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Thanks for all the support & the wonderful comments …

Part 6:-

As in the last update Maan dances with Geet while his hand was still bleeding & Geet notices his bleeding hand … & after their dance ….

Maan takes geet outside with him into the garden … Maan's left hand holding Geet's right hand … This time maan has taken care that he will not drag geet unlike last time how he dragged her out of the office … geet too is walking behind him silently as she too wants to talk to him …

Maan & Geet are now in the garden in front of a water fountain … Geet now takes maan's hand in her hand & checks that maan's hand is badly hurt …

Maan pulls his hand away from her …. Geet looses her balance & falls over him … maan holds geet by her back with his left hand … they both are looking into each other's eyes …

(both have mahi moment ….It's Been forever tht I used mahi in this FF … therefore mahi time … … been missing mahi in this FF since it started …)

(Mahi continues ….)

Geet is no less stubborn than maan … geet gives him a I don't care attitude & don't act smart with me look … She too pulls his bleeding hand towards her … she then washes maan's hand with the water from the fountain ….

(Mahi continues ….)

Maan is staring as usual at his geet … geet without thinking even for a second tears her saree pallu & ties it on the wound on maan's hand … maan still staring at geet … when geet starts looking at him he takes his eyes off her … & pulls his hand back from her …

(Mahi continues ….)

Geet to herself – "yeh maan pata nahin … apne aap ko kya samajh thae hain … ek tho mujhae jabardasthi idhar lae kae aaye …. Upar sae mujhae taevar dikha rahen hain … teek hain … main bhi chali jathi hun … agar yeh aise hi budh bankae khade rahengae tho … main nahin reh nae waali idhar …"

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While Maan & Geet … were busy in themselves … yash finds geet missing … Then later on checks that even maan is missing from the hall … yash is searching for geet as he needs geet's help in the hall … Yash comes out of the hall in the search of geet … enquires for them outside the hall … the security guard outside the hall tells him that a couple who left the party hall just a while ago went towards the garden … yash to walks towards the garden …

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(Mahi continues ….)

Geet starts leaving from there … maan quickly grabs her saree pallu … & stops her from leaving … Geet stops … maan slowly is coming towards her … pulling her towards him too …. by holding her torn saree pallu … geet's heart is beating at a super duper high speed … now both maan & geet are very very close to each other geet's back touching maan's chest … sensing each other very well … maan bent his head in such a way that … now maan's hot breath is falling over Geet's neck … making geet loose control over her self … but Geet still hasn't lost control over self …

(Mahi continues ….)

Maan holds geet's shoulders & makes geet turn towards him …

Maan – mere dard sae tumhe takleef kyun ho rahin thi geet … mere liyae tumnae apni sari phad di … yeh bhi nahin socha ki hum kahan pae hain …

(Mahi continues ….)

Geet does not answer maan … she is looking silently at maan with tears in her eyes … Geet now starts going away from there … maan quickly grabs her hand & pulls her with full force towards him … that she falls on him …with her hands on his shoulders & with her hair brushing over his face …. maan takes her hair off his face with his left hand & is holding geet by her waist with his right hand & is now using his other hand to make geet get close to him by Pressing geet towards him so that she is very very close to him …

so that geet cannot get away from him... now geet too coils her arms around maan's shoulders & maan holding geet tightly in his embrace … maan & Geet both find solace in each other arms … they both loose them selves in the moment for a minute or so … hugging each other … geet's warm tears rolling down her cheek & wetting maan's shirt on the shoulders … but geet quickly reacts & tries to pull her self away from him … & maan is holding geet tight in his grip & not allowing her to loosen her self from him …

(Mahi continues ….)

geet while trying to free herself from Maan ….

Geet – mujhae chodiyen ….

Maan – nahin jab tak meri baath khatam nahin hoti … main tumhein nahin chodungaa …

(Mahi continues ….)

Geet is pleading maan to leave her …. But maan does not want to leave her & he is making his grip more tight on Geet … twisting geet's hand … due to which he is hurting geet even more … geet eyes are again filled with tears … these tears are different from geet's earlier tears …

Geet – mujhae chodiyen …. Mujhae dard ho rahan hain ….

Yash comes into the garden & starts yelling out their names in the garden … meanwhile maan too notices tears in Geet's eyes & he leaves her …

Yash voice has become more clear now … maan & geet both hear yash voice … yash comes close to both of them … maan's feelings change as soon as he spots yash … he is angry with yash for disturbing them … but decides to not to show his feelings out … yash interrupts them …

Yash – tum dono yahan pae …

Maan looking at geet – haan wo andhar ghutan si mehsoos ho rahan tha … isi liyae bahar aa gaye thae ….

Yash – geet mujhae tumhari jaroorat hain andhar chalo mere saath …

Yash - maan … BTW … kya main aap ko maan bol saktha hun …

Maan – it's ok …. Bol sakhthae ho …

Yash – maan … chaliye aap bhi … thodi daer main party bhi khatam ho jayegi … aur yeh party aap kae liyae tho dee gayi hain … aur aap hi party sae gayab hain …

Maan with a stern face not happy at all with yash's entry & interruption to their moment ….

Maan – Chalo … let's go …

They all go back to the party hall … & wrap up the party ….

Maan – Geet main tumhe ghar chod dae tha hun … chalo ….

Yash intervenes again & insists that…

Yash - iski jaroorat nahin hain maan … geet mere ghar main hi rehti hain … geet mere saath ghar chalegi … geet chalo …

Maan's anger knew no bounds now … first yash was shaking his hands with geet … next he wanted to dance with geet … then he came to the garden behind them … now he has taken geet home … not allowing maan to speak to her what he wanted to speak to geet …

Maan on the way to khurana mansion ….& yash & geet on their way to Malhotra's residence …

Maan to himself on his way home – "geet ko bolna padega ki wo wapas meera kae saath rehna shuru karen aur wo yash kae ghar sae nikal jaayae .... waise jo baath main geet sae bolna chahtha hun … uskae baad tho yeh bolnae ki jaroorat bhi nahin padegi … "

Yash in the mean while is stealing glances at geet … geet is busy looking out of the window … not noticing yash … yash is getting attracted to Geet …

Maan,Geet & Yash in their respective bedrooms … maan & yash both lost in geet thoughts …. Geet lost in maan's thoughts …. They all go to bed …

Next day morning …. Geet sends babli & bunty to school & gets ready … yash also gets ready & comes down ….

Yash – geet ooffice chale …

Geet – par apne tho kahan tha ki aap office nahin aayengae … ab kya hua …

Yash normally does not go to office … but now he wants to go to malhotra Industires so that he can spend some time with geet …

Yash – haan … bas abhi mood ban gaya hain … tho chale …

Geet – haan … teek hain …

Yash & Geet both go to office …. Maan also reaches office in time …

Yash introduces maan to office staff … maan , geet & yash … all in their respective cabins working …

After some time … maan goes out of his cabin to check on geet … & what she is doing …. But does not find her in her cabin ….

Then he spots her with 3 other office staff … geet is with Romeo ,Pandey & Manisha … asking them some questions regarding a project & they all are discussing on the project …

Maan is so lost in geet … maan does not know that he is not the only one who is staring at geet … but he has a competition over there in form of yash …

Yash is also now staring at geet … all of sudden geet raises her head & finds Maan in front of her & staring at her …

Maan's staring ends over there & he starts looking every where other than where geet is … then all of sudden his eyes fall on Yash who is still staring at geet & checking her out … maan is angry that some one else is also staring at geet …. His geet … maan ki geet ….

Bcoz staring at geet is Maan's birth right … Not any body elses …. how dare yash stares at geet … & now yash is moving towards Geet … maan acts quickly … Maan walks back to his cabin … bangs the door open in anger …

Maan to himself – "yeh yash tho Geet kae peechae hi padh gaya hain … geet sae baath karni hi padegi …"

Maan walks to his intercom … picks up the phone to call geet …

Romeo – helloo …

Maan – helloo … geet ko andhar baejo … mere cabin main … abhi isi waqt …

Romeo – ji sir …

Maan & Romeo both hang their respective phones … yash reaches where Geet is …

Romeo – geet … maan sir tumhe andhar bula rahen hain … urgent …

Geet – mujhe …

Romeo – haan …

Geet on her way to maan's room ….

Geet to herself –"main subah sae kaise bhi kar kae unsae dur rahi … par ab main unsae kaise dur rahun … wo mujhae apne paas bula rahen hain … main kya karun … kaise unsae dur rahoon … unkae paas jaane ki himmat nahin ho rahin hain mujhae … "

After Geet leaves …. yash too walks back to his cabin …

Yash to himself –"tumhe kya hogaya … yash… tum geet ko aise kyun dekh rahen ho … tum janthe ho naa ki geet aur maan ek dusrae sae pyar karthae hain … phir bhi … yash … geet ko apni dill sae nikal do … waise bhi geet maan sae pyar karthi hain … "

"Main kya karun main apne aap ko rok hi nahin paa rahan hun … geet hain hi aisi … ki kisi ko bhi usse pyar ho sakhtha hain …. par try karunga …"

Geet is outside maan's cabin ….

Geet – sir … may I come in ...

Maan – yes … geet … come in …

Geet enters maan's cabin …. Maan asks geet to have a seat … geet too takes her seat …

While the conversation is on … Maan moves towards geet …

Maan – geet tum meera kae ghar move ho jao ….

Geet – kya … meera kae ghar …

Maan – haan meera kae ghar …

Geet – par mujhae yash kae ghar main rehna padega … maine yash ko promise kiya tha …

Maan – yash … yash … yash … yeh yash kabse important ho gaya geet tumhare liyae …

Geet – yash … mere liye important nahin hain … samjhe aap … mere liye aap …

(geet stops her sentence in between does not complete it ….)

Maan – rukh kyun gayi geet … tumhare liya kaun important hain …

Geet is now trying to get up from the chair … while saying this …

Geet – kuch nahin bolna hain mujhe … mujhe jaane dijiye …

Maan grills geet to the chair now …. Not allowing her to move he has his hands over the chairs hands … & he is bending over geet …. & they both are now looking into each other's deep eyes …

Maan – tum kahin nahin jaaogi …

Maan - mere baath abhi complete nahin hui hain …

Geet – aap ko jo baath karni hain jaldi sae kariye … mujhae jaana hain …

Maan – geet yahan boss main hun …

Geet – bae shakh aap boss hain … yeh main janthi hun … par mujhae bhi bahar daer saara kaam hain … agar nahin karungi tho nuksaan aap ka office ka hi hoga na … tho mujhae jaane dijiye …

Maan – tumhe office ki nuksaan ki padi hain …

Geet – office ki nuksaan hua tho iss main aap hi ki nuksaan hogi naa …

Maan – main office ki nahin … hum dono kae baaren main baath kar rahan hun geet …

Geet – hum dono ….

Maan – haan hum dono …

Maan reduced his voice & is talking to her in a softer tone now … both their voices have changed now … & are talking to each other with pain & regret …

Maan – kya tumhe mujhsae kuch baath nahin karni hain … hamare baaren main …

Geet softly – baath karni tho hain … par himmat nahin jodh paa rahin hun … aap sae baath karnae kae liyae …

Maan trying to make her feel light….

Maan – Ms. Hoshiarpur Express ko Himmat ki kami kab sae hogayi hain …

Geet – nahin … aisi baath nahin hain … wo baath yeh hain ki …

Geet – aap … aap mujhae maaf kar dijiye ….

Maan – maafi …

Geet – haan …. Maafi …

Maan – maafi … tho mujhae maangni hain geet tumsae …

Geet – nahin … galti meri thi … bina soche … bina samjhae …. Maine jo kiya … maine aap ki bae zzatti ki sab kae samnae … mujhae aise nahin karna tha.

Maan – nahin geet … maine uss din gussae main tumhare saath jo kiya wo ghalat tha … mujhae bhi apne gusse ko kaaboo main rakhna tha … aur tumhara sawalon ka mujhae jawab daena chahiye tha … par maine nahin diya.

Geet – aapko gussa bhi tho maine hi dilayi thi naa … agar main aap ko gussa nahin dilathi aur apna aapa nahin khothi aur aap ka baath sunthi …. Tho aaj yeh sab nahin hota ….

ek baar bhi aap ko mauka nahin diya … ki aap … aap ki baath ko mujhae samjhane kae liyae … aap nae kithna koshish kiya …. Par maine wo sab nazar andaz kar diya … maine aap kae upar … aap kae upar shakh kiya..

Jo insaan hamesha khud sae pehlae meri baaren main sochtha hain … aise insaan kae upar shakh kiya maine … mujhae kam sae kam aap ki baath sun tho leni chahiye thi …. par maine aise nahin kiya … aap ko bolnae ka mauka bhi nahin diya maine ….

Geet in full tears now …. - Maine jo kiya wo maafi kae laayak tho nahin hain … phir bhi main aap sae maafi maang rahin hun …. Ho sakey tho mujhae maaf kar dijiye …

Maan wiping off geet's tears …. – hamare saath jo kuch bhi hua … ismae galthi sirf tumharae akeli ki hi nahin hain … meri bhi galthi hain … uss waqt haalat hi kuch aise thae …

Tumhara shakh karna jaayaz tha geet …. Tumhara saath jo kuch bhi hua uskae baad tum bahut mushkil sae kisi kae upar bharosa kar payi ho geet … Aur uss din jo hua uss kae baad tumhae dhakka laga … aur tumhein laga ki tumhara bharosa toot gaya …. tho shakh tho karogi naa … mujhae tumhara shakh dur karna tha … joki maine nahin kiya …. Mujhae tumhein samjana tha par maine samjhaya nahin …

Geet – agar aap mera shakh dur nahin kar paye tho … mujhe tho samajh na tha na ki aap nae mera shakh kyun nahin dur kar paye ….

Geet - Aap chahthae thae ki main aap ko samjhu … aap ki iraadon ko samjhu par maine aap ko samjha nahin … mujhae aap kae bina kahen aap ki baath samajh na chahiye tha … par main aap ko samjhi nahin … main aap ki pyar ki layak nahin hun …

Maan – nahin geet … kisnae kahan ki tum mere pyar kae layak nahin ho … tumhare jagah pae koi bhi hota wo bhi aise hi karthae …. Agar tumhare jagah pae main hota tho main bhi wohi kartha jo tumnae kiya …

Geet – yeh tho aapka badappan hain …

Maan is now on his knees …

Maan – geet tum bhi mujhae maaf kardo ….

Maan still on his knees … keeps his head on geet's lap …. & coils his hands around her waist … both of them spend like couple of minutes in that posture.

After some time … Geet raises maan's head with both her hands …. Geet too kneels down now …

Geet – pehlae aap mujhae maaf kar dijiye …

Maan makes geet get up … & he too gets up …

Maan – teek hain … maaf kar diya …. Aur tum … tumnae maaf kiya ki nahin.

Geet – aap nae galthi kiya hi nahin … tho maafi kis baath ki maang rahen hain …

Maan – geet jab tak tum mujhae maaf nahin karogi … mujahe chain nahin milega ….

Geet – teek hain … aap kae liyae … maaf kardiya …

Maan – chalo jo kuch bhi hua … ab hum uss kae baaren main aur baath nahin karengae … samjhi tum ….

Geet – hmmm …..

Maan – geet …. Kya tum ab bhi mujhsae shadi karna chahthi ho …

Geet feeling shy ….. nodding her head …

Maan – maine suna nahin geet …. Haan ki naa …

Geet – haan …

Maan – teek hain … main dadima sae hamari shadi ki baath kartha hun … ab tho tum yash kae ghar sae move ho jao gi naa …

Geet – aap ki sui … abhi bhi yash pae atki hain ….

Maan – bolo naa … geet … move hogi naa …

Geet - par maine uss waqt …. Yash ko wada kiya tha … main wada kaise thod sakhthi hun …

Geet tells maan about the promise she made to yash while maan was in the hospital … that if yash gives her maan's room number … she will work for him.

Maan – tum isi liye uss kae saath kaam kar rahin ho mere liyae …

Geet – haan … aur nahin tho kya …

Maan – oh geet …

Maan hugs her tight … geet too reciprocates the hug … they both have a very passionate hug … after some time they both come out of the hug ….

Maan then promises geet that he will convince yash & relieve her from that promise she made to yash …. They both go to meet yash … yash agrees to maan's conditions & relieves geet off her duties at his home & malhotra industies too.

Maan convinces dadima for their marriage & they both get married … while Dev & Nayan Tara both rot in jail …

Maan & Geet are happily married … & live happily ever after with their kids …

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My Sincere Thank you to all of you dear friends for reading my FF … This is the last part … So please enjoy & leave your beautiful comments behind … Luv you all for giving me encouragement to write … if not for all of your inspiring comments … I would not have come so far … press the like button if you like the update … Thank you once again for bearing me & my FF …

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Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice ending at last dev and naintara meet their faith
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Maan's staring ends over there & he starts looking every where other than where geet is … then all of sudden his eyes fall on Yash who is still staring at geet & checking her out … maan is angry that some one else is also staring at geet …. His geet … maan ki geet ….

Bcoz staring at geet is Maan's birth right … Not any body elses …. how dare yash stares at geet … & now yash is moving towards Geet … maan acts quickly … Maan walks back to his cabin … bangs the door open in anger …

di these are my most fav lines.... loved it di... esplly Staring Geet is Maan's birthrite is more more apt as always..

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