awwwwwwwwww Sammy! A wonderful part once again!!!
Maan is such a sweetheart!!! And Maaneet are just adorable!
I loved the wedding you've written out for them. How perfect and heartwarming! I've literally been "awwww"-ing throughout both parts in this thread.. and once again awwwwwww!
So, Maaneet are officially married? Gosh, its funny to think of their initial meeting and then this union.. lol ya know what, it is sad that you're bringing this ff to an end, but I tell you what it aint ever gonna end for me - heck not until I stop re-reading previous parts and what not lol its always gonna be here, so it'll always be enjoyed!! Also, I trust the way you'll be wrapping it up and Hope and wish and am threatening you to start a new one super soon!!! (...plzzzzzzz?)
For now though... I let you know that the care you've shown Maan to have for Geet is truly something special.
I loved this moment So much in chap.34:
'Your already sharing your tears with me' he whispered, 'and I'm still here, waiting for you'.
hayyye, this fictitious character makes my heart feel all gooey inside!
and also, LOVED Geet's mention to Maan not to shave his stubble hehehe - that'd defo be a request i'd share too ;)
Lovely Lovely Lovelyyyy updates!! xxxxxxxxxxxxmwah!
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I read the last update on ur previous thread + of course left a comment there too, before I popped by this thread... just thought i'd paste the comment here as well 😉
awwwwwwwwwwwww you cow!!! u made me cry again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
How do you do it?? That was so beautiful!
Even during such harsh circumstances, u slip in the humour though. I'm shaking my head of course in amusement, its really cute lol I read this twice over - cos I felt like it ok! I'd been off IF for a week, and suddenly when I come back i'm treated with 3 updates from ur ff and I wanna take in the parts slowly, even though I wanna rush to the next one like straight away!!!
The starting scene with Geet on the bed, truthfully speaking, was just unbearable. Sam that wasnt cool. Her struggle, and Maan's pain at watching her like that... aww :(
"Her blurred vision could not prevent her sight from overlooking the splendors of natures divinity. A gasp of awe escaped from her lips as she looked at the flowers scattered around the grassy lawn. "
You know when something awes / overwhlems you so much, that's literally all u can do.. ^^ that's how I felt when I read your update... You don't leave me with much to say. It's difficult to pen down the beauty of nature, and all my words fall short when I wanna tell u how brilliant you are as a writer.
The part was So touching. Such Lovely work Again hun!!
*big hug!*
Saz
xxx
Edited by Chotii - 14 years ago
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