SS - Geet-HOGI PYAR KI JEET last part(pg24)updtd

dewdropred thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#1

HOGI PYAR KI JEET ...

This Short Story is based on the current track ...

part 1 : page 1
part 2: page 7
Part 1:-

Maan - main bhi dekhungaa ki tum merae madad kae baigaar kaise idhar reh sakthi ho ..

Geet - main bhi aap ko dikha dungi ki mujhe jeenae kae liyae aap ka sahara ki jaroorat nahin hain...

Maan & geet get separated as we already saw ... now they both have decided to start to live their lives separately ...

Yash is on his way to khurana constructions .. Thinking that that is the best place to find out about geet ...

Geet on her way to meera's place & is thinking - hey babaji ... Yeh sab kya hogaya ... Yeh maine aaj kya kar diya.. maan sir ki baezathi kar diya hain maine puura office staff or board of directors kae samnae ... Ithni badi galti kardi hain maine ...yeh sab kehnae or karnae sae pehlae maine kyun kuch nahin socha .... Kam sae kam ek baar tho sochni chahiyae thi naa mujhe ... aur maine unki baat bhi nahin suni hain ... mujhe unko apni bath kehnae ka ek mauka tho deni chahiye thi ... Ab main kya karun ...

Babaji mujhe tho pehlae sae hi lag rahan tha khi kuch galat hone wala hain ... babaji mere saath aap kabhi bhi kuch bhi acha kyun nahin hone dethae hain ... aap mere zindagi kae saath aise kab tak khelengae babaji ... mujhe kush rehnae ka adhikaar nahin hain .... Kya ...batayiye babaji .... Ithni mushkil kae baad tho mujhe zindagi main kushiyan mili maan kae roop main ... aur aapnae mere saath yeh sab kuch kar diya hain .. aaj mujhsae wo kaam kar wa diya hain ... jo maine sapne main bhi nahin socha tha ... Maine maan ki beizathi kar di hain ... sab kae samnae ...unki pyar ki baizathi ki hain ... poori duniya kae samnae ... kya mera pyar ki dor ithni kamzor thi ... ki ek choti si baat kae upar maine unkae upar shakh kiya ... unkae upar jinonae mera saath kabhi nahin choda .... Har mushkil waqt main mera saath diyaa hain ... har waqt mere saath rehnae ka wada kiya hain ...

while she was thinking about everything that went wrong today a car is coming from opposite direction ... Geet is still walking .... The driver is honking still no response from geet ... The car stops suddenly in front of her ... just a few inches away from her ... The driver walks out of the car ... geet faints in front of the car ... the driver picks her up & takes her away in his car ...

On the other side maan is in the office in his room ... maan is unable to stay in the office any more .... He calls dev & asks him to take care of dadima as he is going away from delhi for some time ... he talks to the lawyer & asks him to extend the bail period for 1 more day .... & decides to go back to the jungle to camp ...

Maan on his way to the jungle / camp - geet tum nae ek baar ... ek baar bhi nahin socha ... yeh sab kehnae sae pehlae ... ki kya main tumhare saath aisa karr saktha hun ... kya tumnae mujhe ya mere pyar ko bas ithna hi samajh paayi ho ... Ya phir mere pyar main hi kuch kami rehgayi hogi ki tumnae mujhe kabhi samajh nahin payi ... ithni dinon ki hamari rishtae main kya tum mujhe ithna hi samajh paayi ho ...

Parr maan tumnae aaj geet kae saath jo kiya kya wo teek tha -. Agar wo samaj na nahin chahthi thi tho tum kya kar rahen thae ... kya tumhara farz nahin bantha ki tum usse samjao ... agar wo kuch janna chahthi thi .... Tho tum bhi tho usse bata sakhthae thae ... kyun nahin bataya ... uskae uppar gussa kiya ithna gussa kiya ... usse gaseetthae hua office sae bahar lae gaya ... ithna gussa maan ...ek baar tho tumhe sochna chahiyae thana ki wo pregnant hain ... uss kae haalat kae baaren main tho sochna chayiyae tha naa ... meera ... meera ko phone kar kae poonch tha hun ki wo pahunchi ki nahin ...

Maan calls meera - meera kya geet udhar aayi hain...

Meera - no maan ... geet abhi tak ghar nahin pahunchi hain ...

Maan - kya abhi tak ghar nahin pahunchi ...

Meera - maan yeh sab kya hogaya ... hain ... geet kya bol rahin thi ...

Maan - meera main abhi kuch bhi baat nahin karna chahtha hun ... agar tumhe geet ka pata chalet ho mujhe inform kardena ...

Meera - ok ... maan ... main inform kardungi ...

******************************************

Plz let me know if u all want me 2 continue or not ....

Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

211

Views

39.3k

Users

60

Likes

500

Frequent Posters

leen10leen thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
nice....
plz continue...n add me to ur pm list.
IntrovertedDame thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
#3
Hey, nice beginning!
Who is d mysterious driver?
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#4
Hey do continue soon..it good ..i like it
SahSah thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
#5
hey this looks interesting do continue.....
pm me if u update...thx
zebronics thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#6
hi dear, good one yaar
pls continue
and update soon, i m eagerly waiting for next part
PM me whenever u update
dewdropred thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome

really good
con soon

thank u ... sure ... soon ...
dewdropred thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: leen10leen

nice....

plz continue...n add me to ur pm list.

thank u ... sure ... u have been added to the list ...
dewdropred thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Amrinag

Hey, nice beginning!

Who is d mysterious driver?

thank u ... u will know it very soon ...
dewdropred thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Hey do continue soon..it good ..i like it

thank u dear ... very soon ...

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet

4 months ago

Love-O-Rama's Pyar ka Trope-fest RESULTS!

Hello, hello writers, graphicers, readers and all IF ites! We are finally ready to announce the results of the much-awaited Pyar ka trope fest...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

5 months ago

Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest : Closed

You feel it in your fingers, you feel it in your toes Love is all around you, and so the feeling grows Yes, the day of feeling love, giving...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

4 months ago

Brewing Confessions ~ Arnav+Geet OS #PyarkaTropefest

Graphic Credits: itsShonali This is one of my entries for the Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest Trope: Set A: Best Friend’s Sibling Set B:...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (75%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

2 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".