FF: IRREVOCABLY YOURS #3 The End Chapter P. 17 M&G

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

again...jst WOW...!!! only WOW...!!! m speechless...........u made my nite...:)

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Trisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

that was honestly a magical update!!!

haiiiiiii - onli in my dreams can i imagine such a dreamlike wedding - hahah the house - yh wen u mentioned it a few updates back i had a feeling it wud be maan's idea!!!!! lool

awwwwwww hes soooo sweet

ooooooo man ur gna end it soon

ermmmmm okkkk but onli on one condition - if u write another soon

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shruthiR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Thank you for a long update😊

That was a beautiful and very touching chp.Maan surely did make sure that Geet had a fairy-tale experience making it a day she'll never forget.He fulfilled all her wishes,how much more loving could one get?Looking forward to the next chp so pls update soon.

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

every good thing comes to an end hope to see more of ur work in a new FF.

It's a great feeling when all wishes are fullfilled by ur loved one......

beautifull

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

I had so much trouble coming to pg 7...!!!! 😡 But all my attempts were worth at last...!!!😳

I literally started crying when Pinky told geet that Maan wished her to walk on her own and the tears didnt stop...😭😭😭 The music adding to my sadness....!!!!🤢

I have heard that when all the wishes are fulfilled, one is ready to die....I hope you are not going to write something as gory as Geet's death....🤢🤢🤢

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Hey Samira,

I know it's really late of me...to comment on your FF when it's nearing its end....I thought of posting a comment but then till that time...you would have updated your next chap ! So I felt I'll be able to comment only when this FF ends...but my good luck I can comment today !

Coming to your story....I'm in love with it...gosh its unimaginable...the loss of loving someone dear is too hurting....I really don't wanna experience it and that to too soon !
You've pictured the whole plot beautifully .....the characterization and everything is awesome !

And what I really loved was the CONCEPT it is Awesome....I've read so many FF's but none like this....and the way you've described is more beautiful ! 👏 loved it the you took out the pain that the person suffering from Cancer...it touched my heart....and condolence from my side...I'm so sorry I read you dad passed away due to Cancer...Hope his soul rests in peace !

Coming to the current update it was marvelous ! The whole wedding was ethereal and the confession ...I'm speechless...truly Geet's condition is heart-wrenching but then I'm really happy she has Maan by her....love is really a great support !! I had tears of both joy and sorrow reading this update !

I can't say more ......All the Best !!

Take Care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Geet Malhotra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

OMG this is just stupendous! :-O

i loved it. the house! WOW! i wish i could have someone do things like that for me. <3 :)

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princess14

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

wow what a dreamy wedding!! very well written!! love it even more!

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

That was stupendous! It was brilliantly written.....just perfect! Awesome wedding.....his fulfilling her wishes.....mind-blowing! Do continue soon.

Ending the FF......that's sad......but then all good things do come to an end.....hope you will come up with another one.....lolz.....

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she_ratchet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Sammy🤗

For within this chapter I have no words. All I can mustur to say is W-O-W.😃 Are you brilliant or what? Your FF is probably the most real and true FF I have ever read! The way you describe feelings and emotions and everything else is just pure and amazing....😳 Thischapter was romantically emotional. Why emotional? Because of Maan's every word , action, and step towards Geet. I don't think there would be such a caring husband anyhow!😳 His last words-" I read your diary-and from that day on, I want to fulfill your every wish." All that came out of my mouth was"Awwwwwww!Why can't I have Maan?😳🤣" The song clips were beautiful. 😳 They suited the chapter very well! After I read this chapter the song " Tere Hona Laga Hoon" is going in my head.🤣😳 I mean seriously man ...Maan loves Geet like anything. 😳Awwww..Your going to end this FF.😔 For me this is good news and bad. Bad because I am going to miss it alot!!!!!! I absolutely love it and its my top top top favorite!🤗 Good news becase I am very much delighted that two lovebirds became one at last!😳😃 I am gonna miss it but atleast it will have a good ending.😊 I love your FF alot Sammy and I am hoping that you start a new one!🤣🤣 I am KIDDING ...You deserve a lonnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggg break.🤣 So until the next update Mrs. Phuranna,😳 Bye!🤗

Mrs.JaySean

AkA

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