SS - Geet-HOGI PYAR KI JEET last part(pg24)updtd - Page 14

Nice story.....u should continue your version....no need to stop it due to the current track....your story is different from the actual track from the very beginning...so it shouldn't get effected by the serial.....pls do continue and update soon.....will be waiting to see Geet's reaction on seeing Maan(I mean the new boss,obviously 😆).....😛

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Originally posted by: maangeet3

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sorry for the delay friends ... sorry to keep u all waiting ... plz forgive me for the delay ... hope u all like this update ... do let me know how u like it ... if u had liked it or not ...

Part 5 :-

We have already seen that … The new partner enters the party hall along with Yash …

Now The new partner's eyes are searching for some one … & finally his eyes go & stop on that 1 person … but he could not get a glimpse of that 1 person's face whom he is dying to see ….

He is so desperate to see that person's face … that we can see the restlessness on the new partner's face … all he could see is her shiny black velvety long hair laying on her back & that she is in a pale blue saree …

He is looking at Geet's back … & just wanted to have a glimpse of that beautiful face … he is so lost in her … that he has not noticed yash calling him.

Yash – Mr.Maan … Mr. Maan … Mr. Maan …

Maan – haan …

Yash – kya hua … kahan kho gaye aap …

Maan – kuch nahin …

In the mean while geet too senses that Maan might be some where around as she got the feeling that he is close to her … the same feeling she always has when ever maan is close to her ….

Maan was about to walk to that side of the hall where geet was standing … but …. yash comes in between …

Yash – tho chalein …

Maan – kahan …

Yash - chaliye main aapko hamare board of directors' sae milwata hun …

Maan did not want to go with yash … But decided to go with him as he had to meet the BOD's …

Maan – haan …. Let's go ….

Geet turns around to see if Maan is there … but just before geet turns yash & Maan leave from that spot ….

Geet to herself – "oye … geet tujhe aisa kyun laga ki maan aye hongae … wo bhala idhar kyun aayengae … wo tumsae thodi milna chahthae hongae … "

Geet again to herself - "kyun nahin milna chahthae hongae … jaroor chahthae hain …."

Yash & Maan both go near the BOD's … & Yash intoduces Maan to all of them … as the major share holder with 65 % investment in the company .

Yash – gentlemen … please meet Mr. Maan Singh Khurana …

All the Bod's one by one giving hand shake to maan & saying hello to him…

Bod's – hello … Mr. Maan Singh Khurana …

Maan – hello …

Yash – aap sab Mr.Maan Singh Khurana sae baath kariye main abhi aatha hun …

Maan – yash where are you going …

Yash – I will be right back Mr. Maan & Gentlemen … Please excuse me ….

Maan is searching for geet again … while the BOD's are talking to him … maan now sees that Yash is near Geet & he is talking to Geet …

Bod's – we heard a lot about you Mr. Maan … finally we got to meet you … pleased to meet you Mr.Maan …

Maan – thank you … same here …

Maan looks so lost in Yash & Geet's conversation … that he is not paying any attention to what the BOD's are talking to him … he is just answering to their questions in a plain Yes & No …

While Maan's whole concentration is on Geet & yash & wondering what their conversation would be … maan did not like Yash behaving so close to Geet …

Yash is behaving as if he knows Geet since a long time … This simple thought is irritating Maan …. That some one is talking to her …. Being close to her … being nice to her … & on top of that as if it is not enough Maan remembers that …. right now Geet is living in Yash's house too …

Maan to himself –"maan tumhein kya hua hain … geet pehlae bhi Adi sae … office kae staff sae baath karthi thi … tab tho tumhein kabhi aise nahin laga … now what happened Maan … why are you feeling jealous …"

Imaginary Maan - "tab baath alag thi … ab baath alag hain …. "

Maan - "Alag kyun hain … "

Imaginary Maan – "kyun ki abhi tum dono ka jagda hua hain … aur geet tumsae dur hogayi isi liyae …"

Maan – "agar jagda hua hain … tho sulah bhi tho ho sakhtha hain … dur hogayi tho kya hua … paas aa jayegi … wo kithna din mujhsae dur reh payegi yeh main bhi jantha hun …"

Imaginary Maan – "haan ho sakhtha hain … Par kya wo ziddi tumsae baath karegi …"

Maan –"agar baath nahin karegi tho main usse baath karwaungaa …"

Imaginary Maan –"teek hain … phir jaao…"

He justs wants to go away from the BOD's … & go & just grab geet by her hand & take her away from the party … take her along with him …. Where they both can spend some time … & sort out their differences ….

Maan to himself –"geet sae baath karni padegi …"

Maan excuses himself from the BOD's … He walks towards geet … while geet is still having her back to maan & yash & geet's conversation continues … maan is very close to geet … maan in his thoughts while going close to geet …

Maan to himself –"nahin main geet kae paas nahin jaa unga … main yeh dekhungaa ki wo mujhae miss karthi hain ki nahin …. Mujhae mehsoos karthi hain ki nahin …"

Geet just feels that maan is behind her & turns …. But does not find maan …. Maan hides behind a pillar as soon as he notices that geet was about to turn...

Geet to herself – "mujhe aise kyun laga ki maan yahan pae hain … geet tu pagal hogayi hain … unkae khayalon main hi jee rahin hain tu … jab dekho tab maan maan … tu hain ki unkae baaren main ithna soch rahin hain … par kya wo tere baaren main soch rahen hain …"

Maan is sitting near the Bar now … & watching Geet but makes it a point that geet cannot see him …

Bar tender – sir … aap ko kya chahiye …

Maan – haan … haan … orange juice ….

Bar Tender – orange juice …

Maan – haan … suna nahin …

Bar tender – jee sir … suna …. Abhi daetha hun …

The bar tender now serves Maan orange juice … Maan is still watching geet & Yash... thinking to himself that Geet is looking ravishing in that Blue saree … but he is unable to tolerate yash near Geet …. Not when she is looking so beautiful …

Yash – Geet … kya tum mera dost banogi …

Geet – dost …

Yash – haan … dost … any how ab hum dono saath main kaam tho karne hi wale hain … tho agar dost ho jaye tho acha hogana …

Geet to herself –"dost hi tho hain geet .. adi sir … pinky sab bhi tho tumhare dost hain … tho ab yash sae dosti karnae main kya problem hain."

Yash puts his hand forward so that he can give Geet a Hand shake …. Maan is holding the glass in his right hand … Maan is watching all what is happening in between them … but decides not to go over there …

Geet – teek hain …

Maan is now watching that geet forwarded her hand to shake hands with yash … maan's anger is raising … he is unable to see geet shaking her hand with yash … he is so angry that he breaks the glass in his hand … geet hears that some thing broke very close to her …

Geet turns quickly in that direction to see what happened … and sees a glimpse of maan's face …

Geet cannot believe her eyes – maan yahan …

Geet decides to go over there … but the manager comes over there & asks her if every thing is under control … by the time geet answers the manager … Maan leaves that spot ….

Geet to herself –"tu pagal ho gayi hain geet … tujhae sirf maan hi maan dikh rahen hain … wo bhala yahan kyun ayengae iss party main … "

Maan's hand is bleeding … but Maan does not care that his hand is bleeding as he is lost in geet's thoughts …

Maan to himself – "Geet nae yash kae saath sirf hand shake kiya hain … tumhe gussa kyun aa rahan hain … ithna gussa aya ki glass hi thod diya …"

Yash - Geet chalo main tumhein naye partner sae milwata hun …

Yash searches for Maan … culd not find him close to where they are …

Yash – geet main abhi aatha hun …

Geet – teek hain …

Yash finds maan … Yash & maan are coming near geet … Geet is busy checking the food items … maan could see geet's back …

Yash – geet … dekho kaun hain …

Geet turns her head & is in for a shock as she sees maan …

Geet – maan …

Yash – haan … geet … Mr. Maan ….Mr. Maan hi tumhara naya boss hain …

Geet – maan … naya boss …

Yash - BTW … there is no need for me to introduce you to each other as you both know each other so well ….

Yash excuses himself from there & goes away from there …. Leaving them both alone …

Geet – maan … aap yahan …

Yash then requests every one to come on to the dance floor & enjoy their time …

Maan – haan … geet … jinke manzil ek hothe hain … unke raasthe bhi mil jaathae hain … kahin bhi … kabhi bhi … hain ki nahin …

Geet was about to answer maan but Yash comes back to where geet & maan are … Yash extended his right hand in front of Geet …

Yash - May I have the pleasure to dance with the lady …

Geet turns around to see whom yash is talking but finds no one around her …

Yash – geet main tumse poonch rahan hun …

Geet – mujhsae ….

Yash – haan …

While yash was about to finish his sentence … Maan grabs Geet's hands …

Yash - tum sae …

Maan – sorry … yash … you are late … she's already taken …

Yash shrugs his shoulders …

Yash – never mind … Mr. Maan …

Maan takes geet to the dance floor …. geet feels that her hands are wet & sticky … this is due to maan's hand … as it was bleeding … the blood gets stuck to geet's hand too … geet tries to look at maan's hand … but they both start dancing to the music … while they both are dancing … geet notices that maan's hand is still bleeding … while they both were still dancing …

Geet to herself – "maan … kae haath sae khoon aa rahan hain … par kaise … she then thinks ... tho uss waqt mujhe jo glass ki tutne ki awaq aayi thi tho wo maan kae haath sae tuta … udhar maan thae …."

After the music finishes … maan takes geet outside in the garden.

Awesome yaar!

that was just awesome update....really loved it...

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