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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur
Natasha...I can't believe i missed your PM about this FF😃😃

It was awesome and wonderful...a secret crush huh??😉😉 Do write Arjun's POV also😃😃

It was lovely and do update soon okies😃😃 and continue PMing me😃

Awwie Amy !! i am so happy you liked it !! will update soon and will keep PMming you !!
Natasha

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -sibgha-
n tashu continue kab kar rae ho😆

Very soon Beta ji !!😆

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

^^^Credit Liana😳

As I went down wearing my favourite Chanel slippers , I dont why I always loved wearing them around, specially when Arjun's around. Another factor they were waterproof.Or maybe the inspiration of being happy came from the red hearts on the slippers. Well thats what i call my self. So totally random.I took the ball with My favouite Pink umberella with typical girly designs. i rushed down to the Playground walking steadily towards him my heartbeats increasing with each passing step.I kept crushing the ball to my right waist but then slowly left as i feared it would burst. With one hand i forwarded the ball to Give it to him and by that time take glances at Him. It seemed so typically romantic .A boy and a Girl. In the rain. Well continuing my staring session at me he too kept his hand forward to reach out the ball . when he took the ball Mistakely or puposely i suppose so , he tried brushing our hands, in which he was sucessful.I looked at him which was my immediate reaction into his eyes. my hand hurt a bit and i glanced down to look at a small scratch.He too looked at my hand where i took intrest rather than looking at him. i found out he had this girly type bracelet which i guess had to be his sisters whom he misses , which was the reason i got scratched. he quickly collected a few drops of raindrops in his left palm and dropped the ball. With his right hand fingers he slowly dapped the water on my hand where i had been scratched. It wasnt any major hurt nor blood driped. It was simple tiny scratch and he cared so much for me. I couldnt help staring at him. As the scratch disappeared he ran back to get the ball and we both headed towards the lift. I shut my Umbrela as soon as I entered the lift and some very tiny droplets were spread across the lift. I pressed 1 and he Pressed 2. He lived right above me. The doors shut and we were alone. We were midway first floor when the Lift stopped working. The lights went off and so did the fan. I wasnt afraid of the dark but Arjun was. What Dramatic thoughts i was having that time. I wished to be afraid of the dark and hold on to hi wet tee and sound like the typical girly"Everything will be Fine na, Arjun". But i guess it was role reversal here.He clutched my hand tightly and i could feel his Axe deo. Woah what a strong deo. It even last after a strong shower of rain. The lift room started becoming hot (Maybe because of the Proximity) and claustrophobic. He held my hand even more tighter. At one point i too was scared. But i had to be strong. I reached the intercom in the lift with Arjun acting like a total baby to call the security about us being stuck in the lift. To add to the bad luck the intercom too wasnt working.And Arjun got more scared. I rather felt Arjun my son rather a crush who woud behave manly and break open the lift. I had to wait in this lift till someone realised were stuck. Not that i minded😉

Okay Guys thats it. I dont Know if it was Long or short . Criticisms is warmly Welcomed . New Ideas of Particular scenes or dialogues are accepted.Well i have commented each one Individually and found most people keeping Nick names. Thanks a ton !!Please do comment if you really felt it was good or atleast press the like Tab.Hope i have lived up to your expectations.

Natasha

Edited by -ArTiMaNiAc- - 14 years ago

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Sibgha

@mayur5eva

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: -ArTiMaNiAc-
Very soon Beta ji !!😆

beta kis ko kaha😡😆
n sorry for spamming your thread😆

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -sibgha-
beta kis ko kaha😡😆
n sorry for spamming your thread😆

No Prob !!😆😆 aako beta kaha😆I am updating !!😳

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Sibgha

@mayur5eva

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -ArTiMaNiAc-
No Prob !!😆😆 aako beta kaha😆I am updating !!😳

finally but abhi mujey jana ha mom is calling😭😆but pm kar dena i'll read afterwards😳

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: -sibgha-
finally but abhi mujey jana ha mom is calling😭😆but pm kar dena i'll read afterwards😳

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496867

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

natshu..my lal tamatar🤗
wow u o.l & no don't even visit cc & or forum to talk to us

very bad bachi

okay res

i'l read the ff & comment soon😛

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

*Edited*

Oh, I see a lot of potential in you Nuts! You're an amazing writer in the making. Keep up the good work, and provide us with longer updates the next time.

BTW - locked in the lift?! Waah! 😆

-Kankshita

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Lols...Nats....even I don't mind them in the lift alone😆😆😉😉

I hope i can cal you Nats😃 Natasha is a lovely name...but it is too long to type😆😆

Lovely part...but too short😭😭

Arjun seems to care a lot about Rati(In the story and in real life as well😉😉)...he dabbed water on her hand for such a small scratch...lols...sweetness, really😃😃

Well I want to know what goes on in the lift😉...so please update soon okies😃 And please, please, pleasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee do write a longer part😃😃
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