'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#671

was waiting for this-mayanks part of the story.

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#672

Wonderfully written neela..seriously kia hai aap... itna acha kaise likh lete hai..itni paheloyou mai baate kerti hai ki unko samjhne ke liye 2-3 updates perhne perte hai tab jakar pata chalata hai ..

bhut acha tha aapka yeh update hume tou lagta hi nhi hai isse acha hi koi likh sakta hai so finally mayur's wedding wow hum tou itne pareshaan they ki achanak kia hogaya ki mayyu aisa kaise per humara mayyu aisa nhi ker sakta nup k saath fantastic update ,,

really soo deeply writtten it was really touching i loved each n evry scne,word n line seriously..

n urdu tou mashallah bhut zabardst hai woh kia haina ki hum bhi luckhnow k hai hume bhut acha lagta hai urdu mai perhna... aur specially ager itni pahelyou batee hau tabto maza hi dugna hy jayega...😍

Hum aapkemuntazir rahege aapke next update k liye...

--Summi--

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#673

I am going to read this whole story and comment on each part. I know you are a wonderful writer and I cannot afford to miss this story
The Start is Amazing. Mayank is so cuttee. Wah Rishta taiyyar. Amazing. Lets see what happens next.

Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

Neela. This Amazing. This the most amazing storyy ever. What is the meaning of Intikhaab ? Haha Sharma and Bhushan. MaYur are so adorable. I heard you are a tragic queen. No Tragedy here Please.

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Edited by -AbhIyaViSu- - 14 years ago

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#675

The third chapter is so cute and touchy. Mayank is leaving. Ooh 😭. Waiting to read more.

Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#676

Finally the Leap. I love Nupur Aparna talk. They are soo loving. Ooh Diya entered. She is Mayanks cousiin. Hmm Intresting. And the envelope. Curious. Ill read the next chapter Now.

Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#677

I Just Love Nupur. Shes Amazing. A Mayank Pile ? Sucha cutie. Their lettera are so sweet , indescribable. The years which have gone boy and then suddenly a letter. This is getting so interesting. And I am in love with what you write.

Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#678

I so love Nupur. I love the way her character is potrayed. Amazing Work Neela. Haha whos that Stranger ? Waiting For Nupur to Open the Letter.

Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#679

I love what Mayank has written. Thats so sweet. Oh now hes going to Erope , so that guy is def not Mayank. I have strage Imaginations . Haha Thinking Mayank to be there. Loved it.

Natasha