SS - Geet-HOGI PYAR KI JEET last part(pg24)updtd - Page 5

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

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Loved it......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....

Loved every single line.........

Eagerly waiting for the next part........

Pls Update Sooooooon.........

Originally posted by: komlika

great work..........please continue.....add me to PM list

Originally posted by: krati5

a big big thnk uto strt ff 4m ds point... i ws wishing dat sum1 shld write sumthng aftr last episode. u r so lovely... due 2 sum reason i missed thursdy epi,wed epi ws gud nd perfct, whn i switched tv on fri i wnt in shock, wht hd hppnd, i saw nly 1st part of fri epi and left my dineer,i ws hvng pain nd hatere simultaneously deep in m,y heart, i hate geet wht she hd done wd maan infrnt of all wd media 2 involved, maan ki insult to bardasht hi nhi mujhse. itna dard hua ki maine pura epi dekha b nhi.. i m a practical gal although, wtchd many serials b4 bt never atached wd them but thd one hs makd me crazy.... dn't whthr ds of story or due to gurmeet's presence as maan, he made a character so true nd idealisez i cn't express dat in words...... hope u sumhw got it hw much i wntd ds ff 4m sum1... a big THANKS 4 strtng ds topic...... plz do update soon nd plz plz bring sum tnsn free moments....👏👏 thnks dear

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Originally posted by: sharmake11

it sounds wonderful because i'm addicted to Maaneet so pls do cont soonnnnnnnnnn thanks pm

Originally posted by: nanatoteja

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really good

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Part 2 :-

Geet is now laying on a bed …. She is all alone in that room …

she wakes up after some time …. & sees that there is no one in that room & this room is not at all familiar to her … she is finding herself in a new environment …. Geet is scared now …

geet – "babaji main kahan aa gayi hun … yeh kiska ghar hain … taviz …. Taviz kahan parr hain …"

The taviz is not there in her hands … she gets up from the bed & checks the whole bed … then her eyes fall on the table next to bed … she sees some thing silvery shining on the table … it's the taviz ... geet picks up the taviz.

Geet – "babaji … shukar hain aap ka … taaviz mil gayi hain … parr yeh kiska ghar hain .... mujhe yahan sae jaana padega …. Meera mera intezaar kar rahin hongi … neechae jaa kar dekhti hun yeh kiska ghar hain …"

Geet comes out of that room & is now checking the other rooms next to her for any sign of human …. But to her amazement she does not find any one in any room … Geet decides to go down to see if she can find out in whose house she is … she finds that the hall is also empty ….

Geet – "kaise ajeeb ghar hain …. Jahan koi nahin rehta …"

Geet finally hears some noises coming some where from the right side of the hall.

Man's voice …- bachon … chup chap yeh khalon … warna ek laga unga tum donon ko …

Bache – hum nahin khayengae ….

Geet – "yeh awazein maine kahan suni thi … jaani pehchani lag rahin hain …"

She enters the room … & sees familiar faces over there … whom she had met before in the hospital …

Geet – tum log … yahan par …

Yash – haan geet … hum … yahan … yeh hamara ghar hain …

Geet – oh ok acha hain … main yahan kaise aayi …

Yash – oh … wo … tum mere car kae samne akar baehosh hogayi thi… tho main tumhein idhar mere ghar lae kae aagaya …

Geet – teek hain … thank you … ab mujhe chal na chahiye …

geet is going away … yash reacts quickly … Yash runs behind her …

Yash – geet … geet … kahan jaa rahin ho ….

Geet – meera kae paas … matlab jahan main rehti hoon … wahan …

Yash – tum tumhara promise poora kiyae bagair kaise jaa sakti ho …

Geet – promise … maine kab kiya …. wo bhi tum sae ….

Yash - tumne mujhsae ek promise kiya tha naa hospital main …

Geet – hospital main …

Yash – kya geet … bhool gayi … hospital main … maine tumhein maan singh khurana ka room # bataya tha … aur uss kae badlae main maine tumsae ek waada liya tha …

Geet now remembers the promise she made to yash … just the mention of maan's name bought tears in her eyes – maan …

Geet was remembering all the incidents that happened in the hospital … how frantically she was searching for maan … just to have a look at him … & the promise she made to yash while searching for maan …. She was not even conscious when she made that promise … she vaguely remembers that she actually made some one a promise … that day …. all she remembers was she needs to search for maan … & she could do any thing to just get the room # … to such an extent that she made a promise to a stranger … even without knowing what the result would be ….

Geet to herself – "uss din unki ek jhalak kae liyae maine ek anjaan admi sae … wada karkae bait gayi … aur aaj … aaj maine ussi insaan ka ithna baezathi ki hain … oh babaji … main apne aap ko maaf nahin kar sakthi …. Maine yeh kya kardiya hain … ab main unka samna bhi nahin kar sakhthi hun …

babli while eating switch the TV on … news is coming on the TV …

Reporter – abhi abhi mili khabron kae anusaar … Ms. Geet handa ka case nae ek nayi modh li hain ….

At the sound of her name geet comes out of her thoughts ….

Reporter – hamein abhi abhi khabar mili hain … ki Ms.Geet Handa aur Mr. Maan Singh Khurana … dono gayab hain … yeh dono kahan par hain kisiko kuch bhi khabar nahin hain ….

Iss kaa matlab kya hain … kya Mr.Maan aur Ms. Geet dono milae hua hain …. aaj subah jo media kae samnae Ms.geet nae shadi sae inkaar kar diya … kya wo sab ek natak tha … kya yeh media ka dyan batanae kae liyae ... kya yeh sab jaan bhuj kae ki gayi natak hain … thaki yeh media sae dur bhag sake … par hum ithni asani sae unhe chodengae nahin … hum bhi baath ki theh tak jaayengae ..."

Geet to herself –"maan sir …. Gayab hain …. Phir sae apne kisi bill main jaa kar chup gaye hongae … unka tho yeh aadat ban chuki hain ….maan aap kahan par ho … wo kithnae gusse main thae subah ... gusse main agar unhone … hey babaji soch kae mujhae darr lag rahan hain …. Babaji plz unka madad karna …..unki raksha karna ...."

Yash – geet … kya hua …

Geet –haan ... kuch nahin …

Yash – geet … kya soch rahin ho …

Geet – kuch nahin …

Yash – ok geet ... ab meri baath suno … abhi tak jo kuch bhi hua … usko nazar main rakhthae hua tum Khurana Constructions wapas tho nahin jaaogi … aur tumhe apna sarr chupanae kae liyae ek jagah bhi chahiye aur naukri bhi chahiye … hain na …

Geet – haan tho ...

Yash – teek hain …phir … aaj kae baad tum mere ghar main mere bachon ki nanny ban kar rahogi … aur subah jab yeh dono school chale jaayengae to tum mere saath mere office main secretary ka kaam karogi …

Geet – kya …

Yash – plz plz plz geet … mana math karna … main tumhara paon padtha hun …

Yash begging her literally by falling on her feet … - jab tak tum haan nahin bologae … main tumhara pair nahin chodungaa …

Geet is jumping trying to free herself from yash – chodiyae … chodiyae …

Yash on geet's feet – nahin … main nahin … chodungaa … jab tak tum haan nahin bologi ….

Geet 2 herself –"babaji …. Main kya karun …. Kya mera yahan kaam karna teek hoga … waise bhi .. mujhe kahin na kahin tho kaam karna hi padega … idhar karun kae kahin aur … "

Geet – teek hain … main karungi …

Yash – thank you … thank you … thank you very much … tum janthi nahin ho … tumnae haan keh kar mujh par kithna bada ehsaan kiya hain …

Yash – bachon … aaj sae … geet di tum dono ka dekh baal karegi … tum dono ki nanny banegi ...

Yash – geet … yeh babli hain …

Babli – hai …

Geet – hai …

Yash – aur yeh bunty hain …

Bunty – hai …

Geet – hai …

Geet – par mera saaman … wo sab tho meera kae ghar main hain …

Yash – teek hain kal subah jaa kar lae lae naa …

Geet – hmmm …

Yash – tum kuch khaogi …. Geet …

Geet – nahin … mujhe bhukh nahin hain …(saying this she leaves the kitchen)

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