'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 51

Okay, this is just so not fair. I was like, waiting for this FF to be updated like anything. And I even commented on this one!

But, then I go off for the evening because of my health, and when I come back in the morning I see, that you have updated it already and people have commented on it.

This is not fair at all!

Okay, so she isn't feeling well. How would she? She is without her love. And heart-broken people aren't well.

Hmm…toh abhi bhi bharosa hai uspar. Hoga kyun nahi? Pyaar karti hai usse. And I literally loved the convo she had with herself. Khud hi se ham bhi sawaal karte hain, aur khud ke jawaab ko bhi maante hain.

Literally, true friends bahut kismet waalo ko milti hai. Unke liye hamari saari takleefein bhi unki khud ki ho jaati hain.

Wow…..so Mayank calls her. Okay, yup I agree with you. There are some moments when u definitely don't know how to react.

And she launches herself?

Yaar use ek baar…bas ek baar explanation ka mauka toh dena chahiye tha…kyunki kai baar hakequat kuch aur hi hoti hai. And she could atleast do this much.

Phir chahe koi bhi faisla leti, woh theek hota. Baad mein usse kabhi nahi lagta ki 'kaash main ek baar uski baat sun leti'. I really don't want her to regret.

But then, I really can't blame her. Cause if I would have been in her place, I would have done that too.

How can you give another chance to someone who had deliberately hidden such a crude fact of his life from you? How to love him despite knowing that it may be false? How to try and forgive, knowing that you are the one who is to loose on both the ends.

Par itni jaldi mohobaat nafrat mein nahi badalti hai. Kabhi nahi.

And Nupur ki last line padhne ke baad, hamein sach mein lagta hai ki Mayank ko usse baat karni chahiye. Kyunki apne jazbaaton mein agar woh khudko khatam kar sakti hain, toh phir dil bahut zyada toota hoga.

Jo bhi hai…I just want confrontation…becoz I can't hate Mayank until I hear his side too.

Okay, this time, your four lines were totally contradictory to the update. But never the less, they are as beautiful as ever.

Itna dard bhara update tha ki, you have to update sooner to ease the pain away.

Please update soon. Coz this is one of the only few FFs for which, I actually wait. Infact, one of the only few FFs I read. And I sincerely love this FF.

So, continue soon.

- Mahak

Originally posted by: sharneel

Falling for Mayu kya? Woh to paida hone k baad se hi fall kar rahi hai 😆 abhi jake aakhri step me giri..😳 aur yaar yeh kyun late me reply karti ho..lemme tell you a secret..I kinda forget my own story even the ones already written. So when you refer to old parts, I have to read them all over again to really understand what readers are commenting on 😕 And I hate reading 😡 khaas karke agar reading k laayek na ho kuch to...and honestly I don't feel like reading my own writing



Well guessed baccha 👏 👏 kaise pata? guzar chuki ho kya? 😉



me too...per pata nahi kyun the other readers did not accept him well.*sigh*



ab yeh kaunsa part hai! 😲 agar accha kaha hai to accha hi hoga 😃 Thanx..




Yeah..even I was laughing my head off when I was writing that part. I could literally see a fierce Nupur scaring the hell out of everyone mainly Abhi and poor Tanmay has no idea about her trait 😆




I don't know why but most readers felt the same about this part. I don't even have a clue what was so good abt it..as I wrote it in a fly! Well, at least it gives you a reason to fall in love with the FF again 😃




What do you mean letters aur email pe kaun tha!!! pehla letter to khud Diya ne dia Mayank se lekar aur Nupur ne ussi add pe reply kiya! aur email add bhi wahan se aaya. kya yaar..Intikhaab ka CID bana diya 😆

aahhh...finished at last. Please ab backlog mat create karna 😔 Can't reply properly na..bhool jaati hoon 🤢

-Neela