suddenly he looked at her……………..

Her eyes are in shock..and she is scared……..he stopped his heart which is saying to hug her and console her…………

But he actually wanted it……….

Suddenly he realized the van opposite to his jeep…….

Geet screamed and hugged him……………………..

Maan stopped the jeep…………………….

And he hugged back geet………..

He wonders why the hell he is doing this……………………..

But he tried to start the jeep……….but it is stucked……………..

He looked around ……….

He got down the jeep………..

Maan:move we need to walk…………..

Geet:came back.and said that hello I had a name remember………….

Maan:he said geet………..

Geet:shocked.for first time he called her by name……………..

But it sounds great for her………………

With a shock…

But he held her by hand………..and start to walk…
now can u please move or want me to take u in my arms……once again………..

Geet in shock.and realized…………….no…..i will walk,,.

And she entered int o the jungle……………….

He is walking in front…..and she is back…………..

Suddenly she start babbling……….what is this life…………

Complete full of adventure……………………

Every day one life first in cottage and second………………in jungle……………..

Maan………turned back…………..

He came in front of her.and said…….

If u use ur energy in walk….rather than in words…then it could be useful,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,in moving out of jungle…………….

And donot use ur brain,,,,,,,,,,,,which u had little quanity………….ok……….

And he turned front……………

She got the instance that he called her dumb………..

What the hell he is thinking,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

As out of anger………she stepped on stone,,,,,,,,,and above to fall on ground but as soona s maan turned back,,,,,,,,,,,she landed on maan……..and maan ,,,,,,,,,,as not prepared……falled on the ground along with her………………………

She falled flat..on his chest…………….as maan felt pain………………………….

As ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,his anger out of his mind……………….

But as the soft body touched his chest the emotions started…………………..

He quickly……tolds………….

Why don't u use that big eyes while walking………..instead of words……………………….

She twinkled the eyes and got the poin.t………as she lifted herself…………………….

So maan…………

He make himself straighten,,,,,,,,,,,and started walking,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He wondered why she is not answering back………………..

She said……kya insaan hay…………………hero samaj tha yeh kya…………jungle hay akele ladki…………….

Maan listened to the words………………………

He turned and started walking back………….

Who mein majak kar rahii thi…………….mera matlab who nahii tha………………….

He is busy in walking towards her……….with a continuous stare geet closed her mouth with duppatta

He came towards her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,came close..too close……………………. Like it was…………………….

And he looked at the back..and remove structure………….

On seeing that …………geet screamed…………….

And closed her eyes……………

He closed her mouth………….

Why are u shouting………..

Because there is snake in my shoulder……….and ur saying not to shout,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Yes……….ur not shouting………..inviting the animals for dinner of both…………..

I had no problem…….i can climb trees………………as u told im jungle………….e..but what about u …dreamy girl……………..can u do it…………………

And turned back,.andstart smiling……………………

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geet why he is smiling…………..

geet there is one way…………………..try to talk to him……………….

As geet.is lookinga t his smile…………………

He stopped smiling,,,,,,,,,,,

Why u stop smiling……………u look good while smiling…………..

She said and start smiling…………………….

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Geet is moving along with him………..

She is too tired…

Where as maan is moving with confidence……………….as he know each part of jungle………………

Suddenly he looked back.at geet,,,,,,,

Meantime geet is babbling………………regarding her fate……..oh no ab kya huwa.as with in a fraction of second…..she saw maan dragged her at the tree….and close her mouth with his hand………..and slamed her to the tree………he is too close that geet cannot breathe………………..

But he is looking at the other direction…………..as he find the creature moved to the other side……….he relived…………….but his hand is still on geet mouth…………

As he turned towards ,,,,,,geet and found her sobbing……….he relived her………….

Geet.short of breathe………couging heavily…….

Maan:tum teek hoo………

Geet:Ware wah.pehle mu pe haat rake …saase band karthe hoo,,,,,,,,,aur,,,,upar se …………….pooch e tho hoo…….e teek ho ay aaa nahi.tum insaan hoo………………

But maan is cheking top to toe…..he realized that she is wearing anklets which are making sounds……………….

He looked at her anger……….

,maan:nikaloo…………….

Geet"what………………she is confused…………

Are payal…………….jo tune pehana.jise wajah se problem h o rahe hay……………….

As she is ready to remove one is stuck………….maan tried to remove but……………..it was…….broken……….

Geet had became sad………..

Maan:why ur sad…………………

Geet:crying………………………….

Maan:what's wrong………………..

Geeet:u never know emotions as yeh mere maa ke akhari nishanii……………hay…

Maan:\felt bad and said…………………even I didn't have mother…………I lost her before…………………..

Geet……….felt bad……..

And they rested at the tree….

Maan:dekoo tum yeha ped ke pass so jaoo………..

Geet:mdin tumare pass nahii so unki……………..mein yehi teek hoo……….

Maan gave a look……..and rested his head at the tree………….

But cannot sleep as she is near sand…….

Suddenly she realized a creature moving towards her,,,,,,,,,,,

She woke up,,,,,,,,,with a jerk……………and .reached thetree………..

Maan open his eyes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He tried to move as…he tilted his head,,,,,,as geet is sleeping in his shoulder,,,,,with hand onnhis waist,,,,,,,,

He smiled a moment………..he looked at her,,,,,,,,,,smiling face…………her baby…….type attitude.and he saw the broken anklet.she is holding…….

He thought……..how can a p;erson could be that much wild to kill such a innocent girl……for money………………..

His blood boiled of the fact…………..

He tried to wake up geet……..

As geet opened her eyes…………….she found……….her headis rested in his shoulder……………..

She woke up/…………..she felt embrassed……….

Maan..started walking…………………..

Geet followed him……………

Geet:yeh kya ho rahe mujko…………………..kitna door rahene ke koshish kar rahii hii,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,jitna uske pass kyon jaa rahe hoo…………….

Part ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet Is completely lost

She didn't know whom he iss

He is a gangster'''..then why police is not after him'''..

But he is good shooter''''''''..

His aim is good'.

he is military officer''''no clue.why he kidnapped her'''.

She is still in moving.in her thoughts'''''

But she didn't see'''

As maan turned back'.and he saw'''.and told wait''.

Before he could say something'''..she stepped and fell intothe dig''for elephants''

Geet:pehle nahii bol sakthi'''..

Maantune kaha tha ke tuje madad ke jarorat nahii'''

Aur waise ekbaar girogi toh tume pata chalege''''aur agele baar galti nahii karogi''.

Geet:mein tumare tarah jungle aur ''''''..nahii hoo''''..

Maan:kya'''..

As she is still in dig.he gave a look and gave her a hand'''..

As she trying to hold his hand''''..

But failed''''''''.

She looked'''..at him anger'''''

As he gave the hand,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She dragged him to the dig'''.

He fumed at her''..

His anger''turned'''

She is smiling'''''''''

His face became red''

As soon as he saw her smiling

He lost in her smile''

She looked at him''which I staring at her'''''

She looked''''hello'''''''.

He looked up'''..and lift himself up'..and got out of the dig..

And he gave her the hand'''''..

And gee tame out'''''''''..

And the y started walking''.

There is no point of fun'''''''miss handa'''.

And he dragged her to the tree''''''.

Geet was shocked'''''''''.

He pinne d her to the tree'''''..

Geet closed her eyes'''

As maan '''''''''..

Looking at her cute face''''..closing her eyes''''.

He leave her''''

Kaise samajoo..iss ladki..ko''''''.har waqqt mazaak sujthai isko'''kya karonn mein''''''.

He is in thoughts'''''.

He turned back'''''''..

Suddenly she saw a place like cottage

She jumped with happy'''..as she ready to move'''''''..

Then''''''.suddenly maan stopped her''''..

Yeh tumara demak teek hay kya.saari raat jungle mein bitadiya''''.lekin ab'''..

At that time the door opened''.an old man'''.opened the door''''''''..

Are kaun tum log'''..jungle mein kya kar rahe hoo''''''.

Jee''''''hum log jungle raste batak gayee.hay chacha jee''''.

Maan:chacha jee'''''''

He turned back''''''

She is looking a ther stomach''''..as she already told she is hungry'''

He thought to take restr'''''.

Th old man welcomed''''

Achha beta.andar aye'''''''''''''''''''''.

Acha''''..

Geet enter into the cottage''..

The oldman asked'''are beta.tumara naam kya hay''''''

Jee chacha jii''''.geet''''''''.

Geet kitna pyara naam hay'..

Aur unka naam''..

Geeet:jee'''..

Oldman:achha'''''pati ka naam nahii letee'''

Maan:pati'''''

Geet:pati'''''.

Haa beti.pati ka naam''..lekar sharmaa rahii roo'''''ache sanskar hay tumare beti'are tere kapade karaab hogayee hu hay''..

Mein apne patni ke saath rehtee hoo'''.

Usss karmare''..mein kuch poorani kapade hay'

Pehenlo'''..

Geet enter into the room''''..

The room''''''.

It is small./''''

Geet looked at the clothes'''and she took it some'''

Where she is not dared to look at maan''''

As maan'''''''''.is other ''''''''..

As she didn't know why she felt different

When the old man said that he is ur husband''

Why she is blushed'..what 's wrong with her''''..

She is in confused emotions'..

On the other hand''

Maan.is different'when the person said that he is geet husband''.

Why he felt happy''''.why he is smiling''''giggling'''

What's wrong with him''

What is going with him'''''''''.

He enter into the room..

He looked else where'''''.

He didn't find geet''''''''''..and suddenly he heard sound of water'.

H turned back he saw geet coming out of bathroom''

She is wearing kurtha,''''''and clothe''''''which is down''''''.

She is dying her hair''

And the kurtha is tight fit'''''and he could see her curves''''''

He is totally'''''''splashed'''''..

Water on her face'''''

She is looking great'''''''.

He cannot take eyes of her'''''''''''..

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Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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The music starts

He cannot take eyes

And geet is also staring

As he took his shirt…………………..

And looking dashingly smart ………

Geet is looking at him……………….at his body…..

He is too hot………………

the song starts…………………….

Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

Maan imagination starts

Moving towards geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Where geet is stepping backwards…………………….

She runs and falls in his hands,…………….

They share a eye lock………

Geet wonders why he is looking at her like that

She tries to escape

But he holds her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai (dono lines 2x)
Raat Nasheeli Mast Sama Hai
Aaj Nashe Mein Sara Jahan Hai
Haan Ye Sharabi Mausam Behkaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

He is too lost…………..

Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise (dono lines 2x)
Ankhon Se Ankhen Milti Hai Aise
Bechain Hoke Toofan Mein Jaise
Mauj Koi Saahil Se Takraaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye

Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana
Rok Raha Hai Ham Ko Zamana
Door Hi Rehena Paas Na Aana
Kaise Magar Koi Dil Ko Samjhaaye
Roop Tera Mastana Pyar Mera Diwana
Bhool Koi Hamse Na Hojaye
as they are too close….

There is knock at the door……………….

It was the old man……………

Beta tum log kuch kaya nahii…….

Lo kuch khaalo……

geet free herself………

maan leave her,……………

maan thinking of himself……………

why I can't stop staring at her

why I feel she is so close to her

why I feel she is part of me……………..

why I cannot control my self

why……….i beself…………..

what's wrong with me…………..

geet………what is there in his eye

why u lost

why u control ur self ………………………….

And she open the door………………..

The oldman……….

Beta tum dono ka saath hamesha banaya rake

Geet:shocked,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Ha beta…………..rishtee………….upar se banade,,,,,,,,,,,

Who agar kuch log se milate hay,,,,,,,,,

Zindage bar saath reh…………..

Kar……………..

Tum kuch nahii kar rahi ho beta…..pasand nahii aya beta………………..

Yesi koi baat nahii…..

Are beta tere zindagi tere saathhay phir bho kis soch mein doob rahee hoo…

He looks at geeet……

Kabhi kabhi…………..zindagi mein kabhi kabhi……………..

Aisi dikhaati………….hay….sapne…..

Lekin mere zindagi sapna nahii hahy………….

Yeh sapna khoobsorat hay………………….

Lekin ankh khole ne hay…………

Sapna door rehnete hay………..

And he finished his food.

Where geet is busy in chatting with old man and smiling…….

In that time,,

He got a call……………..

Ahmed:sir………….kaha yeh aap…kal raat se apke phone try kar rahi hool…………….

Commissioner sir……..2 baar phone kar chuke apka…………

Geet listened to the conversation

Commissorsir phone kyon kiya…………..

Iska matlab ….yeh police wala hahy……………………

Oh………..lekin ..muje kidnap ky kiya……………

Maan:ahmed.everything is fine……….i will call sir………………..

Donot worry…………………………………..

And he cuts the phone……..

He close his eyes….

He remembers the academy………..

And salutings……………..

He remembers uniform.and a old man face…………….

Betakabhi…….bhi apne zindagi mein sachee ka saath do………….hamesha ..protection karoo

He turned……………to find geet staring at him

And asking………….

Kaun hoo………………..tum…….???????????????????

Part ends

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