Living without you(Maneet ff)part 16-pg46 - Page 14

hey noori....

Wow amazin update! Geet so sweet, m scard aftr maan's grandpa's prediction. Climbin through window n Bachelor's party part was fun.cont soon

It was really sweet update

i wonder wht maan's punishment is

wow that was really nice update plz cont soon

wow....
ana zdorable update...
simply beautiful
terrific writing
loved the update immensely
keep writing
reva

hiiii

loved the ff............loved the bonding bw geet and ali and also that maan is very understanding with their bonding.............can u pm me when u update thanks

hey sorry...Exams had gotten the best of me...BUt inshallah will update soon:)

The next morning everyone was running around the house getting ready.Dadi had called up the top make-up artist and hairstylist to get her dulhan ready. Arohi had gotten up and pulled Geet to her room, sitting her down arohi fill her hands with mehndi.After being given a pedicure and manicure Geet was finally ready to wear her bridal clothes.Geet sat in front of the mirror admiring herself. For the first time Geet felt beautiful.Geet's mother stood by the door in tears, her daughter was finally getting married.She wiped away her tears, trying to be strong for her daughter.She slowly held on to the door for support before moving towards her.She stood behind her daughter,who was lost in her thoughts.

"kitni sundar lag rahi hai meri beti!"Taking some kajal from the corner of her eyes and putting it behind her ear.

"Mama!"Geet looked at her,Geet's eyes began to water.

"Are aaj ke din nahi pagli.Itna acha make-up karab hojaye ga"Shilpa said to her daughter before smiling.

"Mama!Aap bhi na!Chalo aap mera saath betho."Geet said getting up carefully and dragging her mom to her bed.

"Are beta."

"Mama,aaj toh mujhe apni godh mein letne do.Aaj toh apki beti paraye ghar mein ja rahi hai."Geet said as her mother Her mother slightly looked away finally thinking about how life would be without her.She clutched her head slightly feeling a bit dizzy. She felt her daughter's head rest on her lap,and she relaxed.

"Beta your clothes are going to get wrinkled up.Pagli"Her mother said hiding her emotions from her daughters questioning eyes.

"I know your scared mama,I know that you want to cry.Toh karlo mama.Main apki beti hoon."Geet said looking up at her mom.

"Its not that pagli….Main tumhare liye bohot kush hoon beta.Magar yakeen nahi ho raha ke meri choti si princess itni bari hogayi hai.Geet tumein pata hai ke jab tum pedha hui thi toh jee kerta tha ke bus apne bahoon main lelon or kabhi na chooron.Pir dheere dheere maine apni ankhon se tumein bara hota dekha.I still can not believe it ke tum wohi larki ho,jo mere paas se eik min ke liye door hoti thi toh roona shoro ker deti thi.Tum-hare papa ki death ke baad main toote gayi thi.Unke kitne arman the tumhari shaadi ke liye.Geet eik maa ki hasiyat se aaj main tumhara se eik waada lena chahti hoon.Nibhao gi mera waada?"Shilpa asked caressing her daughters face as her head was still on her lap.she watched her daughter get up and look ahead.

"Mama,I really wish papa was here,you know jab saari larkiyan apne abbu se chipat ker roothi hain…Jab who kisi aur ghar ki ishat baane ne ja rahein hotin hai,toh apne babul ki duain le ker jati hain..Magar maa,aap jo chaho gi wohi ho ga..batao maa"Gee t said turning her head to look at her mother.

"Waada karo hamesha kush raho gi,waada karo apne har gham ko apne dil main nahi daba ker rakho gi.Waada karo, ke tum hamesha ise ghar main eik roshni ban ker raho gi.Waada karo ke har dam tum apna aur Maan ka kyal rakho gi.Geet tumne itni si age main bohot kuch apne haathon se luta diya.Aaj se tum har ushe gham ko apni takate banao gi.Waada karo Geet"Shilpa said silently crying.Geet came and hugged her letting the tears escape her eyes.

"Mama yeh bhi koi poochne wali baat hai"She said kissing her mom on the cheek for the kind words.

"Bus bohot ho liya,tumhari nayi zindagi tumhara inteezar ker rahi hai."Shilp said getting up and helping Geet get up.

At the Mandir…

"Maan SIT DOWN"Dadi said getting annoyed with her grandsons behaviour

"Per Dadi,who abhi tak ayi nahi"Maan said feeling nervous.

"Maan beta abhi phone kiya hai.woh arein hain."Mr Khurana said trying not to laugh.

Everyone watched in shock as Maan bent his head to pray,his eyes shut tight and his hands clasped together.Dadi wiped away the tears that were falling from the corner of her eyes.With his eyes closed he prayed, for the first time he prayed for himself. " Aae baghwan ,mujhe patha hai ke aaj yeh manzil main apke bina nahi dekh sakhta tha.Apne meri zindagi mein eik asi kushboo bardi hai ke who meri har saans main shamil hai.Woh

Geet hai mere dil ka.Eik naghma jaisa mera lab per ho.Ise dard ki dawa ban ke ayi hai.Aap sab ki sunte ho,aaj meri bhi sunlo.Meri Geet ko saada kush rakhna."Maan prayed and opened his eyes as he heard the vivd noises of anklets.His heart stopped beating as he turned around. His family gave him a confused look as he ran to the front of the mandir.Mrs Khurana was astonished at how much he cared for Geet,but she was not surprised. Everyone watched as the wind blew,and the sounds of someone's anklet got closer.

Everyone stood rooted as they took in the sight in front of them. There stood Geet clad in a lehnga,l looking gorgeous. No…Gorgeous was a word that would not do any justice to her beauty.Dadi came to stand by a frozen Maan.She looked at her grandson before poking him,and telling him to sit in the mandap,as they would bring the bide.

Geet looked at dadi before bending down and getting her blessing ,Dadi held her by the shoulder and gave her a kiss.Shilpa along with Mrs Khan, helped geet sit by Maan.Maan had cleared his throat and smiled at her, crying to grab her hand but Dadi had hit him on the head and told him to wait. Everyone had laughed, at his strange behaviour.

The ceremony began, everyone watched as Maan applied sindoor,and clasped the megastar around Geet's neck. Soon it was time to take the seven sacred rounds around the fire. With each round Maan and Geet prayed for a life filled with happiness. The last round, around the fire Maan and Geet felt strong winds trying to pull them a part. Then they saw him, clad in white clothes a young boy appeared in front of the mandir. The boy had a faint smile on his face, he looked at Geet and smiled before looking at Maan and saying to take care of her. With that he had disappeared. Maan turned around to look at geet who had whispered Ali's name. The family stood confused, as to why they had stopped since only Maan and Geet saw Ali. The pandit asked them to proceed ,Maan and Geet smiled before they finished the last round. Maan hugged Geet, before whispering words of comfort in her ear. After getting their blessings from the family. Maan and Geet stopped as they Greeted Prem and heer,and there little bundle of joy.Heer had let her tears loose before hugging geet,thanking her for everything she had done for him.She had asked her to come hang out, since they were both married women now.Geet had agreed,Maan gave prem a hug and shook Heer's hand.

It was time to go home, not only for Geet but for Ali's parents. Today they would go back to Pakistan, where they belonged. Geet had hugged Mr and Mrs Khan and cried, thanking for the support they had given her mother. Mr khan took out a diamond locket, and clasped it around her neck. Telling her that it would remind her of every moment they shared as a family. She had cried, hiding her self in his fatherly embrace, over the years he had become like a father to her .Today, a day when girls would cry in there fathers arms, she cried in a mans arms who supported her family through so much. She wiped her tears, and wiped his tears as they were falling from his eyes. She gave him a peck on the cheek and moved to look at her mother. Why did this seem like a goodbye, between them? She watched her mother look everywhere but her,she silently laughed knowing her mother was nervous. Maan and Geet moved to Shilpa,only to notice her pale face.

"Mama,why are you so pale?Are aap hi toh mujhe room main tasali deh rahi thi.Aur ab aap roone wali shakal le ker keri ho."Geet said as she cried in her hands. Her motherly embrace

"Pagli."She said

Precap…Eik raath jab who eik bane…Aur eik din jab unke ghar ke darwaze per pir gham ne dastak diyaJ